Sometimes I feel like I have nothing to give
worthless and unprecious of this life I live
Sometimes I feel like no one really cares
all by myself with out anyone there

Sometimes I feel like I carry everything on these shoulders
to prove my existence only to become stronger
Sometimes I feel like Im being stared down
scolded like a dog who cries and frowns

Just one look, Just one smile
everything in my life will finally be worth while
Take me away, Take me far
to heal my pain inflicted by these scars

Sometimes I feel like I've never been loved
cursed aside by the ones I couldn think of
Sometimes I feel as if everything ends
alongside my life with these feelings I cant Mend

Sometimes I feel like I Just want to die
drowning myself in these tears I'll cry
Sometimes I feel this ache in my heart
torn deep inside as it breaks me apart

Just one look, Just one smile
everything in my life will finally be worth while
Take me away, Take me far
to heal my pain inflicted by these scars

I can relate. Nice.

thnx .. Felt a little resentment today and made this poem/lyrics in about 5 mins

Wow. Hmm mind if i use a few of those lines in a siggy?

be my guest go ahead

Thank you thank you.

that one touched me.

thnx bro I'm surprised on how my own work touches me as well.it's like I can feel what others may feel like too

That's some good stuff Mike.
Only 5 minutes? Probably much better than anything I could write in five minutes.

Props.

lol thnx Jesus I had alot of practice ever since I joined 2 years ago i spent my whole time in this forum and posted topics I wrote so it kinda became a habit of writing things really quick

aww it made me cry
very deep and moving.

thank you everyone makes me in the mood for writing some more

My girlfriend read it, i sent it to her through aim. She asked who it was by and i was like this guy from the fourms and she goes nuh uh this is hella good hahaha. Nice job.

^ lol thnx bro I appreciate it.

nice poem. exactly how i feel right now. :(

if only i can express myself like you

gyea right on