Broken Romance |
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 Apr 4 2007, 04:02 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
The romance that is there. The romance that exists. The romance that can never be…because two hearts are afraid to be amorously involved with one another. So instead they play coy knowing that nothing would make them happier than to be together. Yet the thought of this is also a source of fear for one of those hearts. And that heart is torn between two. The indecisiveness, the delay, the wait. These issues are hard to deal with, yet the other heart is patiently waiting…always waiting. Waiting in silent diction, never forcing, never pushing, never fighting, but always waiting…always standing behind the veil of shadow awaiting the liberation that comes with light.
Edit:// changed the 2 to two |
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Apr 5 2007, 03:58 PM
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 peace&love, earth flower Group: Member Posts: 651 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 398,938 |
So true.
 This may just be me, but seeing the number 2 there kind of ruined the mood for me. But I'm a freak and you're a geat writer anyways! |
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Apr 5 2007, 11:05 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
lol thanks for noticing that. it irks me too, but i guess i was typin it a bit fast. thanks though.
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