You don't understand.
Can't you see?
You're the only one I need.
But you keep going
a
w
a
y
Away from me. Not coming back.

Pretending. Ignoring. Being Blind.
Took my heart.
I want it back.
I want it back.

How? Just tell me...

Tell me 3 words.

Because I love you.
Love me back.
At least talk to me.
Pretend you care.
But ignore my love.

I love you.

the word 'away' has an effect on it; it's like concrete poetry. i prefer it over writing narrative poems, etc. because i like creating images by shaping the words into them, rather than attempting to form the words into vivid illustrations into people's minds, because i'm incapable of it. lol. i think i'm good at concrete poetry, and the word 'away' reminded me of it. good poem..i don't like reading love-related poems though. dunno, they seem so..common.

this isn't love.




this is lust.

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I like that

Very nice kim

Thanks, Jamie!

Man I feel like that right now. Love sucks butt. J. Lo's butt to be exact. It's good kimmy!

okay. you used the word 'love' in there, so go figure. people don't like it often when i say they're not in love but in lust. gets them aggravated.

Sorry. Haha. I'm kind of sad...but hey.. its just a poem. I can write silly poems right now if I wanted!

ehh i can relate >.< nice poem btw =]

What I used to feel. I thought that as long as everything stayed the same, I'd stay happy. But I was wrong...