rap competition, no freestyle anymore. Options

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A mod can close the other topic "freestyle competition" because datru was right..that wasnt freestyling..and there's a difference between freestyle and rap, so new clean topic here. RAP COMPETITION.

NEW RULES//: The First 3 Posts Of Their Rap Lyrics, I will read and I will decide who had the best one. FIRST 3

Datru Katalyst is the second judge because i said so lol

jason your rap sucks in every single part
you aint even far enough cuz you a retard
and stop using ur cigar cuz you bustin ur heart
and you smell like fart perhaps you have SARS
your rhymes are lies and this is ur life
every time when i slide i make you cry
and you call that hip hop?
it sounds like a buncha slob from a fob
cant you see you cant ever beat me
i was a real seed raised from the streets
and now that seed's a tree and thats me
you were raised after feeding on pee
and you turned out to be a he-she
dont be mad cuz i called you a she-male
i know you thinkin bout hittin me with a frail
but you are really the one thats going to hell
nobodys buyin ur crack sales and you aint livin well
the next thing you know is that you end up in jail
you tried getting out after bail but then you fail
when you fainally came out from your trail, you turned pale
too much cigarettes got you crawling on the trail
basically this is wut im sayin
is that you are nothing but lame
you dont have a single cell in ur brain
cuz those druggs are giving you pain