I just want to lie here
I just want to die
I just want some quiet
I just want to deny it

I was not loved.
I was not sacred.
I was not secret.
You leave and never look back.

Don't cast a glance
over your shoulder
your looks crush me like a boulder

I can't take it
you know I'll break it
I'll forsake it
Just to be happy.

I just want to lie here
In this quiet
The silence
I am breathing
Not for long


It's hard to give up when you've given it your all.

Wow, very well-written, the poem gives a kind of depressed or troublesome mood to it, and the last verse that's underlined and red is my favorite part of the poem. Nice work.

so sad and depressing! good job anyway!

YAY, good grammar with capitals! <333 Nicely done, makes me a little sad though. :( You came up with the last bit yourself? Wow, I like it. :)

DEEP!