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| *My Cinderella.* |
 Apr 14 2006, 01:26 AM
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QUOTE She was mad again, I could tell by the fire that flickered in her eyes. She grabbed the back of my shirt collared and rammed my head into the coffee table. "PLEASE! MUMMY! I BEG YOU! STOP! IM SORRY, MUMMY!" She ignored my desperate cries and continued to ram my head. I was shaking. I didn't know what to do. I never did. This is how it had always been in my family. Papa died not too long ago, and for that my mummy always hated me. I never understood what I could've done to make her hate me so bad. I loved her to death, and I melted when I saw her eyes fill with hatred --toward me, and only me. The torture ceased after a while, and I felt her grip loosen on my shirt. "Get up." She growled. I panicked. Not wanting to anger her more than I already had, I obeyed. It happened so quickly, she slapped me across the face. I cried out in surprised and began to back away. "Where do you think you're going, you litte brat?" She hissed as I tried my best to find something. ANYTHING to support me. My legs were weak and my muscles were tense from the weary day. I didn't know how much longer I could manage to hold myself up. I felt dizzy, the room started to shake and I could've sworn I saw mummy in 3 different places. Suddenly, I felt a grip around my neck. It was a strong one. Though my eye sight was failing me at the moment, I knew exactly who it was that possessed such pain. Got bored. What do you guys think? |
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Apr 14 2006, 01:28 AM
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luckily its only a story....:)what happen next then??
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Apr 14 2006, 01:29 AM
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It's a nice starter, I'd like to see what happened next.
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Apr 14 2006, 08:17 AM
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it's so sad. but... written well?!
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Apr 14 2006, 11:18 AM
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QUOTE(viola_winnie @ Apr 14 2006, 2:28 AM)  luckily its only a story....:)what happen next then?? QUOTE It's a nice starter, I'd like to see what happened next. ^ I'd be happy to add more if you'd guys be willing to read it. 
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Apr 14 2006, 11:23 AM
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Goooooooo its intresting.!
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Apr 14 2006, 11:26 AM
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 They call me... St.Jimmy Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 393,546 |
wow u know what the sad thing is? my mom did that to me. until she commited suicide that is. o well my god father and mother are way nicer. but finish it. its good.
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Apr 15 2006, 10:56 AM
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I managed to add some more on, so tell me what you guys think.
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Apr 15 2006, 07:35 PM
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wow. that`s so sad. i really like it...
good thing this didnt really happen........... |
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Apr 16 2006, 03:22 PM
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^ Yeah.
I guess it is. I'm going to try to add more as soon as I get the ideas. |
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Apr 16 2006, 09:32 PM
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^^O.o interesting.
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Apr 19 2006, 07:23 PM
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They call me... St.Jimmy Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 393,546 |
u could go along the lines of stuffing u in the back of a pick up truck with boxes filled with huge tv and making u load and unload thm and then make u ride back with boxes filled with smelly bodies of dead people
i find that really scary |
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Apr 22 2006, 10:34 AM
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oh I remember you posting this!
That's really good 
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Apr 22 2006, 01:29 PM
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Oh, it's a story and not a poem...it's only like, one paragraph...
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