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 Jan 1 2007, 06:05 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Has anyone heard this heavenly tune
Whilst gazing at the moon That celestial sound It has never been so profound… Stay and listen to the harmony That resonates freely Within everybody’s heart And this ethereal sound is art Look and listen carefully Ignore those that please only aesthetically And listen hard, for that scarred Yet celestial sound of angels |
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Jan 1 2007, 07:09 PM
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 ˇLa Reina del Mundo! Group: Member Posts: 205 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 415,882 |
Ooh, wonderful, wonderful imagery. I love it. The rhyming scheme is really different, which fits the poem really well. I know that while I was reading it, I paused at the ends of certain lines and that gave me time to reflect on the meaning of your poem. Those pauses (mentally) let me listen to the "celestial sound of angels," and that's always a cool effect to come out of a poem.
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Jan 1 2007, 07:13 PM
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wHOAH cloud x =] u remember dispn0ygonekrazy??
haha if u do this is me now its good to see you still post man, you improved on your writing. good stuff. |
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Jan 1 2007, 07:43 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
hahaha yeah i remember you. i didn't think you'd remember me and thanks :D the times i stopped posting was the times i started writing in different areas. i just didn't wanna post them because i don't think they're good enough.
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