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Posted by: mipadi Jun 30 2011, 10:35 AM

A couple weekends ago I went to The Met, and saw the painting "The Mountain" by Balthus. It's a huge painting -- 12 ft. x 9 ft., I think. I thought it would be funny if I saved up enough money to buy it, because it wouldn't even fit in my apartment. So I came up with the idea of a short film in which a dude works hard to buy a huge painting, only to find it won't fit in his apartment. Here's an initial draft. It's currently unfinished, but I'll keep posting more as I write it. Critique is welcome. (PDF, so as to retain proper formatting)

Posted by: doodoo Jul 18 2011, 08:13 PM

Sea otter - really good stuff. Reminds me of sunny in philedelphia. Keep going.

Posted by: emberfly Jul 18 2011, 08:44 PM

looooool. More, please. This is going good.