adolelolz
Dec 20 2009, 03:06 PM
I've never really done this before, so I guess it turned out alright :/
I plan on drawing this, so your input is appreciated!
Version One:
http://i48.tinypic.com/2r6o66e.jpgVersion Two:
Only difference is less saturation, slight change in eye color, change in hair color, and the second one is flipped. I think it will be flipped like the second one no matter what, since I have drawing that is similar to the first one in terms of the way the face is positioned.
Finished Piece:
http://i49.tinypic.com/x2ju3q.pngOriginal
none345678
Dec 20 2009, 03:47 PM
I would work on the cracks a bit more. Specifically those areas.
Also by the chin and left shoulder. You can tell the crack continues.
Try to think more how someone with skin like that would realistically look, because right now it just looks like a texture set to overlay.
I think area around the eyes is too dark. Could still be a little less saturated. I Like the hair and eyes though they are a bit sharp, but that's just personal preference.
adolelolz
Dec 20 2009, 03:52 PM
Oh, I see what you mean. I'll definitely fix that...Probably not on the computer because I don't know exactly how, but I'll change it up when I draw it.
Thanks for the advice =)
manny-the-dino
Dec 21 2009, 12:47 AM
It looks pretty cool but I agree with Abbey on the texture and such. Version two > version one, imo.
Amaranthus
Dec 21 2009, 01:12 AM
The second is definitely better.
Could you show us what the drawing looks like when you're finished? I'm curious.
creole
Dec 21 2009, 02:35 PM
I just like to say how you use your shadows. They look very artistic and I admire the way you changed her eyes.
adolelolz
Dec 21 2009, 02:49 PM
Thanks, everyone =)
Yeah, I'll show the drawing when I'm finished. I need to start it first... haha
markmejia
Dec 21 2009, 11:31 PM
i like the second one better! first one's wayy too yellow-orangey for my taste.
jiyong
Dec 28 2009, 05:28 AM
Basically what everyone else said, haha. Maybe darken the cracks a little, and lighten the shadow around her eyes (it's too strong imo).
adolelolz
Jan 30 2010, 03:53 PM
creole
Jan 30 2010, 04:07 PM
Big improvement. Big change. Big love<3.
jiyong
Jan 30 2010, 09:28 PM
Looks good :)
Mikeplyts
Jan 30 2010, 11:11 PM
Both the digital version and the drawn version look great.
Tomates
Jan 31 2010, 01:37 AM
whoa...that drawn version looks quite wicked.
manny-the-dino
Feb 1 2010, 02:36 PM
Dang the drawn version looks insane. Noice!
Firiath
Feb 2 2010, 12:01 AM
IT LOOKS AWESOME!
Although... I have a feeling I've seen something like that somewhere ._.
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