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KissMe2408
post Nov 7 2005, 03:19 PM
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This is the voting thread for the "Createblog Writing Contest".
Thank you to the 6 people that submitted entries and put the time and effort into it :)

*Remember the contest was to write a great opening line for a book or short story.

RULES
(1)You may only vote for 1 entry.
(2)You may leave comments also if you wish.
(3)Sorry but the writers names won't appear with the poems.
(4)Winners will put put into the Hall of Fame for Writers on CB
(5)You Steal any of these lovely pieces, you die!
(6)This thread will close on November 14th.

[TIP] Remember this is a "creative" writing contest. When you judge these, remember to judge with creativity as well!


ENTRIES FOR CREATIVE WRITING CONTEST.

(1)
QUOTE
"As in most circumstances when something bad is to happen, such as the world ending, there was silence on the small planet of Gerthmaesh. Creatures of flight had all sought out safety, “waiting out” what was to come. The sun had begun to darken in the course of it’s death thus turning the warm day into a cold night. "


(2)
QUOTE
"I opened the door, and I couldn't believe my eyes. A grin, ear to ear, jumps upon my face. Yet, as I walked out of my house, I had a funny feeling that something was going to happen. Something far beyond my knowledge."


(3)
QUOTE
"In the whirlwind of events that happens every day, only the most trustworthy can be recorded in this journal. The beautiful tale of mystery, romance and chaos ensues, lucky reader..."


(4)
QUOTE
"in this point of time sins and demons are everywere, doing unholy things every min. all this death cause people feel like it as they dont care for the victim's lives. everywere in this steel sorrounding filled with the smell of metal, gun smoke, and blood with the sounds of the gun's thunder, screams, and cries for mercy."


(5)
QUOTE
"How I love that intense, passionate sex. The way he held me, touched me, loved me."


(6)
QUOTE
"Comforted by the memories of Havasupai and a tiny red rock that Bob gave me, I began the journey that would put the pieces of my life together again. Honoring the dreams of life that anchored my cancer surgery and treatment left me without a job, money, car, insurance or direction. I hoped going home would help to heal the open wounds that were festering since childhood."


MINI-CONTEST

There was only one entry for the mini-contest. (contest on "growth" in couplet style)

Azn_at_heart is our winner automatically..here was his entry:

QUOTE
growing up and seeing the truth

everday lesson learned and day that passed i become more complex
i wonder what is the very important lesson i will learn next
as i learned a while ago....the only i had considered as a dove
now this i found that it was her attituded that i had lothe
see had always made fun and taunt me
i was too blind to even see
as i grew i wondered "y should i be a stereotype"
since then i try to become more diffrent everyday with all my might
though my outside and inside grown very much, with new lessons made
but still as a kid i was very mature and that still stayed
 
azn_at_heart
post Nov 7 2005, 05:50 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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oh i have a typo on the mini contest one "only-one" well i still win it ^-^
 
Paradox of Life
post Nov 7 2005, 07:08 PM
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I like 4.
 
RiddleMeWonders
post Nov 7 2005, 09:54 PM
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2 Appeals to me...

But I'm going to have to go with 6.



EDIT:


Voting? I thought there was going to be a poll, the mass of the post is awesome katie, but this seems kind of difficult...
 
*mzkandi*
post Nov 8 2005, 12:11 PM
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I'll put my vote in for #4.
 
illumineering
post Nov 8 2005, 12:24 PM
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I love Havasupai
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I like #1.
 
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post Nov 8 2005, 12:31 PM
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i vote for 1. (is there a poll somewhere or do we leave it here??)
 
Retrogressive
post Nov 9 2005, 03:37 PM
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I vote for 3

(since I've never seen any of these before??)
 
toodlepops.
post Nov 9 2005, 10:35 PM
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#6. happy.gif
 
azn_at_heart
post Nov 9 2005, 11:20 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown
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Sorry, i think Paradox of Life has a point...i wouldn't want people counting these things up just yet.

AND C"MON GUYS WE NEED MORE VOTES!!

-kissme2408

This post has been edited by KissMe2408: Nov 12 2005, 12:52 AM
 
Paradox of Life
post Nov 11 2005, 06:46 PM
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^
Eh, maybe you shouldn't do that, cause kids might look at this and just choose whichever has the most votes.
 
*lolita kitty*
post Nov 12 2005, 12:57 AM
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i choose #6.
 
aera
post Nov 12 2005, 07:05 PM
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*scribble scribble*
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i say... four.
 
*iNyCxShoRT*
post Nov 12 2005, 07:59 PM
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Number 2 caught my attention.
 
Fabio.
post Nov 12 2005, 08:26 PM
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Number three makes me want to read the rest of the book. It's very well written.
 
*stephinika*
post Nov 14 2005, 04:36 PM
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#2.
 
hi-C
post Nov 14 2005, 06:04 PM
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Number three.
 
Rachel
post Nov 14 2005, 06:10 PM
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i've never wanted anything rationale.
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Numero 5 =]=]
 
*jooleeah*
post Nov 14 2005, 06:47 PM
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number three
 
KissMe2408
post Nov 15 2005, 12:18 AM
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Thanks everyone for voting, this thread will be closed now!

I will put up a winners thread soon! thanks :)

edit..
oh yes my vote was for number 3
 

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