Sorry Daddy,
I don't call everyday .
It's just, everytime we talk, i have nothing to say .
I guess it's because, we've never been that close,
you've never been there for me when i needed you most .
I really do try to be a good daughter,
but it's hard to do so, when you're a bad father .

Sorry Mommy,
I'm not really the best,
been holding it in, but i gotta get this off my chest .
I'm tired of your scolding, all you do is yell, shout, and scream .
Now i'm tired of living my life through your dreams .
Stop thinking that everything i do is simply corrupt,
can't you accept the fact that i just want to grow up ?

Let me live my life, stop holding me down .
Stop looking at everything that i do with a frown .
I dont understand why you just can't leave me alone .
Please accept the fact that your little girl has grown .
If you're tying to change me, then you're out of luck,
because who cares what you want ? i don't give a f**k .

Wow, that's very emotional, but I like your style of writing. Good job.

Wow. Im sorry to hear about your problem with your parent. But that is a very strong and emotional peice of writting that you've just wrote. Good Job.

Wow. I think this is one of your best. This is so well written and emotional and the rhymes make perfect sense. This is definitely a favorite on here. Great job!!!

600th post!!!!!!!

that was very good!!

wow. that was AMAZiNG. exactly how i feel. but mines would be more angsty and hateful.

I like it all up until the swear. It doesn't seem to fit, imo.

I like it its very emotional but I agree ^ the swearing is kinda un necessary I liked all the rhymes how they all fit.

Very emotional, it had nice flow and the rhyming was very smooth. I'm sorry that you and your parents don't get along. :(

OMG?!?!??!..I loved the flow of that poem...I'm really feeling you..it reminds me of Pinks song..Family Portrait!!..have you ever heard it before..I LOVEE THAT SONG!!!...you'd really like it...

wow...how sad. although, i loved it

wow...it sounds like somethan i could of taken right out of my journal. That was really good. Nice choice of words, and very emotional. I like the way it flowed, and i could relate to it . Good job! :)

beautiful. really. that is exactly how i feel basically...its so relatable and its well written too. great flow and everything. great work

Wow, that's so deep. It goes//flows and everything. Wow, it's something I gotta read again.. it's so good. Wow, very nice job

aww that was a lovely poem, touching

That was so awesome. That's exactly how I feel. I think this is my favorite poem from now on.

kick ass poem sometimes I feel like telling my parents off like that too.

Jeez, this is depressing.
Poem = </3.
I like it.

It made me cry.
Ah, it was real good.

this is really good. Angsty... it's filled with emotion and it flows well.