Hidden, A poem by meh.. |
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 Jun 15 2004, 03:14 PM
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 What the fack.  Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519  |
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I kept a smile on my face And wore it as a disguise Even though I felt out of place It was myself, whom I despised I gave my heart away too easily Jut to pick it back up in a million pieces The past is done and that won't change it's impossible to undo the paper's creases I'm lost in the darkness Of my own lies Only wearing joy and happiness for the true emotions, which I am forced to hide In my mind I've created a world To escape from the harsh truths of reality Where there remained this lonely girl Who could only hope it was all a nightmare-like fantasy She'll await for an embrace Which can eternally keep her warm From which she'll have an eternal sun To break through the storm.. This is one of my earlier poems.. 
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Jun 15 2004, 04:33 PM
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What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
*Feel so lonleh*
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| *Kathleen* |
Jun 15 2004, 07:47 PM
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Wow...honestly, you seem to be one of the better writers here at createblog. It's funny how beautiful sad things can be.
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Jul 20 2005, 12:51 AM
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I LOVEEEDD IT...I feel like I felt what you felt...I'm always feeling I disguise myself & hiding myself from the truth..always bein scared that someone will find out who I am before I do...
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Jul 25 2005, 08:52 PM
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 Beautifully Broken Group: Member Posts: 45 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 64,542 |
That was one of the best poems I have read. Amazing.
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