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Phil2thejay
New song is out by us thumbsup.gif . Were back this time ARJUNA IS ON IT omg.gif doing his turntable thing. Yeah, we kinda rushed the final edit. >.< Sorry if we suck lol. Theme of the song is a dancingish type instead of our more.. previous emotional song we last did. Yeah, J.So sang off tune a bit, and she didn't wanna fix it. Sibling hatred, ya know?shrug.gif
Br3aker4lyfe, Atrack, J.So, Arjuna - Grind On The Floor

LYRICS
Br3aker4lyfe:
Look at her (Shes sexy)
Look at her (Shes fine)
Look at her (Shes mine)
Look at her (Shes sexy)
Look at her (Shes fine)
Look at her (Shes mine)
Look at her
Look at her

Yeah, Uhuh

Br3aker4lyfe:
Hey girl why messin with that fool
Grinding up and down all over his tool
Let me tell you
What I wanna do
Lets grind on the floor just me and you
Let me show you
That I'm feelin you
Put my nice lips all over you
Lemme kiss ya body until in the morning two
Yeah babe I wanna ride you too!

J.So:
People are so phony
Nosy coz they're lonely
Aren't you sick of the same thing?
They say so and so was dating
Love you or they're hatin
When it doesn't matter anyway
Cuz we're here tonight

Br3aker4lyfe & J.So
If you smiling, that should set the tone
Just be limber baby
If you let go, the music should groove your bones
Baby just remember


Atrack:
Now grind on me like I was pretty ricky
Move ya hips to the beat nah its not tricky
Grinding as you move ya hips
Grinding isn't that song made by clipse?
So sick how u dip it real low
Sorry Milian but she grinds like a pro
I know shes a pro, cause I feel it down below
I know cause her ass is like WOAH
I know I'm young but I feel the connection
Down belows telling me I need protection
I know it's wrong but what I'm telling you is true
Just grinding with you is making my balls blue

Br3aker4lyfe:
First time I saw you I was in a shock
Cuz the way that you looked made my body drop
I fell on the floor, looking for no more
Cuz I never seen a girl like you before
Whoa
Howd you get so fly I guess you to fly
Just to say goodbye from the smile from the lips
All the way down to your hips
I wanna grab ur body n give that body a lil kiss
Hold up, what you mean, I cant get a kiss?
Grinding up and down holding dem hips
Baby, you decide that I ain't your guy
Ain't gon lie ,Me in your space
but Im lovin the way you move your waist nd the way your lips taste
Dam girl why you hesitate
But oh well sit back relax
Nd watch us dance to the max

(Arjunas turntable freestyle scratch)
Alright now Juna Its your time Stop.
Now slow it down now now speed it back up.
iDecay
Good job, guys. I think I've heard this about 100 times already. tongue.gif
DivineFox
haha good shit guys!
HelloSunshine
Ah, I love it! It's awesome. Great job! thumbsup.gif
fathomlessdame
its not my style of music, but i like it =) its great
MackAkaA-TrAcK
nice job u guys and to myself on dis lol my part is 30 seconds
SarahxJoy
Great job on the whole thing! happy.gif
Simba
QUOTE(tininja @ Jun 22 2007, 07:44 PM) *
Good job, guys. I think I've heard this about 100 times already. tongue.gif
laugh.gif I know, right?

Ha ha, good job on the final edit, man.
Phil2thejay
QUOTE(Arjuna Capulong @ Jun 22 2007, 10:47 PM) *
laugh.gif I know, right?

Ha ha, good job on the final edit, man.

couldn't have done the final edit without you thumbsup.gif
dispn0ygonekrazy
yeah
i listened to this shit like 209381023 times yall kept playing it over and over but it came out good congrats.
Phil2thejay
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Jun 23 2007, 02:39 PM) *
yeah
i listened to this shit like 209381023 times yall kept playing it over and over but it came out good congrats.

You liked it.
I'll be sure to put you on the next track
Mercy
i like it alot.

And that sucks that everyone heard it 1000 times.Thats what you get using vent.
synthase
haha..great job thumbsup.gif
..nice lyrics wink.gif
Phil2thejay
QUOTE(superfluous @ Jun 23 2007, 08:28 PM) *
haha..great job thumbsup.gif
..nice lyrics wink.gif

thanks =P tongue.gif
QUOTE(Mercy @ Jun 23 2007, 05:21 PM) *
i like it alot.

And that sucks that everyone heard it 1000 times.Thats what you get using vent.

only juna,jerome,tina and mike heard it on vent. not everyone =P
MackAkaA-TrAcK
QUOTE(tininja @ Jun 22 2007, 07:44 PM) *
Good job, guys. I think I've heard this about 100 times already. tongue.gif

haha thanks glad u liked it even though u heard it about 100 times

QUOTE(Mercy @ Jun 23 2007, 05:21 PM) *
i like it alot.

And that sucks that everyone heard it 1000 times.Thats what you get using vent.


glad u liked it
MackAkaA-TrAcK
QUOTE(superfluous @ Jun 23 2007, 08:28 PM) *
haha..great job thumbsup.gif
..nice lyrics wink.gif

thanks haha shyt double post shyttt srry wont happen again
steve330
^NO!
Phil2thejay
QUOTE(brownsugar @ Jun 25 2007, 10:39 AM) *
Can I give my honest opinion without any of you getting mad?


Go ahead thumbsup.gif
We'll learn/improve from what we do wrong in our next song.
Phil2thejay
QUOTE(brownsugar @ Jun 25 2007, 11:04 AM) *
Check itttt

What equipment did you use to make this song? The track is nice, and I like how everything recorded sounds clear. The singing and the "rapping" doesn't sound fuzzy or anything. Pretty professional production.

There is a reason why I put rapping in quotes. Don't rap. Don't. The singing sounds really nice, but just don't rap. Especially with those lyrics. Those lyrics remind me of a pedophile pressuring a little girl to take her clothes off. Pushy, demanding, and out of place. You guys are kids right? Act like it. Be natural. Would you really say that to a girl you were trying to talk to IRL? Try being cute, sweet and charming--like Bow Wow or Romeo did when they were kid rappers. Rap about how you appreciate a girl, and you want to get to know her. Don't list what sexual actions you want to perform on her. Also what the girl is singing is kind of out of place with the whole message of the song. What IS the message of the song?

Arjuna kiledddddddd it though (that's a good thing). Good job. aniwink.gif

gawd I dont even know what wtf my sister make sup. Oh well. Message of the song is pretty much grinding with a girl and the girl is SUPPOSED to be a reply to what atrack and I said. But yeah know, shes 24. she pms' constantly and we just ler her sing what ever.
As for the lyrics. Dont worry, our next song is more along the lines of cuteness and love.
As for the production. We got our own studio down in mi casa.

Our group is now called Flipset~ instead of br3aker4lyfe,jso,atrack etc etc.
Currently in the making: Flipset - Can't Be Stopped. nice little sit back relax song for the summer ya know? thumbsup.gif
jeSs1cA
i love the lyrics
& the whole song is just good.

nice job thumbsup.gif can't wait to hear the other songs.
Phil2thejay
QUOTE(brownsugar @ Jun 25 2007, 01:52 PM) *
Oh and you guys should get some ghostwriters

oh?
like neyo? lolo laugh.gif
Moderator
Oh man, you guys are amazing. I love the music in the background and the singing. Looking forward to some more songs. Keep it coming guys. You rock!
Jeng
JUST HEARD IT FOR THE FIRST TIME. and LOL. cool..
dispn0ygonekrazy
psh ghost writers. I'm the realest of em all. lol jk Like I said before PJ it's koo but it's missing that energy. You gotta really dig in dude the music can surely improve especially your guy's flow sounds like your trying to fit in words into the measures, lyrics can be improved as well. what i mean by the measures it's like me trying to play as many notes I can into a measure but the beat is off and I go over get what im saying?
Simba
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Jun 25 2007, 08:05 PM) *
what i mean by the measures it's like me trying to play as many notes I can into a measure but the beat is off and I go over get what im saying?
Ha ha, we all know I was working on that one. =P
dispn0ygonekrazy
not you juna lol the "rappers"
Simba
Yeah, I was talking about that time I kept working on that slow part.
luxuriate
(Arjunas turntable freestyle scratch)
Alright now Juna Its your time Stop.
Now slow it down now now speed it back up.
Detective
I like it. So when the createblog album coming out? thumbsup.gif
Phil2thejay
QUOTE(designingskills @ Jun 26 2007, 10:14 AM) *
I like it. So when the createblog album coming out? thumbsup.gif

Douno yet =P maybe end of the summer possibly.
QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Jun 25 2007, 08:05 PM) *
You gotta really dig in dude the music can surely improve especially your guy's flow sounds like your trying to fit in words into the measures

Yeah there were at times where we had to fit words into measures =P
No lie. We were like shyzzz, how can we fit this on. biggrin.gif
Practice makes perfect though right? thumbsup.gif
We got 2 songs coming up. We think they'll make up for the failness of Grind On The Floor.

Can't Be Stopped
and
Officially Missing You 2007

Flipset~
chibichi15
^ laugh.gif That was great!
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