I'm not sure if we have something like this already but I couldn't find anything so I'm making this topic... (If there's a contest already feel free to close this topic.)

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Song/Rapwriting Contest

~Anyone is free to submit a song or a rap...a maximum of two per person, please.

~Don't submit any very short verses or the like - if you're going to submit something, make sure that, in total, it is at least 10 lines.

~I'll choose a winner...runner up...and third place.

Have fun everyone!

Let me take the TIME to UNWIND and gather my mental//
Listening to the beat sooth my soul while I speak to this instrumental//
I can HEAR IT and feel it deep in my SPIRT//
My wrath they FEAR IT when they get NEAR IT//
You can feel the summer breeze so radiant like the beauty of a LADY
Who I thought was my friends only PLAY ME and BETRAY ME//
It’s a cruel world and a harsh society//
That’s why I realize im blessed entirely//
I just take this TIME to relax from a life of CRIME//
Tend to MINE but yet pray that everyone else puts away the NINES//
BLOCK~OUT and KNOCK~OUT all this negative energy//
Trying to become the positive warrior that lies inside of me//
Never lyrically INCLINED because im not BLINDED by the truth//
Legendary as I SHINE in my PRIME like Babe Ruth//
So COHERENT its APPARENT im one of the Elite//
You’re the son Im the PARENT when im rocking the beat//

I deposit at Banks thats full of Young Bucks//
Hood Politics with hollow tips that Destruct//
Leave you CHOKEN with your bones BROKEN following the heat//
Always Serious never JOKIN when Im SMOKIN the beat//
Outmaneuver anybody If you want me come and GET~ ME//
Take care of business fast, quick, and SWIFTLY//
So sharp and ACCURATE//
So precise and IMMACULATE//
Educate THOSE who OPPOSE with no delay//
I’ve CHOSE to EXPOSE every word you say//
You no longer MATTER after I make You SHATTER no one will miss you//
I would RATHER GATHER up intelligence relevant to the issue//
FINISH and DIMINISH those who are weak and unable to REPLENISH//
Call me Darth Maul Because Im the Phantom MENACE//
UNORTHODOX like twin GLOCKS when I spit this HIP HOP//
I am not a gangsta but Im something that your NOT//
So HABITUAL with my ghetto RITUAL and scriptures I present//
Take a LOOK my life is like a BOOK when you dissect my content//

1)

I guess Im McDonalds now so Im supersized
Im the Big Mac for these girls with shakes but no fries
Im like a happy meal because I always come with a prize
I make your pupils get big because you cant believe you eyes
Your Fate is so tragic So Do you believe in MAGIC
Because I spit ACID and Im more colossal than the JURASSIC
Its JASON the one REPLACING every one with a my ghetto sermon
Im hard to figure out and the flow is hared to decipher and determine
You want Beef? Because I got some meat for you girl
Bring my Magic stick and make you sick of diamonds and pearls
My flow is more complex than aliens having sex
Girls ride me like six flags and then I say whose next
Jason is DRILLING and KILLING everything from the floor to the CEILING
IM ON FIRE! Someone call the Fire Marshall and lets exit the BUILDING
So I know the rest of CB is going to hate
So Im going to do you like the service before the funeral Just you WAIT




2)

So highly educated and so highly underestimated
So Dedicated but never ill fated
Im to much to touch so I cause universal time rifts
Grip the clutch when I crush and make the whole ground shift
Vibrating and quaking to the sound of my speakers
Rock crowds, Rock Shows, with my Swagger and features
Shocking and Knocking everybody around
Stopping and Blocking all shots reassuring they never fall down
So fast when I blast and send you in a tongue twister
Blowing wind and Throwing in more punches than Sonny Lister
Now I swarm and form this proper when I shape this
Im not R. Kelly but I am the world’s Greatest
Go against me you want be safe by the bell like screech
I don’t have to be drammatical , I’ll end it without a verbal speech
Let me get back on track and attack while your still down
Im the Ace not the King so no need for a crown

The good die young....
Jose was only 4 when he died
i was the only person who could stand the pain, i never cried
please, you don't know we all die slowly on the inside
but we still look like were normal on the outside
planes been killin people while they been falling
distressed familys contacting each other constant calling
tower gone down due to terrorism, witnessed it collapsing
we all argued amongst ourselves while the times been passing
can we say who dies or breathes?
Stop for a momment, and calm down to see
i pray for the dead, god bless the dead
young souldja your time has come rest ya head
i'll see you one day soon when we all go to the gates
love to all the fallen brothers we'll all have intertwined fates
people given less, bless the poor
they born with less, but they live for more
they get no help but they hold they're own
the struggles noticed, but never really known
to all the young people who never got to see an older age
in the storybook of life, just another blank page
the young who never got to graduate from school
whatever we we do we can't bring them back
while the bad live still dealin crack
corruptin our lives, hoods and communitys
all this shit goin on we've developed a shell, an immunity
Everyone feels the pain and the shock
young soldjas die over pointless violence wastin glocks
we got a world filled with children filled with terror
with everyone dying my own death seems nearer
little children starvin, never able to accomplish their dreams
pointless arguments, blood boiling screams
this is dedicated to anyone who died young
rest in peace young soldja thuggin in heaven relaxin under the sun
your in a better place now, rest in peace
your names engraved on the tombstone immortalized by concrete
enjoy what's left of your life once your gone your just a memory
Don't worry im feelin this pain it shakes me constantly.

Yeah this is dedicated to everyone who ever died over violence
Don't complain and say i wrote too much about the world.

thanks for submitting, any more submissions? *one week left*

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1)
i see your sadness swelling in your eyes
that one call, you broke out and cried
just a memory but she'll always be there
even though shes gone she'll always care

dry your tears, dont you cry
ima be here and tell you why
mama is dead but she aint gone
she'll always be there if you hold on

i understand she was all you got
but just dont sit there untill you rot
mama is gone but your not apart
she'll always have a place for you in her heart

dry your tears, dont you cry
ima be here and tell you why
mama is dead but she aint gone
she'll always be there if you hold just on

i know how you feel i lost a loved one too
the lasts words she said was "ill always love you"
i kept her close i kept her near
even though id breakup in tears

dry your tears, dont you cry
i understand how it is but you have to try
mama is gone to the heavens above
she'll be in your heart knowing shes loved
though shes gone and it breaks you in two
just remember mama's apart of you

2)
i aint no gangsta but i can dress bettah than you
im representing the sco gonna show you wat it do
my rhymes are slick, my rhymes are fast
even that one dude in Cb couldnt even last
step up to the plate son if you want to battle
i aint like that one guy im too hard to handle
spittin verse from verse line after line
ima be at the top , all this is gonna be mine
straight out from cali i bet yall never met anyone like me
im the underdog , the outkast, yall dont know me
winning competition after competition ive been at the top
my fame will last, it'll reign, i aint gonna stop
this is how we do, i leave you speecheless wid nothing to do
just like all them fake a$$ wannabes that end up like you
i may not be the best, but f*ck it, I'm damn near
you're as dumb as Fudd when Bugs asked him to stand here.....

XD

The life I Live

I'm the one who shines his candle in the dark
I grew up fast, but I'm a boy in my heart
ruthless, as we wrap the victims bodys in plastic
ribs broken and spread like elastic
we're all riders in truth, loyal to the game
The people with meanings are considered insane
stay true to yourself homie keep ya essance
we might be troublesome but we still precious
think of all the things we do to our kids
no one man can be proud of how he lives
help the niggas in africa sourrounded by Genocide
while niggas in america sufferin homicides
wait sit back and watch how things turn out
skeep your voice nigga, get up and shout


*Chorus*
Check it out all we see are visions of darkness
comon homie, tell me where the heart is
Young hustlas dealin drugs gettin money by bein persuasive
Take a look around, admire the life we live

(Repeat)

Rememba dawgs black pride brown love
be thankfull for what you have it's a gift from above
we all didn't choose for the life that we live
we gotta stop taking from the world and start to give
look at us were all striving for unity
Bless the good god, please, help my community
We rob, cuz we gotta have soemthin to put in a hand
We're poor we cant keep up with this coporate demand
we gettin odd jobs, can't keep up da pay
different things beein shut off every day
unwanted babies thrown in the trash
brothas do anything to secure some cash

*Chorus*

You know what we aren't ready to see a black president
We have what we have we gotta fix it, it's evident
we do nothin, leaving it for the next generation
we gotta unite as one nigga for the next nation
please just be thankfull for the life that we live


Copyright- Winternights2GP A.K.A John/Yula

Yeah today's the last day, any last entries?

I'll be choosing the winners on Saturday and Sunday.

I'll look through them myself, and choose the ones which I think are the best. Since there's really not that many people in this forum; not enough for a sufficient vote for which poem is the best, I'll be asking some of my friend which three out of the finalists they like the best. I'll list the winners by Monday (5/16).

Any mods can close this tomorrow, 5/14, asap.

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CONTEST ENDED. WOULD A MOD PLEASE CLOSE THIS? THANKS.