ANOTHER RAP, by me |
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| *Statistik* |
 May 22 2005, 02:35 PM
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Yeah it's very frustrating that all you guys are keep hating//
my raps do suck, but my patience is still waiting// imagine in 50 years, i still wrote raps// if i havent had that job i would be collecting bottle caps// will never hesitate, never underestimate// ill try my hard always in the same pace// 2 months later ill able to spit da disses right on your own face// learnin lyrically how to freestyle// im gonna make it quicker than eminem's 8 mile// im not gonna rap for awhile, got shit to do// got a whole shit of pile, f**k this shit// we're over, let's begin a piper's pit// |
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| *not_your_average* |
May 22 2005, 02:51 PM
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QUOTE(Jason61992 @ May 22 2005, 2:35 PM) Yeah it's very frustrating that all you guys are keep hating// my raps do suck, but my patience is still waiting// imagine in 50 years, i still wrote raps// if i havent had that job i would be collecting bottle caps// will never hesitate, never underestimate// ill try my hard always in the same pace// 2 months later ill able to spit da disses right on your own face// learnin lyrically how to freestyle// im gonna make it quicker than eminem's 8 mile// im not gonna rap for awhile, got shit to do// got a whole shit of pile, f**k this shit// we're over, let's begin a piper's pit//  got a whole shit of pile? that just cracks me up. you amuse me jason. keep going wth those shitty rhymes. |
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May 22 2005, 04:22 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again..  Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
the bottle cap part is funny..
 i guess this is one of the good raps u made...lol.. good job.... |
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May 22 2005, 05:09 PM
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 Im Gavin HI!! Group: Member Posts: 802 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 111,644 |
lol bottle cap part is kinda funny... nice terrible ryhmes keep them coming ^_^ they kinda funny to read.
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May 22 2005, 10:03 PM
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QUOTE(Jason61992 @ May 22 2005, 11:35 AM) imagine in 50 years, i still wrote raps// if i havent had that job i would be collecting bottle caps// i like how you inserted "bottle caps" just so it would rhyme. i wonder if you realize how little sense you make. |
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| *nightmare4taki* |
May 22 2005, 10:13 PM
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Hey this one wasn't that bad, it was actually pretty good although you lost it right here:
QUOTE( Jason) got a whole shit of pile, f**k this shit//
we're over, let's begin a piper's pit// |
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May 24 2005, 04:22 AM
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wow i am actually very impressed jason. last 3 lines you lost it a little but i love the bottle cap and 8 mile part. good job you seem to be getting better
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