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ParanoidAndroid
Soft petals embracing silky skin
Light reigning upon beauty
Fleetingly gorgeous in every way

That's what it was
Her most beautiful smile
Like rain pouring beauty into this world
only to await the rising of the glorgious sun

Her most beautiful smile
Jubilant and nostalgic
Simple and yet extraordinary
Soft and yet strong
A hope passed on to the deceased

Envied by every gem and every treasure
Their worth burried in the world

Withering into the devastating frown
Of a predicament lost in her worries
I hope to see again
her most beautiful smile
Uronacid
I like it... :] I had to read it twice, but I know exactly what your talking about... I mean, when a girl smiles and it's your fualt she's smiling... It's the most beautiful thing in the world...
ParanoidAndroid
^exactly. A woman's most beautiful smile to a man, is the happines he caused.
demolished
QUOTE(Uronacid @ Aug 31 2006, 8:53 AM) *
I like it... :] I had to read it twice, but I know exactly what your talking about... I mean, when a girl smiles and it's your fualt she's smiling... It's the most beautiful thing in the world...




what? it's not our fault if we made someone laugh. mellow.gif





idk what are yoy saying sad.gif
ParanoidAndroid
^I guess he made a mistake of saying fault. More like caused. And it's alright if you don't understand. Everyone has their own interpretations.
KissMe2408
Oh, wow this was beautiful, it made me smile =)

The first and last stanzas were my favorites.
This entire poem was beautiful, and I think my favorite one by you.
Great job =)
ParanoidAndroid
^lol have you read all of mine? but thanks ^_^ <3 it's nice to know I have a fan<3 and your comment seemed by heart and means a lot to me.
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