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 Oct 11 2009, 06:32 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Thoughts plague my mind like sickness plagues a body. Empty one sided conversations leave me thinking thoughts that shouldn’t be thunk. But think them I did. And let my imagination run wild I did. But should thoughts without actions be condemned? No, obviously not; however, the insult of such thoughts stings the same as a slap on the face. And I can’t even begin to imagine what would happen if my body acted out these thoughts of infidelity. Trust would be shattered but does it matter? Yes, obviously so; because lies would slip off the tongue as readily as green means go. And I don’t want to be that type of man and already I can hear my mind say the simplest solution “then don’t.” But the temptation of the body coupled with the crippled thoughts of the mind creates a hailstorm of confusion. I – am physically capable yet mentally unstable. These are the thoughts that plague my mind. What – are yours?
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Dec 15 2009, 02:28 AM
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A couple months late but I wanted to let you know that I enjoyed your poem.
Keep writing. |
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Dec 15 2009, 02:36 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 295 Joined: May 2007 Member No: 521,658 |
Thoughts that I haven’t and will not live up to my potential plague my mind.
Thoughts that I have lost my ability to love and feel cut beneath my spine. Thoughts that I will wallow in self sorrow tear against my soul. Thoughts that this terrible plague will come and go renew me with new hope. |
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