As the Heavens Cry

I listen to the tears fall from your eyes
This distance between us I greatly despise
I want to hold you and make it feel right
But the days ahead, for us, are not looking very bright
You asked me tonight if I ever cry
I didn't know how to tell you each moment I die
Knowing that it can never be
Knowing I'll never get to say "It's just you and me"
I told you I'd be there to wipe away every tear
It's difficult to do that when I'm trapped away here
I listen closely as the heavens cry
I cannot seem to stop asking myself why
Why can't I make her happiness last forever?
Why do they deny us ever being together?
I have such a passion to make all your dreams come true
All I want from everything is the best for you
Even if the best for you does not include me
Your happiness and beautiful smile forever I wish to see

great writing...i like your title....thanks for sharing!

brenden right? that was amazing...it sounds almost like a situation i'm in, but either way it was great. keep up the awesome work.

Wow. I love the title and the whole poem itself.

I liked that part.

Thanks I'm glad you all enjoyed it!!

Aw, that's cute. It has so much emotion, especially from a guy. It's good that you don't keep them all bottled up inside you. I love your poems, but for all that emotion, why restrain them in a rhyming scheme? I think you'd do excellent if you tried your hand at a free verse poem. You're awesome. Keep up the good work, love.

wow! that's really tranquil.

Yeah, it's about something I'm going through right now. Writing always helps.

That was amazing Brenden