"My Summer Romance"

The crescent moon shines ever so bright,
As we lie beneath the stars,
The night sky writes a message of love,
Reflecting whats in our hearts.

This Summer breeze against our skin,
Caressing our every sense,
Gives hope to 'us', to everything,
To our Summer romance.

i like it, it has good flow and it is to the point!<<and its sweet! good job! ~_~

I thought the length would be a downpoint, but I like it. Short and sweet. I love the figurative language you use. Great job!

Ah, when I saw 'brief' I knew I had to click this. I've read enough page-long poems to last a lifetime. ;) It's sweet and to the point, I love it.

how romantic.