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Dabme
so heres my poem and i just need to title it.
and i want to know if any one understands it plz =]


Undisputed but reputed distraught
Standing with horizontal inevitability
Chin up, head down, legs apart; execution
Eyes distilled with diluted pungency

A thrashed soul, a translucent massacre
Besieged by the weight of 3 words
Commencing perhaps redundant disaster
Or the inauguration of two hearts concurred

But vagueness has won yet again
Evasive in its massive obscurity
Too hard for effortless minds to comprehend
So troubled by recurring insecurity

And relentlessly from day to day I sway
Probing, scrutinizing, revising each feature
With waves of waterfall recoiling off my face
My inundated heart sinks deeper and deeper

Until days can no longer conceal night
Nor can raved dreams refurbish my silhouette
I’d sooner obliterate despair out of plight
Then compel myself the indulgence to forget

But if amnesty bares the fruits of forever
And primaries are kept in youth
Then it’s in tips of fingers, and lips of believers
That perpetually lies the truth
Ekay
It's okay. I just don't understand your first or last stanza. I also have no idea what you're writing about.
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