as it rains down upon my soul
i tend to lose everything....im out of control
my dreams start to slowly fade away
again and again day by day....
would you fight for me right by my side...
knowing everything we once knew has died.
nothing hurts more than love it self...
a powerful feeling that cant compare to nothing else
i gave up .. what else is there to do
when the most thing you want..doesnt want you..

aww so you're asking for your lover to help you cause theres this pain squishing and pushing you to the deepest, right? hm ok poem^^

Hmm well alwayz writing about love =P keep up the good work =P

lol hey thats what im best at and i dont wanna let that go

that's good that you have that kind of skills. i used to have those skills, but i lost it all T_T

it's good i like it

i love it! it's so deep geat job

i like it. very random!

and i love the rhymes.

well did you intend for there to be a double negative?
"The thing you most want"
I mean if you look at it it says im sad hold me. when you could've said so much more.

from 1-10 i give it a 4

^ I remember you, always criticised me on my poems haha always gave me a 4 =[