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College Essay, is it good?
lKVNiiKINKYl
post Oct 10 2006, 07:53 AM
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I have finished my college essay and was wondering if anyone could give me any suggestions or tips to making it better. A lot of the colleges topics are "What is an achievement that you are most proud of and why?" and I used a past experience to talk about how my (nonexistant) leadership skills are amazing.
 
orgasm
post Oct 11 2006, 04:49 PM
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Um. I'm not going to critique your essay, but I will tell you this:

Posting up your college app essay online is a bad, bad, bad, bad, bad idea. If you want somebody to read it, go to your english teacher or your parents or even a close friend.
 
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post Oct 11 2006, 06:04 PM
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I reckon... for my final english essay I jocked other peoples stuff that they posted on the internet for critiquing

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I say take it down and give it to an English Teacher... or a friend...
 
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post Oct 11 2006, 10:55 PM
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^are you serious..?

I don't feel like reading that, but shiiiiiiiit I need to write mine.
 
lKVNiiKINKYl
post Oct 12 2006, 06:32 PM
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Haha ok maybe it wasn't the brightest idea. Taking it down
 

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