ParanoidAndroid
Aug 30 2006, 11:34 PM
Soft petals embracing silky skin
Light reigning upon beauty
Fleetingly gorgeous in every way
That's what it was
Her most beautiful smile
Like rain pouring beauty into this world
only to await the rising of the glorgious sun
Her most beautiful smile
Jubilant and nostalgic
Simple and yet extraordinary
Soft and yet strong
A hope passed on to the deceased
Envied by every gem and every treasure
Their worth burried in the world
Withering into the devastating frown
Of a predicament lost in her worries
I hope to see again
her most beautiful smile
Uronacid
Aug 31 2006, 10:53 AM
I like it... :] I had to read it twice, but I know exactly what your talking about... I mean, when a girl smiles and it's your fualt she's smiling... It's the most beautiful thing in the world...
ParanoidAndroid
Aug 31 2006, 03:41 PM
^exactly. A woman's most beautiful smile to a man, is the happines he caused.
demolished
Sep 1 2006, 04:05 AM
QUOTE(Uronacid @ Aug 31 2006, 8:53 AM)
I like it... :] I had to read it twice, but I know exactly what your talking about... I mean, when a girl smiles and it's your fualt she's smiling... It's the most beautiful thing in the world...
what? it's not our fault if we made someone laugh.
idk what are yoy saying
ParanoidAndroid
Sep 1 2006, 02:04 PM
^I guess he made a mistake of saying fault. More like caused. And it's alright if you don't understand. Everyone has their own interpretations.
KissMe2408
Sep 1 2006, 11:04 PM
Oh, wow this was beautiful, it made me smile =)
The first and last stanzas were my favorites.
This entire poem was beautiful, and I think my favorite one by you.
Great job =)
ParanoidAndroid
Sep 2 2006, 12:31 AM
^lol have you read all of mine? but thanks ^_^ <3 it's nice to know I have a fan<3 and your comment seemed by heart and means a lot to me.
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