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dont test me
i wrote this one in 6th grade...... stubborn.gif i am not happy with myselfe.



the rain

it keeps me up at night

a fever busting through

thrown among a crashing storm

bleeding icey drops of tears

frozed in the dense cold

atoss a freakish smile

ghastly pounding in my head

a glance above

a hideous breaze

to the ground

the rain

it keeps me up at night
nas
"a fever busting through
thrown among a crashing storm" thumbsup.gif
Winter
I love the part 'bleeding icey drops of tears'. I don't know what to say about it, just wow.
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