College Essay, is it good? |
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College Essay, is it good? |
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CHYEAAHHH MAN ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,255 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 168,013 ![]() |
I have finished my college essay and was wondering if anyone could give me any suggestions or tips to making it better. A lot of the colleges topics are "What is an achievement that you are most proud of and why?" and I used a past experience to talk about how my (nonexistant) leadership skills are amazing.
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te quiero ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Banned Posts: 472 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 467,840 ![]() |
Um. I'm not going to critique your essay, but I will tell you this:
Posting up your college app essay online is a bad, bad, bad, bad, bad idea. If you want somebody to read it, go to your english teacher or your parents or even a close friend. |
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*.fire* |
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I reckon... for my final english essay I jocked other peoples stuff that they posted on the internet for critiquing
![]() I say take it down and give it to an English Teacher... or a friend... |
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*Statues/Shadows* |
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^are you serious..?
I don't feel like reading that, but shiiiiiiiit I need to write mine. |
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CHYEAAHHH MAN ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,255 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 168,013 ![]() |
Haha ok maybe it wasn't the brightest idea. Taking it down
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