i walked away from you and left u to cry
i cant forgive myself for saying goodbye
im thinkin to myself how i did you wrong
ive been so lonely now that your gone
missing you so much i cant sleep at night
keep going back to that day when i held u tight
i knew from that moment it had to be true
your the girl i love, baby ill always love you
ill always remember your smile and your sweetest kiss
the girl who made me laugh, your the one i'll miss
if i could id rather be by your side
ill kiss away all the tears you've already cried
i know i cant be with you cuz things wont be the same
the only thing that keeps me alive, is living through your pain

awwww thats so cute & sad . you're really good at writing poems and stuffs haha

wow, it has nice flow&rhyming. but i dont get the last line o_o

wow. if thats a true story, what made that person break up with her in the first place?

heh well that person is me lol

thats so sad...
good job though...

very sad, but very well written. great emotions. nice work.

It has a wonderful flow. =)

really good but sad =[

its a beautiful poem..and im guessing..that you had some differences and either you or her broke it off because of a small fight.. i dont know..i can imagine that happening to me though..its a great poem..

hah thnx good to see your sticking around in the forums =] how is your computer runniong?

haha.. my computer is great! thanks..

Omg... That's a really good poem and it's very touching... Terrific job!!!

It's a sad but sweet poem, nice job.

It's a very sad poem, but wonderfully written.

awww sad poem =(. but beautifully written.

More old Poems . I forgot I use ro write these things..I was a better writer back then when I had a reason to write, now I can't find any motivation...

Haha I see you have So Sick in your sig, I was going to say this is what that reminds me of. I think you have proffessional songwriting potential. Keep it up.

Thanks KC, I use to think that too, but I don't think I'm motivated enough anymore.