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 Sep 23 2004, 02:12 AM
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 What the fack.  Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519  |
Face Covered With Tears
So many words I can't express As this insanity finally brings me to rest Why did we have to lose it all? Now no one is there to witness me fall All is lost And never to return Forever these held back tears Will internally burn Struck with this internal conflict That just doesn’t have an answer This doubt plagues my mind Spreading throughout my body like a cancer All that I’ve hoped for Has hastily been taken away So many things I’ve wished for Just to end up crying, nothing to say If you really cared and knew Then maybe you’d see All the bruises, scars, and cuts Carved oh so deeply within me Friends are lost And now I don’t care Why should I think of them? When for me, they were never there So go to hell And rot within your pleasures For I will never forget That this pain is to stay with me forever Go and leave me here For I will not surrender to your lies I will not sit and wait for you to come around Just looking at you, burns my eyes Left alone once again I guess I always knew It’d be like this in the end I just wished that it wouldn’t be with you Lost without hope Saddened without fear Don’t turn back to bother and check up on me For you wouldn’t even recognize this face covered with tears Just finished posting this on my xanga. Hope you enjoy. |
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Sep 23 2004, 08:42 AM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
wow lovely poem... has deep meaning =P
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Sep 23 2004, 10:38 AM
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thats so..
meaning-ful  ..and sad 
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Sep 23 2004, 01:22 PM
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 I can't believe its not "Ryan" Group: Member Posts: 1,981 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,368 |
*wipes tears*
Ooops...I wasnt crying..hehe! I loved the work! keep it up |
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Sep 23 2004, 05:01 PM
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What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
Aww, thanks guys. That means a lot.
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Sep 23 2004, 05:53 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
i say keep writing =P!!!
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