datass
Mar 5 2009, 12:41 PM
alright. so another friend asked me to help her design something for a tshirt. overpopulation. i fixed this up in about 1.5 hours.
this is about what it looks like:
my friend wanted that saying.
or:
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/5751/over...tionoverpop.pnghttp://img23.imageshack.us/img23/8845/over...ionpersonal.png
Insurmountable
Mar 5 2009, 12:43 PM
Add some girls up there o_O
Its cute though :D
Tomates
Mar 5 2009, 01:57 PM
i really like it. Its cute and sends the message well.
LaRachel
Mar 5 2009, 08:02 PM
I like it, but I think you can come up with a more clever saying.
Maccabee
Mar 5 2009, 08:06 PM
It should say, Im a little cramped. haha. And ya add some girls. Maybe some babies too. haha. I lvoe it though!
Tomates
Mar 5 2009, 08:24 PM
i like the quote it has now. Its simple and nice
none345678
Mar 5 2009, 08:28 PM
I'd buy it. :D
emberfly
Mar 5 2009, 08:48 PM
^ I would too. I'm very concerned that we're not even recognizing overpopulation as a major conflict... in America atleast.
1angel3
Mar 5 2009, 09:50 PM
I like it, I would wear it too. Agree on adding some girls and maybe animals.
creole
Mar 5 2009, 09:52 PM
LOL, i just love the earth's face.
i wish the whole earth was filled with only guys.
Insurmountable
Mar 5 2009, 10:00 PM
^Yea I thought the face was so cute! But we can't have a earth filled of guys, then we wouldn't be there to enjoy them!
emberfly
Mar 5 2009, 10:15 PM
I think if you put it on a T-shirt, you should make the colors way more vibrant and saturated so that they stand out.... I'd assume it would go on a white T-shirt?
Maccabee
Mar 5 2009, 10:17 PM
QUOTE(emberfly @ Mar 5 2009, 09:15 PM)
I think if you put it on a T-shirt, you should make the colors way more vibrant and saturated so that they stand out.... I'd assume it would go on a white T-shirt?
I disagree. Its perfect.
I think you should like, make a duplicate of the text in the bubble and move it down and to the right and bring down the transparency. Kinda like a solid drop shadow.
Harp
Mar 5 2009, 10:19 PM
^Doesn't sound like too good of an idea.
Insurmountable
Mar 5 2009, 10:21 PM
QUOTE(emberfly @ Mar 5 2009, 10:15 PM)
I think if you put it on a T-shirt, you should make the colors way more vibrant and saturated so that they stand out.... I'd assume it would go on a white T-shirt?
Ewh no, I hate it when people slap colors like that on a tshirt.
Seriously though its good the way it is. You can't add shadows and such to a t-shirt typically you need 3-4 colors and they have to be flat colors.
Maccabee
Mar 5 2009, 10:23 PM
I dont think you get what im saying...Ill look for an example.
Edit:Like this
Where the text has like a 3d effect. Very minimal but i think it would make it look better. But it already looks perfect. this should just be closed.lol
xoxo_proud
Mar 5 2009, 10:42 PM
It's cute. Yeah a more clever saying would work but everyone expects witty sayings on t-shirts and it's funny that the quote is so to the point. Makes it stand out more.
Tramatize
Mar 5 2009, 10:52 PM
Make it say something like "A little personal space?" or something better than what you have.
none345678
Mar 5 2009, 10:57 PM
QUOTE(jcp @ Mar 5 2009, 09:23 PM)
I dont think you get what im saying...Ill look for an example.
Edit:Like this
Where the text has like a 3d effect. Very minimal but i think it would make it look better. But it already looks perfect. this should just be closed.lol
Why would this need to be closed? Having all those people on there already gives it a certain kind of complexity and busyness, for a minimalistic carton, adding more in the end would just take away from the design. She could try it and see how it looks, but imo I wouldn't add anything. A better saying could be put there though, but the one on there looks ok too.
manny-the-dino
Mar 5 2009, 11:16 PM
Its so cute! I love it. I agree that adding some females in there would be good. I like the catch phrase but a wittier one would be better. Good job. :)
QUOTE(jcp @ Mar 5 2009, 07:23 PM)
I dont think you get what im saying...Ill look for an example.
Edit:Like thishttp://www.ottavalta.net/roundone/Natalia.png
Where the text has like a 3d effect. Very minimal but i think it would make it look better. But it already looks perfect. this should just be closed.lol
LOL I was like wtf is my logo doing in here?
And this shouldn't be closed, Joseph. She made a thread so she could get some c&c. If she wants it closed, she can let me know, & I will. Although I don't see the point in doing so.
dosomethin888
Mar 6 2009, 01:55 AM
Very cute. But stupid concept.
I love his tiny little arms
datass
Mar 6 2009, 02:28 AM
no drop shadow
maybe a change in the quotes.
added girls :D
manny-the-dino
Mar 6 2009, 02:29 PM
Yay for edits!
I like the third one. :)
Tramatize
Mar 6 2009, 03:35 PM
I like all of them. =D
I think i got used to the saying, but thanks for using the one i suggested =D
Mikeplyts
Mar 6 2009, 04:15 PM
Awesome job. I like the third one the most.
emberfly
Mar 6 2009, 04:50 PM
The "A little personal space?" Is definitely my favorite.
Insurmountable
Mar 6 2009, 06:34 PM
Idk The little personal space one looks to long and its smaller text too..
I like the original one.
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