x__broken
Jul 1 2004, 07:58 PM
Goodbye
When it all comes down to this
A short goodbye and one last kiss
A smile appears
A smile that came to hide the tears
It was God's art
Two people with only one heart
A desicion that was thought to be made for the better
Was wrong because they still wanted to be together
But neither said a word
So not a single thought was heard
With fears of bringing back memories
They changed their locks and threw away old keys
They burned old clothes
Dried their tears and wiped their nose
And as they stood to walk away
They prayed and asked God for a brand new day
And they went to bed that night with their heads held high
They promised themselves they weren't going to cry
Lying lonely in their beds
As old images played back in their heads
They thought to themselves, Looks like tomorrow's just going to be another bad day
If the pain from tonight just won't go away.
EmeraldKnight
Jul 2 2004, 01:59 AM
Wow.. I like that.. depressing though..
tu sho
Jul 2 2004, 02:09 AM
oh god ok every one pull out ur razors and slit ur rists....
(just kidding)
the poem was beautiful i enjoyed it very much but yes, it is depressing lol
sheddingtears
Jul 2 2004, 07:07 AM
depressing love poems...
^ as for TU SHO, I cannot slit my wrists. I hate blood.
Poem was awesome btw.
Caitlin
Jul 2 2004, 07:22 AM
The poem was amazing =) I'm feeling alot like that right now
keep up the good work
eboarder2020
Jul 2 2004, 10:23 AM
Awesome awesome awesome poem...Good stuff
Ekay
Jul 2 2004, 04:58 PM
wow...really good how long did it take you to find words that ryhme w/ it? and it's depressing yes...but good nonetheless
d3v1l1ci0us
Jul 2 2004, 05:48 PM
wow..
Yemmerz
Jul 2 2004, 06:01 PM
That's good...really good.
x__broken
Jul 2 2004, 08:46 PM
QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Jul 2 2004, 5:58 PM)
wow...really good how long did it take you to find words that ryhme w/ it? and it's depressing yes...but good nonetheless
haha actually..the words came to me..especialy when I was laying in my bed. I was like HEY! I turned on a light and jumped out of bed to finish the rest. It wasn't exactly finding words that rhymed...It was finidng verses to go with the flow.
and fank you guys
for all the kinnddd words and compliemts you've been leavin me
smallymollyLINDA
Jul 2 2004, 11:03 PM
i really like that poem.......that's depressing......BRAVO BRAVO!!!!!!
girlnpink_x
Jul 3 2004, 02:11 AM
wow... i like it a lot.. i bet lotsa ppl can relate to that
Winter
Jul 3 2004, 03:20 AM
That's so good. It's so depressing.. And reminds me of my first love....
jasonjasonjason
Jul 5 2004, 09:50 PM
hey that is a nice poem... but it makes me sad
angel-roh
Jul 7 2004, 01:42 AM
awww that relates with me and my ex...wen were breaking up. awww that's sucha cute poem! and u made that? awww!
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