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Digital Self Portrait
adolelolz
post Oct 22 2011, 09:48 AM
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Heyoooo. Haven't been here in forever, but I finished this yesterday and thought I'd ask for some feedbackz.

http://trypho.deviantart.com/#/d4dl6kd

Thanks guys :)
 
emberfly
post Oct 22 2011, 04:52 PM
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Wow! thumbsup.gif
 
Tomates
post Oct 23 2011, 12:53 PM
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That's really good
 
none345678
post Oct 24 2011, 01:42 AM
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The mouth/chin area seems off to me. The rest is pretty good though.
 
fiveseven
post Oct 24 2011, 09:18 AM
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holy crap. a real artist.
 
adolelolz
post Oct 24 2011, 01:36 PM
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QUOTE(spambot @ Oct 23 2011, 10:42 PM) *
The mouth/chin area seems off to me. The rest is pretty good though.


How so? I did have some trouble with that area, but what looks off?
Here's the original photo for reference:
 
none345678
post Oct 24 2011, 05:45 PM
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I think it's the mouth crease/dimple. It seems maybe too dark? I can't really comment too much on it since I can't do portraits to save my life.
 
adolelolz
post Oct 24 2011, 07:58 PM
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Yeah, I see that. I may fix it eventually :P
 
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post Oct 25 2011, 08:59 PM
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Nice job with the details.
 

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