mad random but w.e.



Leave Feedback / what i should do with this shyt

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Subliminal

her skin looks a bit too fake.

Image has been deleted..?

fixed

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Subliminal

imo shit

I 100% second Mike's response. Those silhouette backgrounds are so overdone. There's a lot going on in her bikini and with all that's going on in the background makes it too busy. Tone down the effects a bit.

I think you should use a totally different background.

haha funny since all that shyt that u pointed out being wrong ... was all part of the b.g. which was one layer that i foudn as a stock lol... at 4 am u expect me 2 make any of that shyt lol all i did was throw on a render, a couple gradient maps, and sum text.... critique the shyt i did . . and i know the text is bad lol im never good with typography

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All the more reason why you should sleep at 4AM; your judgment is totally impaired. You picked a horribly low quality "stock" background, which of course we expected you to have made it since your claiming it to be your creation, with lack of credit, and combined bad and bad to only create worse.

Sleep at 4AM, practice during the day when you're semi coherent. That is my critique and what I recommend.

Naw. I say, stay up; subliminal creativity will occur.

Maybe subliminal sleeps in the daytime and he's a nocturnal person?

Idk, it is common sense to have enough energy to do an activity ( yeah, graphic designing is an activity xD )

And one way way to improve and sharpen your designs is by examining pictures you like by other designers. you can even ask them how they did it if it makes you feel better. oh, and also try to look at tutorials and guides on certain effects and experiment around. i highly recommend looking through font guides / what to do & what not to do, etc.

haha 4got . . . can only post up work here that ive actually put time into lol . . . shyt was not serious or 4 a client... relax lol

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Subliminal

You should still give credit, because sometimes designers can be a bit...bitchy.

Sooo, pretty much you didn't do anything. And the 1-2 things you did do look terrible. And would you stop saying 'shyt.' It's not a word.

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Subliminal

To those who know what they're doing to begin with. I made my current wallpaper at 2 in the morning and I freaking love it so, *shrug*.

and we love you 2

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Damn, she's a giant. Look at how much bigger she is than that shitty looking tree.

This is probably just my warped logic, but when you know what you're doing when you're coherent, then when you're semi/not coherent that really allows your mind to soar. You already have the skills to where you can do whatever. Kind of like you have to know the rules of art to break them? But when you don't know what you're doing and you're attempting to do it when you're not coherent, crap will be made because you didn't know what you were doing in the first place.




And yes, everyone does love me. Note the witty sarcasm.

Wow. You're all assholes.

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no really, some of you aren't event critiquing. You're just being downright rude and disrespectful. And if you think that i'm wrong then you're idiots. I'm sure none of you wouldn't like it if i said "wow it sucks, it looks like shit" when i critiqued some of your bad work.

mike vs natalie

Yeah he asked for feedback, you guys aren't even giving feedback you're just being complete pricks.

Actually, we're saying that no designing should happen at 4AM when you're semi-coherent. Pretty sure that's feedback.

i'm sure some of you have seen designs from people at 2am. At least someone mentioned that they "saw art work done at 2am that looked good".

I said that. I did my wallpaper at 2AM and I love it. But you should also read what I posted a few posts under that.

Well, right now i'm not saying how someone can make good art at 2am. I'm saying that a lot comments were just downright rude.





Way to sound completely self absorbed...

Hi JC.

hi tina


12:27:54 AM tiiiiinaaaaah: only person in here that can drool on me is jc

3rd on Mike's opinion


Imo making that background more realistic and take out those black circle things
make the skin look less fake, and fix the rainbow (either make it more real looking or just take it out)

I see you took out the 'no offense'. Hah. I will speak for my comments and mine only for now. One shouldn't do design at 4AM when they're still at novice status, which it seems as though he is giving this latest piece. It is all basic/beginner stuff. OP has not fully explored all that the program has to offer. And seriously, at 4 in the morning, ones judgment is impaired due to lack of sleep, normally. That wasn't rude or disrespectful, it was pretty much stating some common sense.

And I guess i'll have to repeat myself:


You have to know the rules before you can break them. And you have to practice learning before you can get anywhere.


Oh, and nothing is more classy than getting the bird via a bunch of punctuation marks via the internet. So, seriously, rudeness is returned with rudeness. And when you ask for critique, you should expect the full range of comments between good and bad, and bad comments can sometimes be rude. But when you're still at that novice status you need those bad comments to get better. So, they learned that this piece looks like "shit" to some. They know what they did and they now will know how to fix it and turn it into something great after much much practice.


So, yes, we're all rude and disrespectful but you're the one calling us idiots if we don't see it, so .

I said you're acting like those words. I never said you were. Also yeah he asked for criticism. Theres a difference between criticism and being rude.

Rude
1. discourteous or impolite, esp. in a deliberate way: a rude reply.
2. rough, harsh, or ungentle: rude hands.
3. harsh to the ear: rude sounds.
4. robust, sturdy, or vigorous: rude strength.


Criticism
1. the act of passing judgment as to the merits of anything.
2. the act or art of analyzing and evaluating or judging the quality of a literary or artistic work, musical performance, art exhibit, dramatic production, etc.
3. a critical comment, article, or essay; critique.
4. investigation of the text, origin, etc., of literary documents, esp. Biblical ones: textual criticism.

Moved to Debate.

haha i luv you all

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Subliminal

LOL

We never were calling them the same thing? We were being "rude" while giving our "criticism". What exactly is your point now? Because you have doubled backed on yourself twice now. And once again, i'm pretty much with Mike. You focused on just the "shit" part and didn't read the rest. There was feedback in there.

Can we just get back to Subliminal's art? I'm dying to see the second version of the workpiece.


BTW, this scenario reminds me of this:

Yeah i focused on the "shit" part because it really all was just rudeness.

This is what I have to deal with....

EVERYDAY





you all have it lucky

I still can't believe you guys are twins. O_O

Haha why is that Beeny?

You guys...are solely different from one another.

ill take that as a compliment

Well.. you guys do have one similarity. An interest in Yaoi<3.


Anyways.. Subliminal, I think you should focus on not going all out on your artwork. What kind of style are you looking to obtain or did you have an inspiration for you to make this? Cause' you can't just make up something like that without having to think about the resources and stuff.

we're a lot a like actually. You just have to get to know us outside of forums

Buy me a plane ticket -_-

And yet, for the most part, the desire for criticism was still there.