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 Apr 16 2005, 10:35 AM
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Check it
My lyrics may not be flowin but my attitude's still showin thats the reason why i conquered hip-hop and i used it while you got in the stage, got your mic and abused it cmon taki your freestyle abilities suck everytime i check them out, my head's on therapy how terrible and miserable, look at me u better see forum games freestyle competition, you'll never stop postin your not a artist so why you keep hostin? my rap is quality right above the melody i betcha you rapped about caths, u got stoned by pope you think your very famous, but your not even dope probably you'll learn your lessons when u have 100% hope |
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Apr 16 2005, 11:00 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
oh my... that is not good... its overly contrived for a start
dont start another rap duel. its irritating, and frankly rather sad. |
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Apr 16 2005, 11:00 AM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
QUOTE cmon taki your freestyle abilities suck everytime i check them out, my head's on therapy how terrible and miserable, look at me u better see forum games freestyle competition, you'll never stop postin your not a artist so why you keep hostin? You shouldnt really be talking. 
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Apr 16 2005, 11:03 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,746 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 17,125 |
Oh gees, not again.
Also, your head can't be on therapy. Also, what the hell is a cath? What do you mean when you have 100% hope? Your lyrics make no sense, neither meaningly or grammatically.  Also, the pope is dead. Its a bit ironic how you use him in this rap and 'respect' him so. |
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Apr 16 2005, 11:05 AM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
i think pope's a drug, ariel
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Apr 16 2005, 11:07 AM
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I don't understand, your rap doesn't make sense...try writing that in french, maybe i'll understand better.
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Apr 16 2005, 11:18 AM
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QUOTE(ermfermoo @ Apr 16 2005, 11:03 AM) Also, your head can't be on therapy. Also, what the hell is a cath? What do you mean when you have 100% hope? Your lyrics make no sense, neither meaningly or grammatically.  GET EM ARIEL....AHAHA! This was another bad...ummmm "rap" if thats what you want to call it |
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Apr 16 2005, 11:32 AM
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 The Secret Hacker. Group: Member Posts: 1,780 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,712 |
QUOTE thats the reason why i conquered hip-hop you did? 
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Apr 16 2005, 12:36 PM
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NO.
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Apr 16 2005, 01:47 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Give it up, Jason.
Seriously. Just give it up. You're not impressing anyone with your "kickass rapping skillz." You're not kangsta, get over yourself and stop attempting to make raps. |
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Apr 16 2005, 03:17 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Apr 16 2005, 6:05 AM) i think pope's a drug, ariel lol... no offense but that didnt really make sense.. good try though.... |
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Apr 16 2005, 03:21 PM
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 Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Apr 16 2005, 10:35 AM) Check it My lyrics may not be flowin Damn right they dont  QUOTE but my attitude's still showin thats the reason why i conquered hip-hop That never happened, and conquer hip-hop? how do you conquer something you know nothing about? QUOTE and i used it while you got in the stage, got your mic and abused it cmon taki your freestyle abilities suck Taki, just straight up pwnzors you, you have no idea wtf your talkin' about QUOTE everytime i check them out, my head's on therapy how terrible and miserable, look at me u better see forum games freestyle competition, you'll never stop postin Like ariel said, your head cant be on therapy. Look at me you better see? Huh? QUOTE your not a artist so why you keep hostin? Wtf?! QUOTE my rap is quality right above the melody i betcha you rapped about caths, u got stoned by pope you think your very famous, but your not even dope probably you'll learn your lessons when u have 100% hope You make 0 sense kid... I didn't even get the last part.. |
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Apr 16 2005, 03:22 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 242 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,283 |
QUOTE(sandra6645 @ Apr 16 2005, 10:07 AM) I don't understand, your rap doesn't make sense...try writing that in french, maybe i'll understand better. im learning french iin school |
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Apr 16 2005, 03:28 PM
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 PHIL ½ Group: Member Posts: 2,663 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,982 |
I wouldnt even consider this rap quality.
-Phil- |
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Apr 16 2005, 04:57 PM
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The Secret Hacker. Group: Member Posts: 1,780 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,712 |
ahahahahaha.... jason... funky buddah is already criticizing you. whatever rap it is u have, its so easy to criticize. no offense though.
and your reply is: "NO." when i asked u about that "conquered hip-hop" line. if it is "no", they why'd u put that line there? |
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Apr 17 2005, 02:15 AM
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could you rhyme?
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Apr 17 2005, 08:00 AM
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 Je vous aime Group: Member Posts: 361 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 109,078 |
Your 'Rap' sucks.. case closed, no if, ands, or buts about it.
Im actually very uncomfortable by calling it Rap.. Your attempt sucked. There, thats better. |
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Apr 17 2005, 08:31 AM
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 Hello my name is Yula, I'm a baller! Group: Member Posts: 329 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 125,918 |
What the f**k, this "MTV kid" gets alot more feedback then my rap that actually means something. (second Page.) Holy shit, that has no flow, immature and you can't rhyme or form a diss for crap. Good job, showing us you can plaugerize and write shit rhymes all in one!
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Apr 17 2005, 03:06 PM
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Jason I will embarrass and harass you in your own forum//
Back off and go J*ack off to soft porn// |
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Apr 17 2005, 04:01 PM
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 HAAAAAAAA. Group: Member Posts: 4,472 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,068 |
Not again.
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Apr 19 2005, 06:01 PM
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QUOTE(sandra6645 @ Apr 16 2005, 12:07 PM) I don't understand, your rap doesn't make sense...try writing that in french, maybe i'll understand better. French Version  Le vérifier Mes paroles ne peuvent pas être flowin mais LE showin CALME de MA ATTITUDE qui la raison pourquoi j'ai conquis l'hip hop et je l'ai utilisé pendant que vous êtes entré l'étape, obtenu votre mic et l'a abusé de cmon taki vos capacités main-levée suce everytime je les vérifie hors, ma tête sur la thérapie comment terrible et pitoyable, me regarder l'u mieux voit les jeux de forum compétition main-levée, vous n'arrêterez jamais postin votre Un artiste si pourquoi vous gardez hostin ? mon rap est la droite de qualité au-dessus de la mélodie je betcha vous avez frappé de caths, l'u obtenu a lapidé par le pape vous pensez votre très célèbre, mais votre ne pas même droguer probablement vous apprendrez vos leçons quand l'u a 100% espoir Wow, he sucks. |
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Apr 19 2005, 10:44 PM
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 dakishimetainoni... Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,322 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,318 |
 listen jason, maybe this type of rapping isn't your thing. no one really cares about how so and so is better than whoever in rapping. even after all these people put you down you keep doing this because this seems to be your passion. awhile ago i visited your xanga and you had a jin song playing. maybe you should do what he does in some of his songs, talk about important matters. this one song on his cd "same cry" he wrote about stuff in china, stuff that meant something to him. maybe you should do the same. |
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Apr 19 2005, 10:52 PM
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 high hopes for the cutter Group: Member Posts: 128 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 127,714 |
that wasnt too good... i didnt belive nor get anything u said. You said something about caths... u meant catholics?
the majority of it was ego and i just didnt belive u were this hard rapper....
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Apr 19 2005, 11:01 PM
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 Take advantage of me. Group: Member Posts: 912 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,792 |
Jason, Jason, Jason...
 You need some serious help man. You can`t rap. Get over it. |
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