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 Jul 11 2008, 06:20 PM
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 <(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)>  Group: Official Member Posts: 2,295 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621  |
a friend asked me to make a banner for her featuring Incubus (our favorite band) and i did, but i feel it's missing something.
thoughts/critiques/ideas/suggestions, please. so i finally got around to fixing this... still not too happy about it but my friend loved it, so here it is: |
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Jul 11 2008, 06:59 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 2,210 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 579,129 |
Uhm, IMO, it just looks too simple.
I'd play around with the background. I like the polaroids, though. |
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Jul 11 2008, 07:03 PM
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 DDR \\ I'm Dee :) Group: Mentor Posts: 15,436 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 384,020 |
The images seem a bit blurry. Maybe sharpen those up a bit. The grungy lines seem a little cliche to me. I like it, though, but it is a bit simple.
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Jul 11 2008, 08:43 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,408 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413 |
The only thing wrong with it is that its too simple.. but i like it
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Jul 11 2008, 08:44 PM
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 Pyromaniac Group: Official Member Posts: 1,410 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,380 |
QUOTE(dosomethin888 @ Jul 11 2008, 09:43 PM)  The only thing wrong with it is that its too simple.. but i like it
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Jul 11 2008, 08:49 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 5,079 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
I like it so far
but i would add maybe some brushes around the poloroids. Thats just my opinion |
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Jul 11 2008, 10:24 PM
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QUOTE(dosomethin888 @ Jul 12 2008, 03:43 AM) The only thing wrong with it is that its too simple Yes, she realizes this. Hmmmmmm. Possibly add another picture? A brush maybe? |
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Jul 12 2008, 01:22 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 126 Joined: Apr 2008 Member No: 643,801 |
The way you did the pictures is cool. but you should do something to make it more readable and maybe move the words to another place... it seems out of balance?
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Jul 12 2008, 04:02 PM
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 (Allison) Group: Human Posts: 517 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 395,668 |
Anything with Brandon Boyd and Mike Einziger is perfect.
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Jul 12 2008, 10:07 PM
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 <joke> inside </joke> Group: Official Member Posts: 3,853 Joined: Oct 2006 Member No: 470,590 |
i think it's perfectly readable 0.o
basically what everybody else said =] but i kinda like the simplicity... |
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Jul 12 2008, 11:03 PM
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 im with the marching band Group: Member Posts: 893 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
i like it.
nice choice of colors. how did you do that background? i dont really like the font though. |
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Jul 12 2008, 11:35 PM
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 Jooleeah <3 Group: Official Designer Posts: 716 Joined: Jun 2008 Member No: 662,481 |
Hmm...the font is kind of ugly and the pictures could be sharper.
Try some orbs of light or decorative brushes over/around the polaroids. Also play around with textures for the background. It doesn't look bad though. I kind of like it. 
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Jul 14 2008, 08:54 AM
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<(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)> Group: Official Member Posts: 2,295 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621 |
thank you all for the feedback, i really appreciate it!
 i'm not too big on the font either... so i'll be changing that. & i will be sure to sharpen up the pics a bit as well. personally, i like simple but this just seems too simple, so i will be adding another picture and maybe some color effects of some sort...  QUOTE(crueldade @ Jul 12 2008, 05:02 PM) Anything with Brandon Boyd and Mike Einziger is perfect.    QUOTE(speakerboxx123 @ Jul 13 2008, 12:03 AM) how did you do that background? i learned how to do that by mistake... my method is kind of weird, so i suggest either of the following:Tutorial #1 or Tutorial #2 |
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