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Posted by: Statistik Jan 15 2005, 04:19 PM

A mod can close the other topic "freestyle competition" because datru was right..that wasnt freestyling..and there's a difference between freestyle and rap, so new clean topic here. RAP COMPETITION.

NEW RULES//: The First 3 Posts Of Their Rap Lyrics, I will read and I will decide who had the best one. FIRST 3

Datru Katalyst is the second judge because i said so lol

Posted by: x____duckii Jan 15 2005, 04:22 PM

What is the difference between rap and freestyling, anyways?

Posted by: Statistik Jan 15 2005, 04:26 PM

Freestyling is when you have to spit out the words in like a minute without changing anything..in this case, I know in "freestyle competetition" all of them backspaced. Understand? rap is completely different.

Posted by: roberts_pink_drums Jan 15 2005, 06:31 PM

oh gosh.. not another one of these games..

Posted by: LeSLiE Jan 15 2005, 06:32 PM

yo, my name is leslie
and i can't rap for crap



PICK ME PICK ME

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 15 2005, 07:09 PM

this is gonna be very entertaining to watch once people start rapping in here.

Posted by: Funky Buddha Jan 15 2005, 07:12 PM

Man Jason.... why are you even trying?

Posted by: x____duckii Jan 16 2005, 02:21 AM

Yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah
Wdup, my name is Jackie
And I'll be here to make cha'll happy
Once I'll give all of this weed
Chu'll be saying "dis is all chu need"
So while you be listening to me rap,
Chu'll be waitin fo me to take a crap

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 16 2005, 12:25 PM

haha.. good try. we need pro rappers in here, lol.

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Jan 16 2005, 07:35 PM

i need no weed nor any ecstasy
anyday you'd be taken down lyrically
next time when you see me on the street
you'd be beggin for mercy like im the police
get down below my knee and kiss my feet do anything to please me
you'd be sorry to ever meet me
you'd be teased in your own sleep

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 16 2005, 08:50 PM

the first 3 lines were good, but i didn't get the last lines.

Posted by: blowpops69 Jan 17 2005, 09:15 PM

damn you pimp, your gettin on my good side
but i aint gona kiss you dumb a$$ feet so step aside
new sherrif in town so watch your back
take your cheap a$$ drugs and get yur head out da crack
i aint gona say it again
or u'll be in real pain tonight

ha. stupid asian rapping.

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 17 2005, 10:33 PM

woa... im glad i quit rapping for asian pop and r&b. this doesn't even sound intense anymore.

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Jan 18 2005, 02:29 AM

tonight you be staying asleep under R.I.P being loney
i dont really wanna see you as a zombie, homie
cuz obviously you are way too ugly for me to see
your skin is horny green it looks like seaweed
go pick up a copy of a CD from jay-z
maybe you can learn a little sometin
shit blows up your brain insane
you'll kno that hip hops a game thats off the chain
its only for ppl with rhymes in their vains
so quit being lame, w/e you do nothins gonna change
so what do you do you when get bored at home?
PLAY Jordan Inc. Grand Theft Auto!
its only 39.00 so get your sh*t now or no
its the same price even at gamestop
if you cant efford it then get a job!
hop your way like a fob to the block
find that place mcdonalds and ask for a job
you can flip a burger thats better than jack's
hello sir, may i order a big mac?

i dunno, my head hurts

Posted by: Statistik Jan 18 2005, 05:29 PM

Man Jordan shut up you little chink
stop frontin while you runnin
didnt xzibit tell you to pimp your ass?
ha stop mean muggin
i got my magnum rifle
to shoot your ass flyin
dude stop lyin about shit
imma get crunk
make you all drunk
man stop da f**king funk
like your a purple haired punk
your just like a titanic shit that sunk
your banana as f**k
and i rap for bucks
im rappin in da stage
earning cash
while ya beggin for cash
go grab a good charlotte cd
to get ur punk ass leakin
man get some real stuff
imma hunt you down with my murda sight

Posted by: delightfullyinsane Jan 18 2005, 05:31 PM

i like how everyones just changing the words and making these raps up while if any rapper actually used it with the right beat, theyd be millionaires.

as for me, im cuban and i dont play like that, ya hurd?! XD

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 18 2005, 10:08 PM

i didn't like that rhyming, no offense. constructive criticism fact 1: using the same letters unk too much. i dont like it. jordan's lines own this whole verse.



LOL! hahahahaha, changing the words.... nahhh... so far, i dont see any that many good lines here so i doubt this kind of rhyming can make them millionares.

Posted by: wind&fire Jan 18 2005, 10:16 PM

you're a disgrace to our race...

Posted by: blowpops69 Jan 19 2005, 10:03 PM

okay. i cant believe yall are taking these seriously. geebus.

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 19 2005, 10:22 PM

mmmmhmmm.. hip-hop has changed everybody, so look what happened.

Posted by: jnukes Jan 19 2005, 10:44 PM

yo jason man you a disgrace to our race//
take that gun in your avatar and point it to your face//
end ya life now, no, juss end your rap game//
put yo fingers round yo d**k and stick with that "wrap" game//
those lines were hella whack, i know why you made this thread//
so you can takes some notes on me and dread//
that you cant be good as me, what's your interest in hip hop ?//
take s'more notes and on tha stage flip-flop//


well, gotta get back to homework .. juss browsin this place and juss couldn't resist ... heh .. i'll be back ..

Posted by: blowpops69 Jan 19 2005, 10:46 PM

jasons asian? *shocked*

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 19 2005, 11:06 PM

woa.... i gotta admit, even though that rhyming wasn't good, it owned jason's rhyming, LOL!!!



yeahhh

Posted by: wind&fire Jan 21 2005, 06:32 PM

*shakes head*

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Jan 21 2005, 07:47 PM

jason your rap sucks in every single part
you aint even far enough cuz you a retard
and stop using ur cigar cuz you bustin ur heart
and you smell like fart perhaps you have SARS
your rhymes are lies and this is ur life
every time when i slide i make you cry
and you call that hip hop?
it sounds like a buncha slob from a fob
cant you see you cant ever beat me
i was a real seed raised from the streets
and now that seed's a tree and thats me
you were raised after feeding on pee
and you turned out to be a he-she
dont be mad cuz i called you a she-male
i know you thinkin bout hittin me with a frail
but you are really the one thats going to hell
nobodys buyin ur crack sales and you aint livin well
the next thing you know is that you end up in jail
you tried getting out after bail but then you fail
when you fainally came out from your trail, you turned pale
too much cigarettes got you crawling on the trail
basically this is wut im sayin
is that you are nothing but lame
you dont have a single cell in ur brain
cuz those druggs are giving you pain

Posted by: tofumonzter Jan 21 2005, 07:58 PM

wow..

Posted by: roberts_pink_drums Jan 21 2005, 08:22 PM

whoa so much hating.. my eyes hurt when i read all that rap..

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 21 2005, 08:28 PM

okay news. jason's and jordan's raps r both terrible just reading the rhymes itself, no offense.
we need a surprise hip-hopper in here. =D

Posted by: roberts_pink_drums Jan 21 2005, 08:39 PM

Wait! Let me call in 50 cent to show these fools who can rap! *looks for cell phone*

Posted by: jnukes Jan 21 2005, 09:32 PM

azn_r4pf4n -- yea, you're totally right .. yea no offense jordan and jason .. but yea they're kinda .. .. dry ... ... lol.. cept tha part about 'slob from a fob' that was pretty good .. haha ..

roberts_pink_drums -- i don't know about you, but i don't think 50's that good .. -.-;;..

Posted by: roberts_pink_drums Jan 21 2005, 09:34 PM

jnukes >>> lol I don't even listen to rap, hip hop, or r&b.. lol.. that's the only hip hop/rap/r&b singer i know.. sorry lol

Posted by: blowpops69 Jan 21 2005, 10:39 PM

but but. nothing about my rap. im so hurt...

yes i know i suck.

Posted by: wind&fire Jan 22 2005, 06:43 AM

THERES A NEW AZN RAPPER CALLED ISRAEL!!!!!!!!

cough*

ahem*

sorry ...

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 22 2005, 12:50 PM

seriously? hey, could u gimme the links of his songs or a link of his biography.? i gotta check it out

Posted by: wind&fire Jan 22 2005, 11:36 PM

ummm.... idk... i was watching music vidoes and i just saw him...

ill look for it...

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Jan 23 2005, 01:47 AM

what record is he on?

Posted by: wind&fire Jan 23 2005, 04:08 AM

uhhhhhh this is all going down in australia but idk if you guys are stil interested.. i couldnt find much about him cos hes still so new but i found this



the link is here

http://www.village.com.au/music.asp#israel

he aint that good though....

sorry to hype you all....

[edit]

read it all he is with his own discovered record caled elite fleet productions and he has workied with MC Jin when here was here in AUS

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Jan 23 2005, 04:24 PM

i bet even the rappers in asia are better than him

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Jan 23 2005, 05:50 PM

lol.. he made contact with the legendary Def Jam in Japan...
I know this korean rapper that might be better than him... he's great.. his name is 1TYM (raps in korean.. hecka good)

Posted by: wind&fire Jan 23 2005, 06:42 PM

^BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA 1TYM is a collective group!!! hahahahahaha

ahem....

eric from shinhwa is better tho

Posted by: D-12 $yc0 Feb 21 2005, 01:52 AM

HeRe Ma ShiT Ryte HeRe

FaGgots ParaLyzed From My PimP SlaP
Why Do You ThinK thaT ThE HoSPitAls So FuLl NowAdaYs ...
Cuz i'm unLeAshin the ARt Of WaR on YoU DyKes N gays !!
WaTCh YouR MoUth shUt DoWn When The GuN ClaPs
AnD ThE RiBs Open Up WheN thE TriGger SnaPs
f**k WiTH a PsyCho, n yoUr DaughTers NeCk CrAcks
THis Is NOThInG But THe GuTter ShIt To It'S BeSt PoTeNTial
1OuTlAw SpiTin LinEs Of stRaIGht GAnGsTa CredenTial
As Soon As THe NAmE Is heArd, YoU KnOw You LoSe
I'll bE TorTuring YoUr FamIly TrEE, LiKe HiTLer Did to The JeWs
EXecUTioN By gAs, TNT Or A.K ... YoU ChooSe
Be Quick Cus THe GasoLiNe Is LeAKing ... N I'm AbOuT To LiGhT ThE FuSe
My RouTine is Like ... Pull Up, Run Up, SnaTch ThE Mans MonEy N CoKe
ThEn poP EnuFf ShElls tO MaKe hiS fACe LoOk Like a fuKiN egg YoLk
LeT ThE alleyway CaT Nibble On Your PeICe of FlesH
I StriKe bEst when ThE BEEF is FReSH !!!
I'M a Man whO LoVes To eJeCt the LeAd
Put 30 right ThrouGh YoUr FuKin HeAd !!
CoMe In AnY ColouR .. i'M SenDin YoU BAcK ReD
AnD HiGhjAcK ThE AmbuLancE To MakE SuRe The ParAmeDiCs PronOunce You Dead
I ussually JuS ChiLL, BuT All I nEEd Is A PuSh,
N I'll ShOw YoU whAt OsAMa WouLd Do If he GoT hIS HanDs On BuSh

Posted by: wind&fire Feb 21 2005, 02:43 AM

^ it doesnt really flow... and did it take you an hour to write in sticky caps ...unless you pasted it from some where....

Posted by: D-12 $yc0 Feb 21 2005, 05:11 AM

it took me 30 mins on microsoft word........so f**k offffff

Posted by: wind&fire Feb 21 2005, 11:27 PM

^awwww im so hurt,,, cant you take criticism?

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Feb 25 2005, 02:05 AM

ah typing up and down hurts my eyes

Posted by: mouse_3k Feb 25 2005, 11:47 PM

I cant rap as quick as Twista
Nor can I flow like Ciara
But I got something to say
On this very day
Directly to this lil noob
With the name D-12 $yc0
His public hair looks like Pubic hair
Seems like some wannabe Jerry Curls
Get yo ass back to the salon
And get your hair re-done

Your rhymes are weak
I doubt it will make anyone leak
You seem like some wannabe nigga
Its best you act as a wigga
No one can even read your crap
And you call your sh*t rap?
I bet you got those lines from Ja Rule
And you know Ja is just a plain fool
Just like you

And you typing in sticky caps

Yah….right…
Either you need Jesus or Moses
Or you need to pop them pills for an over-dosage

[/end]


yes..its very corny indeed

Posted by: Funky Buddha Mar 29 2005, 04:48 AM

Its alright Jason
Kids are doing it all across the nation
Taking things making it as their own
Thing your all Kangsta and hip
Pfft, get a grip
Your just another rip
The battles on
Now its time to take it
Question is, will you be able to make it?
Now, you gotta use your brain
In order to retain
Your one n' only position in this game


I was bored ok...

Posted by: lolita kitty Mar 29 2005, 05:20 AM

wow, old topic brought back 0.o
heh. im just watching. >.<

Posted by: Funky Buddha Mar 29 2005, 05:22 AM

Like I said I was bored, and I had happened to stumble across this topic while searching useless stuff with CB's seach feature. Now, we can have fun and diss Jason without getting in trouble! =D *Cough*Its all fun and games of course *cough*

Maybe, we can bring this game back too. It was pretty cool.

Posted by: lolita kitty Mar 29 2005, 05:23 AM

lmfao, hehe. now that he has a bad, erm... rep, i guess this topic has a bit more use to it ^^
anyways, im just continuing to read... heh.

Posted by: helllla jankyyyy Mar 29 2005, 08:45 PM

Haha these are so interesting

Posted by: salcha Mar 29 2005, 11:56 PM

very amusing, jason, start rapping
everyone else...start critisizing!

heh, jk.

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 29 2005, 11:59 PM

Can someone tell me why Jason wants to be black//
Everything that comes from his mouth is wack//
We all know the girls dont give you no play//
Especially when you said you masturbate 3 times a day//
Jnukes already nuked you twice//
And Now its my turn to melt you like ice//
Jason your not from the matrix so your not the one//
This guys a gangster but doesn't have a gun//
Dont be mad about your girl cuz i chose her//
Everyone on CB knows your nothing but a poser//
Okay he wants to battle and get turned into ashes//
I thought you were a ganster but on your mugshot you have glasses//
Jason Im really going to be honest//
WHAT THE F*CK ARE YOU TRYING TO ACCOMPLISH//
You will never win you will never finish//
ANd your whole style is nothing but blemish//
You steal copyrighted lyrics and now those artist should start sueing//
Your the reason why everyon on CB is booing//
Im really not impressed//
See look at him he doesn't know how to dress//

Posted by: wind&fire Mar 30 2005, 12:32 AM

you guys are soo f**king annoying.. cant you guys just forgive him, instead of continously making fun of him... get over it ... its over... or is that you have nothing interesting to do than to talk about Jason cos i think hed be feeling pretty secial that you guys just LOVE to talk about him....

just make the freestyle against who ever but dont just cotinously abuse jason... im only doing this cos i see the stupidity in all of it

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 30 2005, 12:37 AM

Sorry wind&fire but I must get on him on a daily basis/
Because he is a pain in the ass and a racist/

Posted by: Mireh Mar 30 2005, 12:44 AM

lmfao. this is hilarious.

encore! encore!

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 30 2005, 12:49 AM

Yes it is hilarious the way various people attack Jason//
Because hes more trouble than Anthony Mason//
This man is a joke someone please ban him//
Because nobody in CB can really Stand him//
Okay! All man! What the f*ck//
Maybe I shouldn't get on him because he really s*cks//

Posted by: wind&fire Mar 30 2005, 12:57 AM

so he doesnt deserve redemtion?

Posted by: lolita kitty Mar 30 2005, 12:58 AM

hehehehee... *continues watching*

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 30 2005, 12:59 AM

STOP IT YOUR MAKING ME FEEL SORRY FOR HIM!!!! YOUR MAKING ME BECOME SYMPATHETIC.

Posted by: lolita kitty Mar 30 2005, 01:00 AM

and your making that sound like a bad thing
well, if it is to you, then...

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 30 2005, 01:01 AM

BUT THIS IS JASON WE R TALKIN ABOUT

Posted by: wind&fire Mar 30 2005, 01:04 AM

and he is a person too... think about it from his perective... he's probably messed up and trying to find a identity (shit im getting into my english essay) and he just can express himself competantly...

Posted by: basick Mar 30 2005, 01:06 AM

f**k jason

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 30 2005, 01:08 AM

POOR JASON. NOW I REALLY FEEL SRRY FOR HIM.

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 30 2005, 01:09 AM

SIKE IM never really sympathetic//
Especially since he is really pathetic//

oh sh*t a double post

Damn that was cold hearted. NICE ONE

Posted by: wind&fire Mar 30 2005, 01:14 AM

there is and edit button for a reason

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 30 2005, 01:16 AM

I know i use it all the time. Im doing my calculus homework so i cant think right. These series and sequences r getting to me.

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Mar 30 2005, 01:29 AM

stop, i wanna see people rhyming

Posted by: nightmare4taki Mar 30 2005, 01:39 AM

My vocab is the equivalent of word perfect//
I think that Jason Kang is about to short circuit//
Jason your a kangsta so where is your gang//
WHy r you on CB? Shouldnt you be out "Poppin THEM THANGS"//
Okay we know you r a fake and a loser//
Your more false than Kobe's accuser//
You wannabe rapper your not the imperial//
You need to work on your rap and get some new material//
When will the memberbashing come to a cease//
Probally when Jason stops DISTURBIN THE PEACE//

Posted by: smilz2dasun Mar 30 2005, 02:40 AM

haha. nice... i like those lines..
i wonder where jason is.

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 11 2005, 08:46 PM

Jason is somewhere trying to get through his identity crisis

Posted by: basick Apr 11 2005, 08:48 PM

jason is down there hanging on to my nuts as hard as he can...

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 11 2005, 08:51 PM

This is going to turn into the wheres jason forum

Jason is on 50s nuts

Posted by: wayne Apr 11 2005, 09:20 PM

check... (haha)

you playin' this game//
you soundin' the same//
you must be insane//
remember this rappers name//
imprint this in ya brain//
you've stepped to the boss//
and your family might take a loss//
i keep it goin'//
i keep on flowin'//
ill assasinate you in the back of an alley//
but knowbody's gonna be knowin'//
im puttin lives on hold//
if you really think you're that bold//
step to the plate, n1994 you've been told//
you cant rap, you're a freaking joke//
ill put 2 caps down your throat like im clearing your cold//
your e-rep is a wrap//
your flow is like nyquil//
mine is equvilent to crack//
once you hooked, you done//
and there aint no goin back//
you're a phony, a fraud, fake, you dont understand//
that the man makes the clothes, the clothes dont make hte man//
but i guess it doesnt apply cause your just a little boy//
so ima play with your flow like a toy//

you dont even rhyme//
so please explain why you are wasting everyone's time?//
you dont have a riffle, let alone a 9//
so why even mention one in one of your lines?//
its n1994's like you who put rap to shame//
with lies and lines made up for street cred.//
the same kinda nigga's who just got over pee-ing in the bed//

d o n e

Posted by: basick Apr 11 2005, 10:04 PM

lol wayne please stop ...

Posted by: wayne Apr 12 2005, 05:19 AM

lol

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 12 2005, 02:04 PM

Is it all about the content or all about the hooks//
Because its not about the talent its more about the looks//
Make it hotter than a sweater and make your girl more wetter//
No one can do it LIKE me so BITE me Im better//
I be the one asking where the real n*ggas at//
I never go for first base because I go straight for the cat// *Meow*
Its mortal combat but get shot and you cant comeback//
You always second because IM the first that done that//
I stand supreme like THURGOOD MARSHALL//
But your not Marshall Mathers your less than partial//
I misbehave and send more than just a shockwave//
Work you to death like a master with his slave//
I climb the latter to the point you want matter//
Make you shatter while your girl reaching for my bladder//
Im not a net-cee i do this sh*t this for fun//
Jason cant finish what he started so he must be done//

Posted by: Nugget Apr 12 2005, 04:27 PM

Ok, ok, ok
Although I can't rap, Let alone rhyme
Each and everyone of you 'rappers' are wasting my time
This is the rap forum, didn't yall read the rule?
It never said anything about makin' Jason here lookin' like a fool
I really hate it when I come here and see
That all yall that think you can rap, you just another wannabe
Ha, guess that makes me one too but I can't rap
So, this is my last one, I can't take this crap
I'm out my lovers and friends
This is ridiculous, this is my end

ROFL!! Dude, do I not totally suck.

Posted by: Angel_Cece Apr 12 2005, 04:39 PM

im so cool
i take swimming lessons at the community pool
don't hate on me
i'll take your glasses off and make you unable to see
i'm an amateur but at least im rhyming
unlike jason, he's like "whats the right 'timing'?"

mwhehehehe

Posted by: jooleeah Apr 12 2005, 05:24 PM

^
Haha, that was amusing.

Anyway. This thing is crazy

Posted by: Statistik Apr 12 2005, 06:16 PM

taki
u think im done?
i dont think so
i came here for another shot to make you run
Internet thugs we pissed but since you wanna diss
I'ma take a pic of my d**k and save it on a disc
The file name is 'Suck This' and You've-You've got E-mail
You ever diss one realest..va'to in retail
I'll extinguish ya english while grabbin' my penis
and spray it all in ya face like R.Kelly do teen-kids
Car so foreign the plates say 'Me Don't Speak English'

Posted by: Funky Buddha Apr 12 2005, 06:22 PM

^^Man I bet like 35405465410 million $$ that he didnt write that... c'mon, using va'to now? Hahahahahaha

Posted by: salcha Apr 12 2005, 11:34 PM

yeah, Rik you're right:

Somebody feel a breeze in here, who left the windows open?
Vapors coming from my grill look like ya kinfolks smoking
Haters be singin' that song, "My Neck, My Back"
When they get smacked with the gat and be flat as a door mat
Internet thugs we pissed but since you wanna diss
I'ma take a pic of my d**k and save it on a disc
The file name is 'Suck This' and You've-You've got E-mail
You ever diss one realest..va'to in retail
I'll extinguish ya english while grabbin' my penis
and spray it all in ya face like R.Kelly do teen-kids
Car so foreign the plates say 'Me Don't Speak English'

http://www.lyricsdownload.com/chamillionaire-nothin-freestyle-lyrics.html
well, well, well, who's surprised?

Posted by: Funky Buddha Apr 12 2005, 11:37 PM

Ha! Ok now pay me $$35405465410 million

Posted by: wind&fire Apr 13 2005, 03:11 AM

bout time some one brought this back

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 13 2005, 01:29 PM

A gangster your not but would like to be it//
If you took a pic of your d*ck you couldn't even see it//
I SAID Im not a RAPPER just having a little fun//
After I finish Jason Im going to become Brian Mcknight and start back at one//
OMG FUNKY BUDDHA JUST WON OVER A MILLION//
BECUZ JASON STOLE LYRICS FROM CHAMILLION//
You need to get a THROWBACK and GO BACK to your mama//
Ill stop ya and chop ya up like JIN KAZAMA//
Yes I be the one taking people far down under//
Im rich b*tch, because I just finished rolling dice with stevie wonder//
G-unit fag you will get put in a bag automatic//
Your not NAS so your not illmatic//
Rhythmatic with these flows that I come through & kick//
Your done now go copy and paste another artist's hit//

Posted by: FreeStickers Apr 13 2005, 07:45 PM

hahahaha Good one.

Man, I enjoy seeing Jason make a fool of himself.

Posted by: jambaJUICE Apr 13 2005, 08:02 PM

wow? this is still alive? o.o

hahaha at nightmare's

Posted by: Nugget Apr 13 2005, 10:53 PM

Dude, after the other forum of Jason's defeat, he still does the same thing. Does he not understand? I take back my 'rap'. Rofl.

Posted by: F_L_I_P Apr 13 2005, 11:04 PM

hahaha these are really good. You guys should have made this a rap battle instead so there can be a reason you can diss him.

-Phil-

Posted by: azn_r4pf4n Apr 13 2005, 11:32 PM

hahahahhaa! that's random.

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 14 2005, 12:21 AM

Girl you are finer than lil Kim//
Im one of the many brothers that can't swim//
Got n*ggas that want to diss me and girls that want to kiss me//
Im back like Chapelle did you people miss me//
Hello Its the yellow black man with the tan//
I do what I can to make people understand//
Never overated so you know these people hated//
So highly educated my moves cant be anticipated//
Girl I can sooth ya and make you feel calm like the clouds//
I play my music loud when Im rocking the crowd//
Got these people saying does he really give a f*ck//
And aznangel4lyfe357 your rap was cool it didn't suck//

Posted by: wind&fire Apr 15 2005, 06:23 AM

you lost it right there...

Posted by: mzkandi Apr 15 2005, 06:55 AM

ahahah I really liked that

Posted by: Xx ~ MaTT ~ xX Apr 15 2005, 11:09 AM

Trust me guy...
You aint gonna stay.
My rhymes are better then yours...
They'll blow you away.


That's just a little sample...

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 15 2005, 04:25 PM

^
I say this COHERENT its APPARENT I want to be BLOWN~AWAY//
Because your rhymes should be THROWN~AWAY and never used another DAY//
Another 8mile follower who wants to be just like EM//
Skill you dont GOT~IT but your PSYCHOTIC just like HIM//
Please dont get OFFENDED//
We can do this short or EXTENDED//
My WIND&FIRE will make you fadaway like MJ//
Make you #1 to fall off like Anfernee Hardaway//
I got this rap SEALED from the in to the OUTFIELD//
In the LEFT~FIELD Your a fan and Im Gary SHEFFIELED//
Nope Lets keep it REAL your a fan and Im and Im Jermaine ONEAL//
To beat me is bogus especially when you have a better chance to KILL~BILL//

Posted by: krn_kiddo254 Apr 17 2005, 01:39 AM

ok, now listen this is da rap game
im jus herre 2 spit as day say ma name
man all u fake ass wallabee wannabees ain' nothin' but lame
talkin 'bout hittin weed ya'll all jus' shame
u a disgrace jus' cover yo face
and matt listen
u have no rhymes
trust me
im jus killin da dimes
while da clock ticks life away
jus like i say
my lyrics r unreal
i hit at u like dis is unreal
but i jus gotta ask
is dis shit 4real?
man dis topic is way off task
u readin this shit?
i jus took a bit
theres a pit of blood in da pool
iz yourz
u jus been schooled

Posted by: SweetAngel_90 Apr 18 2005, 05:05 PM

u tell me what u do
u tell me y u deal
u tell me how it feels
u tell me that what u
do is wrong but what u
do feels good but is that
really how u want to deal
and how u want to feel..????????????
(please dont harm ur self)

Ok it might not be that good but it has alot of meaning to people who harm them selfs................

Posted by: Statistik Apr 18 2005, 05:48 PM

Haha u f**kers
dont know the definition of real rap and hip-hop
sounds more like a wack version of punk pop
yeah jason's on top
you guys hatin on me cuz ur spitting abilities drop
im the real man cmon man

Posted by: Statistik Apr 18 2005, 05:48 PM

Haha u f**kers
dont know the definition of real rap and hip-hop
sounds more like a wack version of punk pop
yeah jason's on top
you guys hatin on me cuz ur spitting abilities drop
im the real man cmon man

Posted by: wind&fire Apr 18 2005, 06:48 PM

^ hahahahahahahhaha!!!! welll either do you to have the nerve to steal lyrics over and over again...

seriosly you dont even look like a real man... youre still like a 10 yr old pale asian boy

Posted by: krn_kiddo254 Apr 18 2005, 07:52 PM

u talkin 2 me...? cuz if youz talkin to me iz on beyotch! lol

edit--
and thats because im only 16 and i took that pic last year... but i still schooled da wankstas so dont hate jus appreciate :)

Posted by: wind&fire Apr 18 2005, 08:05 PM

*sigh* honeslty does the arrow to jason give anything away????

who the hell are you?

Posted by: Nugget Apr 19 2005, 05:52 AM

Rofl. He's a noooobie.

Jason, please. Just stop it goddamit! YOU don't know the real meaning of hip hop. Sigh.

Posted by: Funky Buddha Apr 19 2005, 02:07 PM

Since when have you EVER known what rap & Hip-Hop was?


You? On top? Jason... you alright?


Spitting abilities drop? As if you have any at all, you steal the, lyrics LMFAO!!
You a real man? Seriously man... are you alright?

Posted by: mzkandi Apr 19 2005, 02:09 PM

HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....NO
better luck next time buddy

Posted by: Cake. Apr 19 2005, 05:14 PM

you say u know hip hop
and rythmes words with punk pop
but you're just a korean boy
why don't you just stop
you think you're so cool
but you just sit there and drool
because you're only 10 and end up the fool
you steal lyrics from others and claim them your own
and sit on your bed playing with yourself while you moan
you try to act tough and maybe gangster
oh, that's right you think you're kangster
you discriminate other people because of their race
but truthfully, everyone hates you so in your face
you try to dress hip hop
with sean john and ecko
but you're just a wannabee, you're never gonna get blown
you're a discrimination to koreans around the world
whenever i see your picture, it makes me want to hurl.



Ew, i don't rap.



Oh, and... http://www.lyricsdownload.com/chamillionaire-nothin-freestyle-lyrics.html

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 19 2005, 07:49 PM

Your rap was more horrible than Jason. You schooled yourself

Posted by: PENtheINSTRUMENT Apr 19 2005, 08:05 PM

c'mon Basick... lol... the number on jersey lines are wack and played the f*ck out... and steve mcnair isn't a multi with fights could air and right is bare and ice cold stare so why you put the squiggly line? iss all good... at least you tryin'...

AND -1-

everyone here is wack...

Posted by: meng Apr 21 2005, 05:44 PM

Yo freestyling is my show.
My raps will make you wanna blow.
Yo you other people suck at rapping.
While you guyz rap, I sit here laughing.
You think your hot, sexy. cute and tuff.
But when im here i own u with a puck.
I'll guarantee to make you jealous.
Because I always come in a pack of groupiaz.
And dont make fun of asians, just cause there
most gangsta'z like you, and dont go around
asking people if you can suck there bobo.
Especially Snoop Dog that just got a f**king
boob job. f*** you jason lil korean
*uck... You think ur a gangsta when
ur not.. try your rapz on da street,
and you'll prbrbobly get f***ed.
And dont come winning to us because you
got f***ked... its ur fault that ur a kinky lil
f***. you try to pull ur pants down, like a real
gangstaaaa, but first i suggest you go train at a
ticket boostaa.

Posted by: Nugget Apr 21 2005, 09:11 PM

^
Right there. I was confused.

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Apr 22 2005, 03:52 AM

im bored. its 1:39AM....

you call that hip hop?
walk around w/ that get your ass chopped
if you ever get on the top
then i'll pray you as a god
but your not
therefore, you can go suck a cock
go f**k yourself alone
if you cant then make yourself a clone
from your words to your phrase
read it through you are a disgrace
like 50cent on interscope
you aint lyrical
now stop discriminating asians
wut are you suppose to be a black cock-asian?
i would tell you to go back but theres no black korea
but you can go back to japan get killed by godzilla
if you think my lines are wack cuz im a chink
well i dont give a f**k about what you think
im not even trying
im just gettin boring

Posted by: wormrapper Apr 23 2005, 01:03 PM

mind if i join?????

if my raps stink its just because im a starter but some are ok

Posted by: wormrapper Apr 23 2005, 01:12 PM

ok this rap is a warmup its not a goodone but its a start

yo,you all are livin at mills though suckin on dildos girls say lets f**k you say not without a cock to suck on like its worms i charge a fine you pay every penny love to sip that henny love to get f**ked in the ass licken the grass that i just peed on its been to f**kin eons your like give me more ill pay extra and let you kick my ass


lol if you like then well cool maybe tell me lol

Posted by: wormrapper Apr 23 2005, 01:14 PM

lol im bored

Posted by: WinterNights2 Apr 23 2005, 07:53 PM

Yo, me KRC, Justin and Some guy were freestyling on Aim today. This is what we came up with.

-Content removed...I've had PM's from people who took this offensivley..-simba-

Posted by: wind&fire Apr 23 2005, 11:52 PM

to wormrapper... the edit button EXISTS!!!!

[edit]
wth you quoted yourself?

Posted by: Jordan Inc. Apr 24 2005, 01:58 AM

label ur pauses! O.O it sounds like its never gonna stop

Posted by: WinterNights2 Apr 24 2005, 11:00 AM

Why do people think the world is strange?
Is it becacuase they're not used to constant change//
everyones arguing over their own selfish needs//
while some of us just want peace and wait for the hate to receed
it's human nature not to want war
but we all know we will fight till we our bloody bodies drop to the floor
were all fighting over what we believe is right
but with all our different opinions it's just a new change every night
some famous person will try to come out of the dark
and some will fade away and tear the world apart
so what we do is we hold our thoughts and hide
but it's true all of the sorrudings are tearing us apart inside
we do what we do and try to look calm on the outside
we all look for a place where we can reside
we all act cheerfull, happy and calm
but we never back down if someone calls us wrong
we always try to prove our point with violence
do me a favor; stop the bloodshed seize
because when were all gone we'll have echocing silence.


Copyright- Winternights 2. Yeah guys that was a freestyle not too good though.

Posted by: meng Apr 24 2005, 08:04 PM

Haha u f**kers
dont know the definition of real rap and hip-hop
sounds more like a wack version of punk pop
yeah jason's on top
you guys hatin on me cuz ur spitting abilities drop
im the real man cmon man










Yo, Jason you f**king kink.
I respect more to a gangsta chink.
I think u really fhk up hip - hop.
By putting up a wack version of punk pop.
Ya, ur right u will be at the top.
And a wannabe niggor will be at buttom spot.
But, if u were really at the top, i would respect u most as a dog.
I suggest you get a plastic surgery,
so u can change ur g&y identity.
Hmm.. i wonder why people run away from you.
is it because ur ugly or ur big a$$ attidude?
Your just a lil boy that tries to fhk yourself
But then ur mom asked to do it for u by herself.
Then u go like " bring it on mom "
Then ur mom says " O ya son, i will chew ur lil wang like a gum."
Jason, im sure u would like it you lil perv3rt3d fhk.
Well gtg now, go have fun and s**k ur own C**k.

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 24 2005, 08:11 PM

Well let me ENTER after WINTER and do a little some-THING

Here I go

Everyone wants to make a little bit of earnings//
Ppl sell they soul and inside they know their burning//
Check my assets and look what i have acquired//
Nothing much but a little bit of knowledge to help me build an empire//
No one wants to correspond to what I already done//
Be a man and stand up while these other brothers run//
B*tch n*ggas Rich n*ggas ,you know its all there//
Racist ppl seem to look at me with a cold-hearted stare//
See Im not your typical instrument to be played like a tool//
Im not your typical n*gga to be made into a fool//
I see no admiration for my abberration as I step outside of life's little portal//
The fact to living is to die and realize were all mortal//
What the f*ck do I spit for if you already heard it//
See I do my flow different even though its reworded//

Posted by: WinterNights2 Apr 25 2005, 06:20 PM

Jason, the 12 year old at the other end of a Dell screen//
Cheats on his nerdy girlfriends more then Charlie Sheen
one of his family died, poor with 15 cents died in a 15,000 dollar hearse
Jason, write your own rhymes, dont steal a line in every verse
being fat won't help your car insurance rates//
stand in Florida you cover all fifty states
unlike you jason my rhymes are original//
i rap so fast you think im rapping subliminal//
i hope if i ever release an audio you'll be listening//
your at a church imitating tha priests touching babies at their christening//
honestly jason, your rhymes are primary and 2-bit
my rhymes hit so hard you think another Tsunami hit
man f*** this, after this you might want to change your religion
Rapping its your failed hobby i take it up as my living
Overall, your rhymes sound like back in the elementary
this battles over, I win your rhymes are 8 feet under in a cemetery
In the christian religion god makes mistakes on purpose
he did this, to tell my genious from your bullshit thats worthless.

Posted by: suddenly she Apr 28 2005, 04:23 PM

i'm not even into this crap but here i am,
trying to rhyme and trying not to spam.
it seems as if this isn't really a game,
but more of a war that's making createblog lame.
the world will be okay if people be themselves,
and life will get better as we improve ourselves.
why can't we suggest instead of insult?
the only thing possible from this is a negative result.

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 28 2005, 05:59 PM

^NICE FLOW but

Suddenly She please stop it//
If you dont like rap why did you click on the topic?//

LOL

Posted by: suddenly she Apr 28 2005, 06:22 PM

^that was quite clever.

because i thought it would be interesting to see, of course.
and even now, i'm anticipating some more..

Posted by: nightmare4taki Apr 29 2005, 10:08 PM

Nonsense past tense thats just how I like to speak//
Technique with Beat For these little Gurly freaks//
Back back give me room and let a nigga come through//
Missy you diss me I move on to the next girl and forget all about you//
Spitting game to these dames while i make my next move//
Dance floor is packed and now i really feel my grove
I dance in the back of shorty until my d*ck gets bigga//
More bottles more liquor for this young ass nigga//
Stretched out laid back but money isn't on my mine//
Just trying to leave with something so i can break her spine//
See these girls and the other brothers aren't any competition//
Because they can all get to stepping like a dance audition//
Rock the beat, rock the crowd , man you know i do it all//
I realize that in order to suceed you must have a fall//
But yet i rise again to prove these doubters all wrong//
Doing it real big while im wording this my song//

Posted by: meng May 1 2005, 07:15 PM

heres a condom, fun times lady.
the guy will be hoping u come in bikinis.
hes gon bang u 24\7
and all u would be hearing is unh,unh till 11.
he gon stuck his huge peenor up ur birdy.
and it will stick out from ur tities.
u would then start socking on it.
then u gon say " this tastes good for a d**k"
I gon try it on my husband some other day.
the next thing u know, you should first think bout what u have to say.

Posted by: Nugget May 1 2005, 10:08 PM

Holy shit. That is un acceptable there man. Why the f**k would you talk about sex you fag.

Edit

Poor, poor Meng,
Only joined to write down his lame ass rap
Sorry honey, try again
Your rap is crap
You talk about sex, this is rated PG-13
What the f**k are you thinkin'?
I'm not trying to be mean
You gotta get this straight man,
Just stop rappin' now
It's over for you man,
i say "Ciao."

Posted by: meng May 2 2005, 04:24 PM

Yo u so called azn ( ( angel ) ).
you look more like a fhaggit chinkle.
y would you care if I talk about se)(.
what, is it cause u can't have se)(?
o i understand, you coulda just said that u were jealous.
lol.. you say my rap is crap?
look at ur sheit it doens't even look like rap.
your raps dont even rthyme.
you would get sued for a rap crime.
dam, ur acturally hot, i would bang u.
but no offense you look more like a fhking jew.
but what dissapoints me is that u got no back.
so i can't fhking slap that ass.
and ur so flat.
that ur afraid to flash.
hmm im sure u would like me to fhk u up.
starting from head to ur small butt.

Posted by: Nugget May 2 2005, 05:45 PM

Haha, you say I can't rap?
I do agree
Honey, I can rhyme
Can you not see?
Look at your shit
Doesn't rhyme at all
I'm only 13 man
I can't suck your small balls
You ain't got shit
And you just say I'ma Jew just to rhyme
Haha, that's ridiculous,
You're outta ya mind
I mean look at you
Tryin' to rap like you all great
Ain't nothing great about what you said
You're gonna need fate
So what I can't rap?
Atleast I say I'm better then you
Shit, just stop what you doin' you "chinkle"
There ain't nothing you can do
Oops, well would ya look at that
I'm outta time
See ya later you loser
Let's see the next rhyme


I do have an ass and boobs thank you.

Posted by: meng May 2 2005, 06:51 PM

yo aznangel you need a fhking bra to make ur boobs look big.
and you try to disguise ur gay self by wearing a wig.
and iam trying to rap cause iam all great.
everything that i say is true but ur sheit is fake.
and ur raps so out dated and they no good.
so dont fhking act like u got them from tha hood.
u get a scar on purpose to show ur private school nerdies.
and u rap cause u so fhking lonely.
man i agree this is true..
that people say i aint black so i shouldn't rap.
but they didnt say i have to be black to tell u that ur raps is wack.
lol im outa my mind and look at me?
lol and i aint got a |)ick?
well whats the thing u been sucking on that lookz like a huge ass stick.
man if u dont understand everything that i say.
go ask ur mom what was in her mouth the other day.

Posted by: Nugget May 2 2005, 07:36 PM

Okay, that's it, you passed the f**king line
Let's just sit back for a minute and rewind
Don't be talking shit bout my ma meng
That shit ain't right
Just cause your d**k IS small
Just get it outta my sight
You can dis me, my ass, and my boobs
But you can NEVER say that shit
You effin' NOOB!
Haha, I guess they are right
I guess you shouldn't "rap"
It's not cause your white
Like I said before, it's crap
Did I ever said I could rap?
No, I don't think I did
What's up with ya head?
Oooh, cause you still a kid!
Who told you about sex?
Was it mama or dad?
Aww, I guess I shouldn't have said that,
It got little meng mad
Do I have to say this again?
Yeah, I guess I do
Your "rap" isn't the greatest
Haha, sucks for you
That's it, I'm done with this shit
No more for me man
That's it.

Okay, that wig part and bra part was just so gay man.
My 'shiet' is 100% real =D
I don't go to a private school

Posted by: nightmare4taki May 2 2005, 07:39 PM

Okay meng I will be the judge and aznagnel4lyfe357 can be the jury//
Now what Im about to give you is twenty bars of fury//
Charge 1, that goes against you is for not being a man//
You already know where the jury stands//
Charge 2 ,for not flowing complete at all//
You had to diss a girl which proves you have no balls//
Charge 3, for not being a gentleman to the lady//
And if you ask me your whole character and demeanor is shady//
Charge 4, should go against me for murdering you without a conscience //
Because after I finish with you people will realize what you say is all nonsense//
I already analyzed your rap fully man//
And if you ask me your nothing but a bully man//
After this battle people will only speak of you in past tense//
Get your head out of your ass and face the consequence//
You don’t even have to be psychic to predict this vision//
Jury have you arrived with your decision//
“Yes let me read it to he that is filthy//
The verdict says for all crimes punishable you are guilty//
How disrespectful and lame of you//
Even your own mama would be a shamed of you//

Posted by: meng May 6 2005, 10:38 PM

Yo yo yo, Mengs a pimp when i get down on da floor.
i get all da hoes all around me yo.
haha they are right i shouldn't rap.
because i do agree my shit is crap.
.. u say im a noob?
wow.. look whos got more blue dots on the noobie jooobz.
nah i wouldn't get mad just for nothing.
but ur mom really pissed me off last night for spazzing.
azn, Who's using big words?
Wearing the shoes with the swoosh.
Kissing ass with smap
Rhymin' with lyrics of crap,
Smokin' way too much cock.
What? Is that a shock?
My rhymes rhyme,
but they sound like shit
i need some more time,
so i'll go on my ass and sit.
Sit back, ((aznangle))
for some simplistic shit
don't make me take this stick
and whack some sense with it
have you seen ma skillz
if you beef,
you’ll be passing those pills
azn, you sound like something I secrete, and if we ever did meet, you'd be flat off your feet,
knocked out, face down on concrete now, do you hear me or am I too loud?
that little bitch named azn that thinks shes a wanksta
Comes here talking shit like he's a gangsta
If he ever did shit he'd be shot for sure
He's nothing but a wanna be *racial slur*
f**k this shit up from a-z
f**k this shit up from 1-3
f**k this shit up you got v.d.
You're going home in pieces if you mess with me

... fhking judge is crap...

Posted by: Nugget May 9 2005, 08:55 PM

That was out there. Meaning, it sucked. =\

Riiiiiiight. Oh, I do not think I'ma "wanksta" nor do I need to be one.

Honey, look at your "raps". They don't rhyme. At like, all.



Nightmare's rap can take you out buddy.

Posted by: N.W.A_PIMP May 13 2005, 02:40 PM

eww nightmare can whop meng??? she can't even rhyme she says the same shit over and over again.. i tthink mengs the best in here..

Posted by: sandy_lumpy_shore May 13 2005, 09:33 PM

some yall can rap but some ya suck
some ya lines make me be like "wat da f**k!?"
meng, you think ya so tough and smooth like jay-z
well you aint got nothin on me.
i cant rap and i can just barely rhyme
but i can be you at rap anytime
you think you the shiznit well your not
rap pg13 not about girls that are hot
talking shit about aznangel4lyfe357 cuz she can rap
all the shit oyu say is f**king crap
nightmare4taki is owning your ass not that its hard
you porbably reading your rap from an index card
N.W.A_PIMP you aint pimp if you think meng can flow
meng is a little mo fo

Posted by: Nugget May 13 2005, 11:20 PM

Haha! I love it ^

Posted by: nightmare4taki May 13 2005, 11:57 PM

Im loving this line


Meng stick to something other than this hip HOP
If you were a oven you couldn’t get this HOT//
I GRIND, and blast this man like ALPINE speakers//
You wouldn’t have a game even if you had Michael Jordan’s sneakers//
You don’t even RHYME, half the TIME, and that should be a CRIME//
I haven’t even heard you spit one decent PUNCHLINE//
Do him WRONG, He cant last LONG, because he’s weak and not that STRONG//
My game is ON, Im in the ZONE, and make you freeze like a snow CONE///
Its been PREDICTED, he’s ADDICTED, to the way I lay it down//
MENG is not the KING of this THING ,so he doesn’t need a crown//
He’s a FREAK, he cant SPEAK properly because he’s WEAK//
He’s going to BURN, You need to LEARN to formulate the proper TECHNIQUE//
Your in the MIST, you no longer EXIST, his name isn’t on the LIST//
No COMPLEXION, He’s headed in the wrong DIRECTION and that’s why he’s PISSED//
I kill his AIM, make him TAME, and f*ck up his RANGE//
No GAME, No BRAIN, he’s nothing but loose CHANGE//
Besides, His flow was an improper DISS//
If he left CB he wouldn’t be MISSED//

Posted by: sandy_lumpy_shore May 14 2005, 11:28 PM

lol. now meng got nothing to say or "rap" yeah lik you can call it rap

Posted by: sw33t_rouge Jun 13 2005, 07:13 AM

jason go f***k
and eat a friken puck
hope you choke and die
and say buh-biii
you dont have creativity n flare
whats wrong hunn did jordan give ya a scare?
ur a wannabe that wants to be like p.diddy
but u have no shiet to be all giddy
are u jealous dat jordan can rap better den u
or are ya just demnted from havin the flu
you, sell boxers on the streets
you dont have dayum nikes to cova ur feet




( thats all ..i can think of )

Posted by: meng Jun 17 2005, 08:27 PM

They call me jr pimp.
cause i walk on a limp
and a cane on my side.
keep girls close liek bonny and clide
o no, i love hoes.
love when they make me dough
o no my girls takling back.
i give her a smack and say bitch what you think about that?
i drive a big pimp cadillac.
with all leather in the lac.
thats why people call me fat.



Verse 2.

I got a perm lik big worm.
Im concerned.
u dont play with my fire.
u gon get burned

Posted by: DaTru KataLYST Jun 28 2005, 12:54 PM

check it
check it
mike check yi er
mike check yi er



checkmate. =]


I abhore rap.

Posted by: Jorge Jun 28 2005, 01:49 PM

israel has some good songs.

Posted by: Paradox of Life Jun 28 2005, 04:00 PM

This is really weird,
And I don't have a beard,
Jason you really suck,
And you overuse the word f**k,
You aren't a gansta,
You're a kangsta,
(which is a wanksta),
I really can't rap,
Dora has a map,
But you're still a dumbass,
Go and eat grass.

An act of boredom.

Posted by: DaTru KataLYST Jun 28 2005, 04:02 PM

be pe me fe
de te ne le
cmon let's fall in love

Posted by: Azarel Jun 28 2005, 09:05 PM

HAHA Nice pinyin. ;p

Posted by: SuperSpam909 Jun 29 2005, 12:10 PM

LMAO this shit is funny as hell//
Even if you were screech you wouldn't be safe by the bell//
Wat trips me out is people who abhore rap post here//
They must really be jealous of how raps been breaking through these years//
I really dont have to get specific//
You hate rap, so what, i think thats terrific//
Sacred music only to those cultures wishing to accepted//
You dont have to like it and you dont have to respect it//
Rap influences everbody especially those who hate it//
They despise how rap dominates when it was once underrated//
They cant get over the fact that its all over the place//
They hate it because its the only music they haven't took from our race//
A little poplocking from the BBOY, Yes you have to love how i give it to them//
But then again maybe you hate rap because it has to much rhythm//
I cant blame you for that but I Appreciate it for the art and what it really is//
Now let me get back to handling my business// Damn.

Pardon me I had to laugh at that.

Posted by: lolita kitty Jun 29 2005, 12:19 PM

im a little white girl, with no rapping skills
i just do it for fun.... if you will
im not here to battle or fight
though thats the point, i think its alright
im just here to watch everyone else go on
ill sit here with my no-skilled self, rappin this song
its kinda funny how i got this far
with a rap so retarted, it could give you a scar
ok whatever, im done for now
this no-rhymin girlie is gone--- so peace out!

no wait, nevermind, this is just too fun
that wasnt enough, im just not done
im enjoying this just a little too much
so let me continue peoples, plz HUSH
i cant rap for beans and i dont flaunt it
im like a girl version of malibus most wanted
but i can at least ryme, ive been to school
dr suess could so whoop your ass, FOOL!
hah! whatever, i could go on forever
something like this could keep us together
alright i promise, ill shut up soon
just let me finish this rap and make you swoon
ok ok ok ...... i guess im done
but dont worry son, this rappin blondie has just begun

so there =]

Posted by: x____duckii Jun 29 2005, 01:47 PM

Yea-yuh, I came back from the room
Yo, kid, you prepared fo yo doom?
On top of yo head, gon' be lil' moons
Dis Jackie rappin'
Now it's happenin'
The way you actin'
Nobody messes wit me,
The one and only,
The great one, Jackie

Jason, you prepared?
Now what, you scared?
You is a kangsta,
but you ain't close to a gangsta,
so you is a wanksta

I f**ked yo mom, bitch
She looked like a damn witch
So I went fo' da ditch,
and went to Abercrombie & Fitch

You is a gangsta, you wish
Yo ass smells like fish
Dicks are yo fav dish
You ain't no hustla,
You is no pimp,
You is no gangsta,
You just a d**k

Posted by: squeegizzle Jul 8 2005, 11:24 AM

look at jackie this fruit who claims shes juicy
she claims shes a gangster
but she stays home watching reruns of i love lucy
she said "i f**ked yo mom" but that would make her a dykee
but i swear she wore my d**k more than i wear my nikes

i dont hate on you cuz youre a girl
i hate on you cuz u think youre the queen of the world
and we all just your peasents
i got 2 middle fingers
those are your presents
your highness
yo smell so bad i swear youre messin up my sinus
when it comes to rappers im just the finest

Posted by: BrandonSaunders Jul 8 2005, 05:09 PM

Competitive styles influenced by garbage
Makes it hard for real skill to be acknowledged
Pay homage to talented swagger
Instead of wack emcees with flows with a stench like lager
Pay attention to each line that rhymes with punchlines
That you and yours attempt to quote and underline
But recognize its mine belonging to the D-O-N
I'm not Jesus but I'm still your beginning and end.

Posted by: Shahin Jul 11 2005, 05:20 PM

I know people have probly said this before me but..Damn man you suck buku ass. Don't even try. Good god.

Posted by: Hiphop d[-_-]b Jul 11 2005, 10:31 PM

im dope
like coke
that was cooked
in the kitchen

Posted by: J-DraGoNz Jul 12 2005, 05:25 AM

just to clarify, you can't freestyle with text, only on the mic. freestyling is when you rap off the top of your head.
I was gonna read all your guys' lyrics then i saw this was 4 pages long and i gave up lol. ill read all the ones after this though.


Yo, here I come; Jay's about to take over this game/
My name's not jason - I don't bring shame to my own name//1
So here I come so sick with the flow/
Spittin' metaphors while rippin' whores everywhere I go//2
And you know son I got the skills and the will/
I'm so ill that I knock ya bustas out like nyquil//3
And I'll kill any emcee that even thinks about steppin' to me/
Ya best be wearin' a vest G before you start testin' me//4
I'm army infantry and I'll put a bullet through your chest/
Like iraqi insurgents; I'll put a machette to your neck//5


bleh, I'm tired and don't feel like finishing lol. next time i write a full 8 bars

Posted by: BrandonSaunders Jul 12 2005, 08:06 AM

I'd go get tested if I were you.

Posted by: J-DraGoNz Jul 12 2005, 08:07 AM

^^ hahahaha

Posted by: BrandonSaunders Jul 12 2005, 08:09 AM

That was a nice rhyme too, but I just couldn't resist squeezing that joke in there.

Posted by: J-DraGoNz Jul 12 2005, 08:14 AM

^ haha thanks, it was a good joke =P

Posted by: J-DraGoNz Jul 12 2005, 09:33 AM

holy shit jason you just got owned. damn how could you bite off someone? especially WORD FOR WORD?

Posted by: wayne Jul 12 2005, 09:45 AM

shorty so seductive dancin' on me...
the way that she move is making me horny
if i wake up next to her in the morning
ima turn over and tell her lets do it again..





..damn im loving that song right now... haha

Posted by: Hell-Rell Jul 12 2005, 09:56 AM

aight G you got this all WRONG freestyling is when you rhyme freely off the top of your head.

When you rap its about something specific like money, cars, life etc....

I think you watch too much 106 and park

Posted by: Hell-Rell Jul 12 2005, 10:03 AM

Oh here I go

I'm not a thief but my theme is a dream
to be the best mc on the scene
not for the cream, I ain't mean i'm nice
an Irish rhymin device
eat mc's like beans and rice
ya can't see me twice, I'm the one and only
if ya see someone like me the must be a phoney
like a city boys shirt in a country boutique - I'm so unique
no one can flow like keith, this ain't a
show of freaks so don't bring ya cameras
unless ya repeatadly sing 'Keithstradamus'
bandanas - I got none, thats not my style
a rhyme - I can drop one with the force of a shotgun it's vile
if ya know dont act in denial
cuz thats a cheaters thing to do - to refuse what is true
dont test me I'm not stupid, nor am I a gangsta
but this is still smooth shit that murderers can move with
ya got that? when i come in contact with combat
I'll spit shit and put Dublin on the Hip-Hop map
gotta stay focused and no go off track
if I fail to prevail I'll pop back
d'ont think it's an act, adapt the fact
I don't interact with people who kiss asses perhaps it's,
cuz my vision is different
when I see a trendy mc I know I'm not equivalent
time fo you to know what
I'm all about and how when I start I wont stop
like an uncontrolled robot,
I'm so hot

Posted by: wayne Jul 12 2005, 11:25 AM

everyone pre writes.. nobody really freestyles anymore

Posted by: WinterNights2 Jul 12 2005, 12:24 PM

Check my sig, my cousin freestyled that shit on the phone yesterday, he's 13.

Posted by: J-DraGoNz Jul 13 2005, 01:58 AM

so is this even a competition anymore? what is this lol

Posted by: nightmare4taki Jul 17 2005, 11:36 PM

Watch these suckers step up and get done//
You wouldn't know talent if you were Elvis's son//
My peoples seek lyrical justice when I Bust this//
If you were MC Hammer, you still couldn't touch this//
I open up the doors for verbal communication//
But if we can't agree, then who will be the one to show dedication//
I make provisions for lost ones who have no hope//
Im climbing up the peak trying not to fall off the slope//
These people take life as one big joke//
Until they staring down a barrel of a gun about to get smoked//
I must profess in this profession my flow is prodigious//
Its a few soldiers in this world, the rest are just bitches//
Just to set the situation correct,
I mean that word out of no harm and no disrespect//
Its just in turbulent times you can't frantic and fret ,
Especially when your the one placing the highest bet//
Im able to bounce back and show great resilience//
Only oustanding achievements will show your brilliance//

Posted by: EriaNight Jul 17 2005, 11:50 PM

I'm a fly chick and i rap day or night
but if you said i wasn't ghetto than you probably are right//
I can drive in the car and park where I like
Cause everyone loves me cause my spinners are tight//
I'm so awful, but I'm like the suburban queen
In my mom's navigator and a rented limosine//
I'm so bad at rapping, but I respect Eminem
Even though I don't really even listen to him...
and I'm so freakin pale and I look so white
That when I'm chilling in the club people use me as a light//

I don't care about drugs- I don't do them "just for fun"
And I don't talk like it's cool to shoot people with a gun
And If you tell me I'm an idiot and really don't know rap
I don't care, violence is wrong; Your ignorance is Cr*p.

***
<33 you guys. That's my two cents. Yeah I know i insulted myself, but really I have a nickname---the girl that I should NEVER rap. EVER.

Posted by: Paradox of Life Jul 18 2005, 02:33 AM

Lmfao, that made me laugh out loud. I'm so weird.

Edit//

I rock peas on my head, but don't call me a peahead,
I got bees on my head, but don't call me a beehead,
I got Bruce Lees on my head, but don't call me a Leehead,
Now please excuse me, I gotta get my tree fed.

- Andy Milonakis

Posted by: J-DraGoNz Jul 18 2005, 02:30 PM

that was pretty dope. some nice multis and metas. rhyme structure was straight.

Posted by: nightmare4taki Jul 24 2006, 11:27 PM

Hold up, let me bring back this topic//
Half these Cbers talk but wont pop it//


//

Posted by: nightmare4taki Aug 7 2006, 05:14 PM

The kid got flow for sho, I challenge suckas like this math//
Fast as lightning, Im enlightened, I took myself down a righteous path//
The gemini, I look down on you Im so high//
Never shy, I move you just like a driveby//
You know the name man, bullets aren't apart of my game plan//
Wordplay like hangman, the one that put these cats to shame man//
THe kid is a big tymer, Let me give you a reminder//
My flow is unforgetful to a person with alzheimer's//

Posted by: lanzur Nov 28 2008, 05:07 PM

yo, i come from New Zealand if you know what i'm feeling,
just because i'm different some people dont consider it,
yea, just cause i'm a Maori, people acting all sorry, na not really, not even jokingly,
every ones all good to every body,
every one acting all nice to any body,
this is the end of my rap and thats a fact.

YEEAA, nah jokes

Posted by: lanzur Nov 28 2008, 05:40 PM

yo really dat true, i didn't even know that, but now i do, so thank you,
i didn't even know the difference between freestyling and raping, but now i do and i can go tell all my best friends,
im raping right now off the top of my head, and saying any word that comes to head,
what do ya think is it alright or is this up tight.

Posted by: ojairus Nov 28 2008, 08:52 PM

wow can someone please tell me who gravedigged this topic?
Stick to talking in the "lounge" cause when it comes to rap just stop it
I've been in a hiatus from the rap game
Seems like noone missed me what a shame.

Posted by: 14adent Oct 8 2010, 02:27 PM

1.2.3 my name is Timbzy dont f*ck with me i am well nown in torqey so dont f*ck with my family i will shot you so dont ever f*ck with me

Posted by: 14adent Oct 8 2010, 02:37 PM

1.2.3 My second name is Timbzy so dont f*ck with me or i will get my hole family or Barton crew or alkum crew i will get my arover i think i am supernover so dont f*ck with me or Anthony on the baet line i will break your back any day of the week.

Posted by: saintsaens Oct 9 2010, 03:42 PM

stack em or rack em whatever it is you gots to pack em
when niggas start starin then with your walk thats how you cap em
real cool so close to being a fool but thas the thin line you walk, f*ck em
to be real there's never ever real contempt in this life ever
and real true joy comes from being contempt for the next life forever ever for ever ever for ever ever for ever ever (kanyewest/outkast foreverever)

forever ever is how you keep going on
mans step and cause is to just keep on
step by step is how you walk and how you progress through the strife o life
just keep going on
just keep going on
land o lakes and i really can't believe it's not butter