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Obsessed, my poem =P
rainnydaiis
post Sep 15 2004, 09:18 PM
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I just wrote it when i was bored so bare with me and hope you enjoy it

I wake up every mornning seeing your face
every detail so clear no area out of place
brushing my teeth i see you near me
in the mirror that is all i can see
when working you occupy my mind
without notice time flys by
i eat dinner hoping you were there
the time to eat and a time to share
praying everynight that you'll be with me
but yet this prayer is still free
i start my day like this all the time
and alwayz ending the day hoping you will be mine

ENJOY~!!!
 
WhiteLotus*
post Sep 16 2004, 12:10 AM
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That is a cute poem! I like it! happy.gif
 
rainnydaiis
post Sep 16 2004, 08:41 AM
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thank you White Lotus and Ashley is nothing but a big fat liar =P
 
lucky_clover
post Oct 5 2004, 05:45 PM
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CUTE! CUTE! CUTE! awsome work.
 
ashesinthefall
post Oct 5 2004, 09:56 PM
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i like it
 

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