If I...., old writing. Options

[*T0rmented_Soul*]

i dont know what to say everything is just to real
my life and my pride and the feelings that i feel
but what does it take to get you to notice me
despite of the fact of all the people i already envy

im broken down i dont know what to do
im living life in these cold streets a life without you
but still I, hold on and wish for a day
and still I, hold on just to be swept away

if i could close my eyes and hold you near
if i could fly on these wings to bring you here
if i have just one wish ill wish this to you
i wish i could hold you and love you, and to be next to you

but things are too late you've already stepped out of my life
dead and gone im at my wrist holding this knife
im going suicide this life I dont care
if your not here to share it, then why should i care

im going crazy just thinking of you
how and what went wrong, why is this burden on me
just let me go, im already lost with nothing to do
I've suffered enough drowning in these memories of you

if i could close my eyes and hold you forever
if i could promise these word that ill leave you never
would promise to me that our love is forever

if i could wipe the tears that fall from your eyes
could i have saved you that day before you died
if i could turn back time and die instead
would you have said the same words ive said in my head

[Ekay]

Sad, sad story. aren't there only about 3 words that rhyme with life? wife, knife, and strife? well in any case...it's pretty good.

[*S0ul_Reaper*]

haha yes 3 words buddy

[lalalaLANUH]

aw it made me tear up. i love it. (though i was slightly distracted by your icon.)