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You have the key.
Devastation
post Aug 22 2004, 06:59 PM
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who again?
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for you
my heart
is a lock
you have the key
i have the love
just put it in
and watch
the magic
begin.

So much
laughter
with many
tears
thats just the
beginning
of the
next few
years.

dont wait
to long
because my hear
can only hold
so much
dont let it
slip from you
just imagine
what my love
can do for you.

after all
the dreams
all the searching
i finally
found the
girl i was yearning.

because on
this night
and day
i have found
the love
that will
forever stay.

andrew <3's liz.
 
StarryEyedSurpri...
post Aug 22 2004, 08:51 PM
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*aSh* =]
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bravo bravo! good as always =]
 
sporadic
post Aug 22 2004, 08:52 PM
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and they say imitation is flattering
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Awwwee...

That's sweet ^_^
And zehr gudt.

<33333333
 
NatiMarie
post Aug 22 2004, 08:52 PM
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I can rot your brain ;]
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That's so sweet!
Aww...that's so nice. Smooth reading all the way through.
Good job!
 
LatinaLady
post Aug 22 2004, 09:26 PM
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Look its...
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aww that IS sweet i like it =) *tear*
 
angel-roh
post Aug 23 2004, 12:01 AM
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i'm susan
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happy cry.gif omg that's sucha sweetest poem ever!!! awww that's so cute! you should post this at the poetry.com & enter the poetry contest^^;; ^^ hehe i used to make a poem like that and it was called "the key to my heart" litttle bit different from u cause im a girl and ur a guy hehe... ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
 

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