LEAVE CONTRUCTIVE CRITICISM OR DON'T POST AT ALL. DO NOT USE OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE IN THESE "BATTLES", WHICH INCLUDES OFFENSIVE RACIAL SLURS.

YOU ALL HAVE BEEN WARNED.

-Fae


Yo I'm just trying to prove my point//
I'm trying to make this a burning hot joint//
Y'all people can't feel my rhymes and lines//
Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines//
My girls got more taste on me than bud light//
All you gotta do is holla and i'll make ya tight//
I'm gonna take this shit to the hardcore extreme//
I'm like The Game because I get nightmares and dreams//
Yeah dejayyyy my name is jason..//
I'm attempting to get a trace-in//
You're freddy kreuger? oh man i'm going to get feared//
Ask all my hip-hop fans, they'll say I always get cheered//
If you wanna be freddy dejayyy, you must be afraid of fire//
Damn, That's pity no wonder you can't get any higher//
When I get retired, The Kangsta will be remembered//
So i'm gonna finish you off, i hope you get dismembered//
Yeah you are the game dejayyyy because i always play you//
First improve your freestyles bytch and I will pay you//
Yeah i'm 50 cent because I get a lot of beef//
Call me the king because I'm always the cheef//
And now one more thing dejayyy don't disrespect me//
I achieved more than you losa, I'm always connected//
Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected//

you can drive?

This is yet another example of why you need to get a life.

If you are interested, I am looking for new rappers and DJs for my new label. Here is a link. http://www.nobodysmiling.com/hiphop/news/71563.php

If you are interested, mail a tape to the address below.

Baseline Recording Studios
127 W 26th St Rm 801
New York 10001

omgoodness. please do NOT give the boy hope. then he'll think hes achieving at something hes not good at.

cant you talk about things normal 13 yr olds go through ? if you lived in a ghetto ass place w/ all these gangsta shit yu talk about then id understand your raps. but yu live in a nice suburb in jersey and go to a nice school probably lfull of kids who beat you up because you act like your from some ghetto ass town.

God. Help this young man boy.

"Yo I'm just trying to prove my point//
I'm trying to make this a burning hot joint//"

A burning hot joint? You smoke? Would you like me to alert the police?

noun: marijuana leaves rolled into a cigarette for smoking
noun: junction by which parts or objects are joined together
noun: a disreputable place of entertainment
noun: (anatomy) the point of connection between two bones or elements of a skeleton (especially if the articulation allows motion)
noun: a piece of meat roasted or for roasting and of a size for slicing into more than one portion
noun: the shape or manner in which things come together and a connection is made

Sorry, but those lines made no sense. Because you have no point.


Y'all people can't feel my rhymes and lines//
Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines//

Jason, no one WANTS to feel your rhymes and lines. Violating the law over 5000 times isn't something to be proud of.

My girls got more taste on me than bud light//
All you gotta do is holla and i'll make ya tight//

What girls? You'll make them tight? Jesus, please spare me.

I'm gonna take this shit to the hardcore extreme//
I'm like The Game because I get nightmares and dreams//

You don't even know what hardcore is. And everyone has nightmares and dreams, you idiot.

Yeah dejayyyy my name is jason..//
I'm attempting to get a trace-in//

What is trace-in supposed to mean? You're making up words now? Oh, according to Radhika, it means a murdered body. After getting a correct definition, it STILL doesn't make sense. WAY TO GO, SON!

You're freddy kreuger? oh man i'm going to get feared//
Ask all my hip-hop fans, they'll say I always get cheered//

"Get feared" makes no sense. You need to learn your grammar, son.

If you wanna be freddy dejayyy, you must be afraid of fire//
Damn, That's pity no wonder you can't get any higher//

No, Jason, you're a pity.


When I get retired, The Kangsta will be remembered//
So i'm gonna finish you off, i hope you get dismembered//

Lmfao. I HOPE YOU GET DISMEMBERED, BITCH!

Yeah you are the game dejayyyy because i always play you//
First improve your freestyles bytch and I will pay you//

YOU PLAY WITH DJ? And was the second line supposed to be an insult? You don't
tell someone you're dissing to improve their rhymes so you can pay them.


Yeah i'm 50 cent because I get a lot of beef//
Call me the king because I'm always the cheef//

No, Jason.. No, you're not the CHIEF.

And now one more thing dejayyy don't disrespect me//

Where did this line come from?

I achieved more than you losa, I'm always connected//
Call me the hard mirror, because I'm always reflected//

That made no sense whatsoever.

Alright, I'm done with my analyzation of your rhymes. Don't take it personally. While other people freestyle, I'd rather use logic.

GOD. boy, get your syncapation right, your rhymes right, and your rythm right. don't forget the meter too.

yeah it makes no sense dude GET A LIFE if you suck stop rappin get a ghost writer or somethin damn c'mon

Do you have to ruin the writing forum with this drivel?

Use another forum -- there are probably some idiots in the entertainment section that would appreciate this.

But if you're going to post here, try and make it something with a little more substance and seriousness than this crock.

Thanks.

Lol everywhere I go this kid gets nothing but hate.

Here's something....more on the positive side I suppose.

I'm glad your interested in hip hop, it's a great thing bro. But you gotta realize that true hip hop comes from the real. Can't be talkin' bout shit you got no idea about and try to play it off. Be real, be yourself. Polish your flow, practice makes perfect. I've been in the game for about two years now and I still suck like no other. But I keep at it. It's my passion. Hip hop is life. If you're serious about it, hit me up and we can work together. My hyungs and friends that emcee or dj or produce always helped me and still help me so I'm always down to help out another cat if I can. my AIM is JxDragonz. hope to hear from you. One.

^ We diss him because he doesn't write his lyrics. He's got a ghostwriter.

^ ya she did

i thought he said he was gonna write his own lyrics from now on.

he should at least get a better writer.

EXACTLYYY.

hiphop=<3. hee hee thats my myspace name. anyway back to topic.
freal. write about what you KNOW. not what you see and hear on media or music and such.

dissing me back, eh jason?! hahaha. don't worry. I made a diss back for you. check it out =] nice one.

FROM NOW ON, ALL THE DISSES SHALL BE POSTED IN THE LOUNGE. TO MAKE "CERTAIN" PEOPLE HAPPY. =]

-De112

okay, so jason dissed me back. once again, this is all for fun.

here's my diss to jason, a new one. it's not my best one... =/
you may have to read jason's diss to get what i'm saying in some of my lines.

as a matter of fact, READ JASONS DISS FIRST, then you'll get mine =]

Jasons: Jason's Diss

mine is below.

listen kid, I swear your cds gonna flop//
you say your "rhymes so sick"//
someone get this kid a cough drop!//
maybe then, you'd understand//
"DeJay" isn't just my name, its my one man band//
what's all this crap that you "live in the ghetto"?//
man when I'm done with you, you'll be rockin' stilettos//
HA, "Ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines"//
I don't know, maybe it's just 'cause you don't write your own lines!//
So stop actin' like you're something, you're not man//
you're just a fan, like eminem's old song called stan//
so take some time, write some good hooks//
i'll give you a pen, plus a free notebook!//
Dissin' you, has to be a crime//
So "ask the cop why I got over 5,000 fines"//


=] ahaa.

comments.

lol yaaaaaay!

*claps*

DJ, everyday you seem to amaze me. <3 That shit is awesome, yo.

lets keep this up, waiting for Jason's diss now. mwahahaha.



jason you have just been pwned. whatcha gonna do about it?



oh shit this is getting better and better.

jason, honestly you went all over the place and it made no sense, it had nothing to do with DJ. you guys need to check out DJ's diss back. mwahaha

-oh and btw jason, i have nothing against you...i aint gonna lie but DJ did a better job at dissing you.

nice try though

Shit is awesome man! hahahah
Jason just gets pwned time and time again
Love it

Stop ruining the writing forum with your childish mindless rhymes, kids. Post this bullshit in entertainment or something. Or even better, don't post it at all. Grow up.

whoa calm down, kid. it's a joke, me and jason are both doing it for laughs, everyone else finds it funny so calm down. the forum doesn't always have to be so uptight man.

That was amusing. Wow...

I really don't care what your motives are, whether it be for laughs or for real. It's immature and stupid, and I'm sick of it spamming up writing. This crap isn't even deserving enough to be called a piece of "writing." You want to keep up your immature rivalry? You want to sink down to the level of a twelve-year-old? Go do it in entertainment; after all, that's what "raps" are. Writing is to be appreciated, to break a threshhold.

This is no where near worthy of being called "writing."

that's your own personal opinoin though. as though I do respect it...i don't care for it. writing is writing, raps or poems or anything. everyone has their own way. like i said, the forum doesn't have to be so uptight.

That wasn't bad Jason. Just have to say this

I AM NO LONGER JASON'S GHOSTWRITER. I already showed everyone the one I ghostwrote for him in that one thred.

I haven't written another freestyle for jason since the track "Ghostwriter".

If he has a ghostwriter it must be another person.
Im not going to front though Jason you have improved but I still dont think youre ready to battle Yula's cousin or DJ.

Jason try again man you just got murked in Round one. Dj you dropped some very creative and artistic lines. I would be up for a battle with you DJ but Im not the battling type of writer when it comes to rap.

Round One Winner: DJ

I find this keystyle entertaining and amusing to say the least.

DJ, guess what?

All you sucker MCs got nothing on me//
on my grades on my lines can't touch Kevin G.
I'm a mathlete, I'm a nerd, it's absurd, but forget whatcha heard//
I'm like James Bond the 3rd.

sh-sh-shaken not stirred I'm Kevin Gnapoor//
The G's silent when I sneak through your door//
and make love to your woman on the bathroom floor//
I don't play it like Shaggy, you'll know it was me//
Cos the next time you see her she'll go//
"Oh, Kevin G"

DJ, you got served.

ahahahhahahahahhaa =] impressed. ahhahaa.

^ Such a good sport. :)

Nice rhymes, I'm sick of:

"You ain't got
What I got
So go, GO
Go smoke some
... pot."

kind of stuff.

ok how bout dj goes to entertainment cuz it is entertaining and jason stays in writing cuz thats all it deserves i haven't seen one entertaining thing in writing besides this right here so...yeah

jason: 0
dj: 1

next round BEGIN!

that aint even yours

^I know, I just wrote it out as a rap because I can't think of any ghetto-like rhymes.

u take the internet too seriously

Jesus DJ, I thought you got the hint last time. This is immature litter. STOP IT.

dammmnn you busted on himm

This is the writing forum... you can't dictate what is "worthy" to be in writing...

It's not that he's actually dissing Jason; it's just not necessary to make these stupid "raps". If they wanted to joke with each other, they could just do it in private because people like DJ are just littering the writing forum with this annoying shit. Other people who made Jason dissing raps had their topics closed. I don't see why this hasn't been closed yet.

I really don't know what your doin in your hip-hop daily//
You remind of me of that MTV Host with no penis Carson Daly//
I'm having fun knocking you and killing you//
These cB fans are thinking your garbage, booing you//
I treat you like a animal, because you can't listen at once//
Look, i didnt come here to battle with no cunts//
Knowledge is a power//
I grow from slow to extreme like a flower//
My lyrics are pure, danger explicity//
I produce thunder and lightning at the same thing like electricty//
My flow goes rapid and the speed of motion like velocity//
Yo, dj i dont care if your name is dejayyyy or shit//
I'm matrix reloaded, im trying to come back and make a strong hit//
My Hits Make Girls Groove And Move Your Songs Make Drool And Snooze//
DJ, This Is To Easy Its Like U Choose-To-Lose !! //
You gon give me a free notebook? that really helps//
You can call me the Mr. Olympic Man, Ha I'm Michael Phelps//
The more notebooks and pens i get, the more disses I'll set//
After it's all written, i can finally prove to you bitches that it wasnt bitten//
So dejayyy why don't you bow down, i have to admit you're worse than bow wow//
Give up your career, I really don't know why you belong here//
My lyrics is cold, quick to drain ya soul in a round, dog//
Slow ya roll or I'll put you in a hole like a ground hog//
DJ, my last words are that this game between you and I is ova//
I deserve to get retired yet come back to the game like h-ova//

hehe..it all ends here dj..all ends..

that was so dumb i gotta laugh... pardon me i had to laugh at that

umm.... nice i guess? first line was tight.. but you lost it when you started comparing yourself to a flower..

ha, u really wanna get pwned eh?

may i laugh with you?

that was awesome-n-hot.

this may i say is the worst diss in history.



ROFLMFAO


DeJayyyyy: ima diss that flower line.
DeJayyyyy: big time

it isn't the end Jason, not yet...

pwn?

fallen fairy

Child, this subforum and debate are the only two decent forums on cB. I have every reason to defend it.

Uh huh, but I am allowed to have an opinion. And obviously, that was mine.

^^x2

because no one who could close it hasn't seen it yet...
please stop with the raps with only the point to diss one another. thanks.

closed

like i said earlier...please stop guys. thanks.

closed.

ah, I see. Well then...that just changes everything. what the heck are you doing posting up lyrics as your own when someone else write them for you? o.O I fail to see any accomplishment in that. I mean, it's one thing to have someone ghost write for you and you lace a track with those lyrics but to just post them...umm...yea. Okay.