a burden sank deep in my heart
the feeling so strong it tears me apart
runnin through my whole body and in my vains
it hurts so much theres too much pain
like a curse that wont let go and it keeps holding on
untill i come to you and beg for forgiveness or it'll never be gone
time has gone by and i still havent said a word
not even a hello, these words i want to say cant be heard
i still see you everytime i dream aout that day
the warmness on your smile that blew all my problems away
i noe times have been hard for you and u want get away from it all
if only i can sooth your hurt away with just one call
but this fear holding me back afraid of what your going to say
like a curse inside me that wont go away

Wow, compared to your older love poems, this one is actually pretty damn good.
You've improved and grown as a writer, man.

I think this is the only love poem that I've seen from you. And it's really good.

damn man i noe and you know what all my writing improvement goes to joe and the other people here in cB if i hadnt join here and posts ive woulda been probably stuck to my crappy ass poems lol so big thnx to everyone here and especially joe mayn

Probably the best Love poem, I've ever wrote tht's not really love lol.