Poem for my ex, shouldnt of been |
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 Aug 22 2004, 02:22 PM
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Names Roy  Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,503  |
Not that great but here it is. She ruined my life and well this is how i feel.
"Compromises" Light the flame to my eternal doom all my love for you to consume shower you with these tears of joy awaiting the time for love to deploy the color of passion has painted my heart mournful I am for we are apart on my soul your smile is forever painted oh how I hope our love isnt tainted a great compromise we take each day in my heart you will forever stay nothing compares to the feelings i have wasted dreadful i am for the tears i have tasted i must succumb to these feelings inside alone in the dark waiting to subside love is marvelous, a powerful thing consuming me in your entire being my hearts in flames burning for you sacrificing everything to prove its true the glow in your eyes, the smile on your face stored in my heart, my sacred place i cherish the time you spend with me finally god has awnsered my plea when i look in your eyes im lost in your periphery no longer in my heart do i feel this misery these feelings of love i know its true with all my heart do i love you haunted by the kiss that sholdnt of been perilous i am, trapt in sin running in circles, consumed in your smile oh how i hope this is worthwhile bound by the love we once shared lured by the thought that you once cared looking to the past i know its not real my love for you i should conceal my hearts in agony, this is true insane i am, my life is through |
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Aug 22 2004, 02:32 PM
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it was long so i just read the first couple verses. good work, learn to move on and then forget about her
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Aug 22 2004, 02:41 PM
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 ADDiCTED2CB Group: Member Posts: 58 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,127 |
QUOTE it was long so i just read the first couple verses. good work, learn to move on and then forget about her thats sad... and yes ^^ i agree with him.. and should this be move to writings?? |
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Aug 23 2004, 01:33 AM
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 Hi! I'm Dani :) Group: Member Posts: 5,637 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,369 |
wow thats very insightful. um i think this belongs in writing
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Aug 23 2004, 03:11 PM
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- Moved to Interests>Writing -
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Aug 23 2004, 04:55 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 228 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,737 |
wow.. it's good. and so full of emotion
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Sep 5 2004, 12:00 PM
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That was sooo sweet i wish i had u as a bf
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Sep 5 2004, 12:01 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 38 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 46,745 |
will u i mean i saw ure pics and they were HOTT
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Sep 5 2004, 03:22 PM
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 The voices talk too much... -.-u Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
^_^u
I had to read it twice, because I'm so stupid. But nevertheless, it's really good. |
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