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rap competition, no freestyle anymore.
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post Jun 29 2005, 01:47 PM
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Yea-yuh, I came back from the room
Yo, kid, you prepared fo yo doom?
On top of yo head, gon' be lil' moons
Dis Jackie rappin'
Now it's happenin'
The way you actin'
Nobody messes wit me,
The one and only,
The great one, Jackie

Jason, you prepared?
Now what, you scared?
You is a kangsta,
but you ain't close to a gangsta,
so you is a wanksta

I f**ked yo mom, bitch
She looked like a damn witch
So I went fo' da ditch,
and went to Abercrombie & Fitch

You is a gangsta, you wish
Yo ass smells like fish
Dicks are yo fav dish
You ain't no hustla,
You is no pimp,
You is no gangsta,
You just a d**k


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post Jul 8 2005, 11:24 AM
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look at jackie this fruit who claims shes juicy
she claims shes a gangster
but she stays home watching reruns of i love lucy
she said "i f**ked yo mom" but that would make her a dykee
but i swear she wore my d**k more than i wear my nikes

i dont hate on you cuz youre a girl
i hate on you cuz u think youre the queen of the world
and we all just your peasents
i got 2 middle fingers
those are your presents
your highness
yo smell so bad i swear youre messin up my sinus
when it comes to rappers im just the finest
 
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post Jul 8 2005, 05:09 PM
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Competitive styles influenced by garbage
Makes it hard for real skill to be acknowledged
Pay homage to talented swagger
Instead of wack emcees with flows with a stench like lager
Pay attention to each line that rhymes with punchlines
That you and yours attempt to quote and underline
But recognize its mine belonging to the D-O-N
I'm not Jesus but I'm still your beginning and end.
 
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post Jul 11 2005, 05:20 PM
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QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jan 18 2005, 2:29 PM)
Man Jordan shut up you little chink
stop frontin while you runnin
didnt xzibit tell you to pimp your ass?
ha stop mean muggin
i got my magnum rifle
to shoot your ass flyin
dude stop lyin about shit
imma get crunk
make you all drunk
man stop da f**king funk
like your a purple haired punk
your just like a titanic shit that sunk
your banana as f**k
and i rap for bucks
im rappin in da stage
earning cash
while ya beggin for cash
go grab a good charlotte cd
to get ur punk ass leakin
man get some real stuff
imma hunt you down with my murda sight
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I know people have probly said this before me but..Damn man you suck buku ass. Don't even try. Good god.
 
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post Jul 11 2005, 10:31 PM
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im dope
like coke
that was cooked
in the kitchen
 
J-DraGoNz
post Jul 12 2005, 05:25 AM
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QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jan 15 2005, 2:26 PM)
Freestyling is when you have to spit out the words in like a minute without changing anything..in this case, I know in "freestyle competetition" all of them backspaced. Understand? rap is completely different.
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just to clarify, you can't freestyle with text, only on the mic. freestyling is when you rap off the top of your head.
I was gonna read all your guys' lyrics then i saw this was 4 pages long and i gave up lol. ill read all the ones after this though.


Yo, here I come; Jay's about to take over this game/
My name's not jason - I don't bring shame to my own name//1
So here I come so sick with the flow/
Spittin' metaphors while rippin' whores everywhere I go//2
And you know son I got the skills and the will/
I'm so ill that I knock ya bustas out like nyquil//3
And I'll kill any emcee that even thinks about steppin' to me/
Ya best be wearin' a vest G before you start testin' me//4
I'm army infantry and I'll put a bullet through your chest/
Like iraqi insurgents; I'll put a machette to your neck//5


bleh, I'm tired and don't feel like finishing lol. next time i write a full 8 bars
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 08:06 AM
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QUOTE(J-DraGoNz @ Jul 12 2005, 4:25 AM)
Spittin' metaphors while rippin' whores everywhere I go//2
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I'd go get tested if I were you. mellow.gif
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 08:07 AM
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^^ hahahaha
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 08:09 AM
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That was a nice rhyme too, but I just couldn't resist squeezing that joke in there.
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 08:14 AM
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^ haha thanks, it was a good joke =P
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 09:33 AM
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QUOTE(wonders79 @ Apr 12 2005, 9:34 PM)
yeah, Rik you're right:

Somebody feel a breeze in here, who left the windows open?
Vapors coming from my grill look like ya kinfolks smoking
Haters be singin' that song, "My Neck, My Back"
When they get smacked with the gat and be flat as a door mat
Internet thugs we pissed but since you wanna diss
I'ma take a pic of my d**k and save it on a disc
The file name is 'Suck This' and You've-You've got E-mail
You ever diss one realest..va'to in retail
I'll extinguish ya english while grabbin' my penis
and spray it all in ya face like R.Kelly do teen-kids
Car so foreign the plates say 'Me Don't Speak English'

http://www.lyricsdownload.com/chamillionai...yle-lyrics.html
well, well, well, who's surprised? mellow.gif
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holy shit jason you just got owned. damn how could you bite off someone? especially WORD FOR WORD?
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 09:45 AM
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shorty so seductive dancin' on me...
the way that she move is making me horny
if i wake up next to her in the morning
ima turn over and tell her lets do it again..





..damn im loving that song right now... haha
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 09:56 AM
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QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jan 15 2005, 3:26 PM)
Freestyling is when you have to spit out the words in like a minute without changing anything..in this case, I know in "freestyle competetition" all of them backspaced. Understand? rap is completely different.
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aight G you got this all WRONG freestyling is when you rhyme freely off the top of your head.

When you rap its about something specific like money, cars, life etc....

I think you watch too much 106 and park cool.gif
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 10:03 AM
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Oh here I go

I'm not a thief but my theme is a dream
to be the best mc on the scene
not for the cream, I ain't mean i'm nice
an Irish rhymin device
eat mc's like beans and rice
ya can't see me twice, I'm the one and only
if ya see someone like me the must be a phoney
like a city boys shirt in a country boutique - I'm so unique
no one can flow like keith, this ain't a
show of freaks so don't bring ya cameras
unless ya repeatadly sing 'Keithstradamus'
bandanas - I got none, thats not my style
a rhyme - I can drop one with the force of a shotgun it's vile
if ya know dont act in denial
cuz thats a cheaters thing to do - to refuse what is true
dont test me I'm not stupid, nor am I a gangsta
but this is still smooth shit that murderers can move with
ya got that? when i come in contact with combat
I'll spit shit and put Dublin on the Hip-Hop map
gotta stay focused and no go off track
if I fail to prevail I'll pop back
d'ont think it's an act, adapt the fact
I don't interact with people who kiss asses perhaps it's,
cuz my vision is different
when I see a trendy mc I know I'm not equivalent
time fo you to know what
I'm all about and how when I start I wont stop
like an uncontrolled robot,
I'm so hot cool.gif
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 11:25 AM
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everyone pre writes.. nobody really freestyles anymore ermm.gif
 
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post Jul 12 2005, 12:24 PM
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Check my sig, my cousin freestyled that shit on the phone yesterday, he's 13.
 
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post Jul 13 2005, 01:58 AM
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so is this even a competition anymore? what is this lol
 
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post Jul 17 2005, 11:36 PM
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Watch these suckers step up and get done//
You wouldn't know talent if you were Elvis's son//
My peoples seek lyrical justice when I Bust this//
If you were MC Hammer, you still couldn't touch this//
I open up the doors for verbal communication//
But if we can't agree, then who will be the one to show dedication//
I make provisions for lost ones who have no hope//
Im climbing up the peak trying not to fall off the slope//
These people take life as one big joke//
Until they staring down a barrel of a gun about to get smoked//
I must profess in this profession my flow is prodigious//
Its a few soldiers in this world, the rest are just bitches//
Just to set the situation correct,
I mean that word out of no harm and no disrespect//
Its just in turbulent times you can't frantic and fret ,
Especially when your the one placing the highest bet//
Im able to bounce back and show great resilience//
Only oustanding achievements will show your brilliance//
 
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post Jul 17 2005, 11:50 PM
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I'm a fly chick and i rap day or night
but if you said i wasn't ghetto than you probably are right//
I can drive in the car and park where I like
Cause everyone loves me cause my spinners are tight//
I'm so awful, but I'm like the suburban queen
In my mom's navigator and a rented limosine//
I'm so bad at rapping, but I respect Eminem
Even though I don't really even listen to him...
and I'm so freakin pale and I look so white
That when I'm chilling in the club people use me as a light//

I don't care about drugs- I don't do them "just for fun"
And I don't talk like it's cool to shoot people with a gun
And If you tell me I'm an idiot and really don't know rap
I don't care, violence is wrong; Your ignorance is Cr*p.

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<33 you guys. That's my two cents. Yeah I know i insulted myself, but really I have a nickname---the girl that I should NEVER rap. EVER. biggrin.gif
 
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post Jul 18 2005, 02:33 AM
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QUOTE(hiphop junkie @ Jul 11 2005, 9:31 PM)
im dope
like coke
that was cooked
in the kitchen

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Lmfao, that made me laugh out loud. I'm so weird.

Edit//

I rock peas on my head, but don't call me a peahead,
I got bees on my head, but don't call me a beehead,
I got Bruce Lees on my head, but don't call me a Leehead,
Now please excuse me, I gotta get my tree fed.

- Andy Milonakis
 
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post Jul 18 2005, 02:30 PM
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QUOTE(nightmare4taki @ Jul 17 2005, 9:36 PM)
Watch these suckers step up and get done//
You wouldn't know talent if you were Elvis's son//
My peoples seek lyrical justice when I  Bust this//
If you were MC Hammer, you still couldn't touch this//
I open up the doors for verbal communication//
But if we can't agree, then who will be the one to show dedication//
I make provisions for lost ones who have no hope//
Im climbing up the peak trying not to fall off the slope//
These people take life as one big joke//
Until they staring down a barrel of a gun about to get smoked//
I must profess in this profession my flow is prodigious//
Its a few soldiers in this world, the rest are just bitches//
Just to set the situation correct,
I mean that word out of no harm and no disrespect//
Its just in turbulent times you can't frantic and fret ,
Especially when your the one placing the highest bet//
Im able to bounce back and show great resilience//
Only oustanding achievements will show your brilliance//
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that was pretty dope. some nice multis and metas. rhyme structure was straight.
 
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post Jul 24 2006, 11:27 PM
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Hold up, let me bring back this topic//
Half these Cbers talk but wont pop it//


//
 
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post Aug 7 2006, 05:14 PM
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The kid got flow for sho, I challenge suckas like this math//
Fast as lightning, Im enlightened, I took myself down a righteous path//
The gemini, I look down on you Im so high//
Never shy, I move you just like a driveby//
You know the name man, bullets aren't apart of my game plan//
Wordplay like hangman, the one that put these cats to shame man//
THe kid is a big tymer, Let me give you a reminder//
My flow is unforgetful to a person with alzheimer's//
 
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post Nov 28 2008, 05:07 PM
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yo, i come from New Zealand if you know what i'm feeling,
just because i'm different some people dont consider it,
yea, just cause i'm a Maori, people acting all sorry, na not really, not even jokingly,
every ones all good to every body,
every one acting all nice to any body,
this is the end of my rap and thats a fact.

YEEAA, nah jokes biggrin.gif biggrin.gif
 
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post Nov 28 2008, 05:40 PM
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QUOTE(Hell-Rell @ Jul 13 2005, 05:56 AM) *
aight G you got this all WRONG freestyling is when you rhyme freely off the top of your head.

When you rap its about something specific like money, cars, life etc....

I think you watch too much 106 and park cool.gif


yo really dat true, i didn't even know that, but now i do, so thank you,
i didn't even know the difference between freestyling and raping, but now i do and i can go tell all my best friends,
im raping right now off the top of my head, and saying any word that comes to head,
what do ya think is it alright or is this up tight.
 

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