i completely agree, neck looks a bit long.
but as already stated, the rest looks great!!
shading maybe? x
I really love these! Nothing I can say! It doesnt look like you are trying to resemble humans, its just a different style! Keep going and show us the finished product!
ooo nice coloring. something about her nose and chin irks me. i think its the position or structure.
JCP: Thanks :)
Doughnut: Yeah your right the nose is irking me now, The chin is thankfully easy to fix
Thank you love :)
I actually think the long neck looks okay on the left one, it's just the right one that looks a bit abnormal. The thing that bothers me if the position of the mouth. It looks like there is too much face to the right of it.
Other than that, I think it looks fantastic. The coloring especially looks great so far.
I really like the coloring. I don't mind the long necks, but the jaw does look strange.
The longer necks look totally fine to me. What's bugging me are the eyes; they look like they're looking in different directions.
Yeah, what Natalia said. The style's really nice, and I love the colouring.
Oh and yes its more stylism than realism
Thanky you manny :) and Joanne :)
Thankfully all the details you guys are telling me are easily fixed
and when I posted this I definetly noticed the eyes too
Hopefully I can complete this tonite and ill post the finishing look
And im glad you guys like the colouring, I was trying a new technique and i was afraid this would look splitchy
Thank you mike ^__^
I think the mouth is too low on the face, and it extends too far to the left. But other than that, it's great :D
I personally like the drawing, but the only thing that really bothers me is the chin
Ok So i Went back and fixed it up
HOPEFULLY you guys can see the difference, The red arrows are the areas fixed
Now I did the best i could with the eyes, the was the most tricky area to re-fix
and the right neck just ignore because clothing is going to covour that area
Before
After
Able to see a difference?
If there is anything else you think is still iffy tell me
But overall thanks so much for the Critique so-far It looks A LOT better <3
i like the changes. the overall drawing flows much better :D
The chin, nose, and the left cheek (in our perspective) they have pink then white levels.. looks like pimples.
sweet Im glad you guys like it better
Wow it looks a lot better. Nice job, Stef!
.... they're guys?
Ohh, lovely to see an anime/manga artist here. :3
I think you need to work on your anatomy a bit more. What bothered me most was the chin and how flat the face looked. :< The necks are still a bit too long in the sense that it looks like they're missing that muscle between the neck and the shoulders; the neck should be less straight down on both characters. (sorry I don't know anatomy when it comes to terminology). But if it's your style, there's no to need to fix if you don't want to. x]
Otherwise, I see great potential. I love the pastel-type coloring style you have and the artstyle overall. It has a soft appealing to it and the people have nice slender features. Wonderful job!