Hey im writing a new book on my xanga (if u search to my christmas entry and read on to when i stopped writing my first book, ull see my first work ) based on a play by post rpg i created called Eptsem Rpg (http://groups.msn.com/EptsemRpg) and id like some critique on my work. It has some minor grammatical and spelling errors but that was b/c i was trying to speed type it b4 i had to go for violin. lol please enjoy. My newest entry is where my new story begins. Feel free to ask about weird vocab from my game :)

whoops my xanga is www.xanga.com/sasukenaru ^^;; woops