funride
Jul 22 2010, 11:54 PM
Mikeplyts
Jul 23 2010, 05:58 AM
Jesus, lose that font. Quick. I just 'bout shot myself. That goes for both the navigation font, foreground font, and background font. I'd try a nice sans-serif font.
Oh, and maybe do something about that border. It looks iffy.
creole
Jul 23 2010, 10:04 AM
agreeing with pretty much mike said. the black and gray rectangle could also go away, because that really ruins the aesthetic in this pic, in my opinion. you have a pretty good base, just needa change some things here and there.
( if you really want to have them, just keep one of them at least )
schizo
Jul 23 2010, 10:43 AM
Yeah, other than the text in the background and the font used for the title, it looks pretty good. Much better than that last one.
Blyat
Jul 23 2010, 12:17 PM
The backround font is so cheesy!
and that top grey banner looks bad....I would just remove that part
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