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 Jun 13 2009, 03:01 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll  Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480  |
I ran out of things to add that are Fall-ish. I am procrastinating on the leaves for the tree because I have a feeling it's going to be incredibly monotonous. yeah. It's sad how long I worked o this and there's barely anything there. Ideas and criticism plz. |
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Jun 13 2009, 03:09 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
monotonous
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Jun 13 2009, 03:17 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
Thank you
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Jun 13 2009, 03:21 PM
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I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
something about the orangy color of the tree with the orange of the sky feels weird to me.
YOU NEED A SQUIRREL it looks pretty good over all though, good job. i like the scarecrow and stuff in the back a lot. |
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Jun 13 2009, 03:38 PM
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 Irrisistable Cabbages. Group: Member Posts: 549 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 589,355 |
QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Jun 13 2009, 03:21 PM)  YOU NEED A SQUIRREL |
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Jun 13 2009, 05:21 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Jun 13 2009, 03:21 PM) something about the orangy color of the tree with the orange of the sky feels weird to me. YOU NEED A SQUIRREL it looks pretty good over all though, good job. i like the scarecrow and stuff in the back a lot. That squirrel was harder then it looks mister mister. Idk about the tree, I might try a dark red instead. |
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Jun 13 2009, 05:49 PM
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I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
that's the best squirrel i've ever seen. this will probably be the most popular layout you've ever made because of it. you can thank me later for this.
idk about the tree either. i like it better, but now i kinda don't like the color with the grass. the two different hues are looking awkward to me just like the two oranges did. |
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Jun 13 2009, 10:49 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
uhh...leaves on the ground or a rake? Maybe even some little kids in costumes in the background?
 Idk, looks pretty good to me though. Yeah, try a reddish color for the tree. 
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Jun 14 2009, 06:38 PM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
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Jun 14 2009, 06:50 PM
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I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
yeah i think that looks a lot better.
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Jun 14 2009, 09:15 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
QUOTE(brooklyneast05 @ Jun 14 2009, 07:50 PM) yeah i think that looks a lot better. |
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Jun 15 2009, 03:26 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 339 Joined: Mar 2009 Member No: 721,527 |
The sun is... not perfectly circle? I would try branching out the tree a bit more than just a cloud of leaves on top of the trunk. Some details for bark would be nice too. A kid resting against the trunk with a bag of candies cause he/she just finished trick or treating?
Guys playing football in the background. Some details in the grass. Oh and the fence extended through to the edge of the picture. Ending it before the picture breaks just makes it look isolated, like there's only that and nothing off to the side of it. A farm or barnyard silhouette in the background might help too? Oh and of course leaves floating through the sky, and perhaps more trees if you want that. You can go over the cards I did for the fall for inspiration. I thought long and hard about what events happen in the fall haha. |
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Jun 15 2009, 06:20 AM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,036 Joined: May 2009 Member No: 727,246 |
oooh. i like :)
the squirrel did make a difference. haha |
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Jun 15 2009, 11:44 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Oh wow I liked the edits as I kept scrolling down. I think the colors look great; they give off that "fall" vibe. It looks really cute, Abbey.
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Jun 16 2009, 07:25 PM
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 ♡♡♡♡♡ Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
I think this will turn out well. The owl and mushrooms are cute.
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Jun 24 2009, 12:51 AM
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Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
lol thanks guys. The scarecrow is my fave part so far.
I just went ahead a little and tried to work out what the rollovers will be. The squirrel is a bit mental rite now. |
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Jun 24 2009, 01:42 PM
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Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Haha I like this one better.
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Jun 24 2009, 01:49 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
lol@the squirrel rollover.
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Jun 24 2009, 02:13 PM
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 ٩(͡๏̯͡๏)۶ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,309 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,593 |
wow i really like the progression. keep up the good work abbey!
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