March, the rythm Options

[RiddleMeWonders]

March

Rampant and it was
continuing to control their thoughts
the beat of the drum commanding
attentions of all dwellers here
heart beat racing to match
barely making it
how do they do that?
foot steps falling into rythm
unconscious of the path they take
nothing left in the wake
but those that
follow, follow
step back, center
"Dont lead, we lead."
"March"
The voice harsh, hard calling out
on top of this surface
a satisfying sound coming
from each repeating step
each resounding pound
follow, follow
"Move along."
march.

and the drummer falls
no witness to it all
but one who resisted
one so true
turned back into the march for you
"march."

a little bit of courage here
a little bit of truth withheld
let us lead the drummer back
let us lead the drummer back
let us lead the drummer back
to the place where he fell
He shall march again
In time with the drum
let us begin to fix it all
let us move on from the fall
let us lead the drummer back
"Don't lead, we lead
MARCH!"

[elaboratedream]

I love it!
great rhythm

beautiful metaphor (if it was meant to be one...)

and the drummer falls
no witness to it all
but one who resisted
one so true
turned back into the march for you
march.

I love that part... the one who resisted the constant rhythm of things...

[RiddleMeWonders]

i edited it minorly, so it is more understandable.