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Jul 22 2010, 11:54 PM
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Funride.org Group: Member Posts: 326 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 542,299 |
I love this layout, check?
http://matt-lanter.org/amazingmattlayout.png |
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Jul 23 2010, 05:58 AM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Jesus, lose that font. Quick. I just 'bout shot myself. That goes for both the navigation font, foreground font, and background font. I'd try a nice sans-serif font.
Oh, and maybe do something about that border. It looks iffy. |
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Jul 23 2010, 10:04 AM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
agreeing with pretty much mike said. the black and gray rectangle could also go away, because that really ruins the aesthetic in this pic, in my opinion. you have a pretty good base, just needa change some things here and there.
( if you really want to have them, just keep one of them at least ) |
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Jul 23 2010, 10:43 AM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
Yeah, other than the text in the background and the font used for the title, it looks pretty good. Much better than that last one.
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Jul 23 2010, 12:17 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,938 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 667,832 |
The backround font is so cheesy!
and that top grey banner looks bad....I would just remove that part |
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