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rap competition, no freestyle anymore.
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post Jan 15 2005, 04:19 PM
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A mod can close the other topic "freestyle competition" because datru was right..that wasnt freestyling..and there's a difference between freestyle and rap, so new clean topic here. RAP COMPETITION.

NEW RULES//: The First 3 Posts Of Their Rap Lyrics, I will read and I will decide who had the best one. FIRST 3

Datru Katalyst is the second judge because i said so lol
 
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post Jan 15 2005, 04:22 PM
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What is the difference between rap and freestyling, anyways?
 
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post Jan 15 2005, 04:26 PM
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Freestyling is when you have to spit out the words in like a minute without changing anything..in this case, I know in "freestyle competetition" all of them backspaced. Understand? rap is completely different.
 
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post Jan 15 2005, 06:31 PM
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oh gosh.. not another one of these games..
 
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post Jan 15 2005, 06:32 PM
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yo, my name is leslie
and i can't rap for crap



PICK ME PICK ME
 
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post Jan 15 2005, 07:09 PM
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this is gonna be very entertaining to watch once people start rapping in here.
 
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post Jan 15 2005, 07:12 PM
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Man Jason.... why are you even trying?
 
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post Jan 16 2005, 02:21 AM
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Yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah
Wdup, my name is Jackie
And I'll be here to make cha'll happy
Once I'll give all of this weed
Chu'll be saying "dis is all chu need"
So while you be listening to me rap,
Chu'll be waitin fo me to take a crap


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post Jan 16 2005, 12:25 PM
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QUOTE(x____duckii @ Jan 15 2005, 11:21 PM)
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah
Wdup, my name is Jackie
And I'll be here to make cha'll happy
Once I'll give all of this weed
Chu'll be saying "dis is all chu need"
So while you be listening to me rap,
Chu'll be waitin fo me to take a crap
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haha.. good try. we need pro rappers in here, lol.
 
post Jan 16 2005, 07:35 PM
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QUOTE
Yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah
Wdup, my name is Jackie
And I'll be here to make cha'll happy
Once I'll give all of this weed
Chu'll be saying "dis is all chu need"
So while you be listening to me rap,
Chu'll be waitin fo me to take a crap


i need no weed nor any ecstasy
anyday you'd be taken down lyrically
next time when you see me on the street
you'd be beggin for mercy like im the police
get down below my knee and kiss my feet do anything to please me
you'd be sorry to ever meet me
you'd be teased in your own sleep
 
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post Jan 16 2005, 08:50 PM
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QUOTE(Jordan Inc. @ Jan 16 2005, 4:35 PM)
i need no weed nor any ecstasy
anyday you'd be taken down lyrically
next time when you see me on the street
you'd be beggin for mercy like im the police
get down below my knee and kiss my feet do anything to please me
you'd be sorry to ever meet me
you'd be teased in your own sleep
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the first 3 lines were good, but i didn't get the last lines.
 
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post Jan 17 2005, 09:15 PM
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QUOTE(Jordan Inc. @ Jan 16 2005, 7:35 PM)
i need no weed nor any ecstasy
anyday you'd be taken down lyrically
next time when you see me on the street
you'd be beggin for mercy like im the police
get down below my knee and kiss my feet do anything to please me
you'd be sorry to ever meet me
you'd be teased in your own sleep
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damn you pimp, your gettin on my good side
but i aint gona kiss you dumb a$$ feet so step aside
new sherrif in town so watch your back
take your cheap a$$ drugs and get yur head out da crack
i aint gona say it again
or u'll be in real pain tonight

ha. stupid asian rapping.
 
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post Jan 17 2005, 10:33 PM
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woa... im glad i quit rapping for asian pop and r&b. this doesn't even sound intense anymore.
 
post Jan 18 2005, 02:29 AM
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QUOTE(blowpops69 @ Jan 17 2005, 7:15 PM)
damn you pimp, your gettin on my good side
but i aint gona kiss you dumb a$$ feet so step aside
new sherrif in town so watch your back
take your cheap a$$ drugs and get yur head out da crack
i aint gona say it again
or u'll be in real pain tonight

ha. stupid asian rapping.
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tonight you be staying asleep under R.I.P being loney
i dont really wanna see you as a zombie, homie
cuz obviously you are way too ugly for me to see
your skin is horny green it looks like seaweed
go pick up a copy of a CD from jay-z
maybe you can learn a little sometin
shit blows up your brain insane
you'll kno that hip hops a game thats off the chain
its only for ppl with rhymes in their vains
so quit being lame, w/e you do nothins gonna change
so what do you do you when get bored at home?
PLAY Jordan Inc. Grand Theft Auto!
its only 39.00 so get your sh*t now or no
its the same price even at gamestop
if you cant efford it then get a job!
hop your way like a fob to the block
find that place mcdonalds and ask for a job
you can flip a burger thats better than jack's
hello sir, may i order a big mac?

i dunno, my head hurts
 
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post Jan 18 2005, 05:29 PM
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QUOTE(Jordan Inc. @ Jan 18 2005, 2:29 AM)
tonight you be staying asleep under R.I.P being loney
i dont really wanna see you as a zombie, homie
cuz obviously you are way too ugly for me to see
your skin is horny green it looks like seaweed
go pick up a copy of a CD from jay-z
maybe you can learn a little sometin
shit blows up your brain insane
you'll kno that hip hops a game thats off the chain
its only for ppl with rhymes in their vains
so quit being lame, w/e you do nothins gonna change
so what do you do you when get bored at home?
PLAY Jordan Inc. Grand Theft Auto!
its only 39.00 so get your sh*t now or no
its the same price even at gamestop
if you cant efford it then get a job!
hop your way like a fob to the block
find that place mcdonalds and ask for a job
you can flip a burger thats better than jack's
hello sir, may i order a big mac?

i dunno, my head hurts
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Man Jordan shut up you little chink
stop frontin while you runnin
didnt xzibit tell you to pimp your ass?
ha stop mean muggin
i got my magnum rifle
to shoot your ass flyin
dude stop lyin about shit
imma get crunk
make you all drunk
man stop da f**king funk
like your a purple haired punk
your just like a titanic shit that sunk
your banana as f**k
and i rap for bucks
im rappin in da stage
earning cash
while ya beggin for cash
go grab a good charlotte cd
to get ur punk ass leakin
man get some real stuff
imma hunt you down with my murda sight
 
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post Jan 18 2005, 05:31 PM
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i like how everyones just changing the words and making these raps up while if any rapper actually used it with the right beat, theyd be millionaires.

as for me, im cuban and i dont play like that, ya hurd?! XD
 
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post Jan 18 2005, 10:08 PM
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QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jan 18 2005, 2:29 PM)
Man Jordan shut up you little chink
stop frontin while you runnin
didnt xzibit tell you to pimp your ass?
ha stop mean muggin
i got my magnum rifle
to shoot your ass flyin
dude stop lyin about shit
imma get crunk
make you all drunk
man stop da f**king funk
like your a purple haired punk
your just like a titanic shit that sunk
your banana as f**k
and i rap for bucks
im rappin in da stage
earning cash
while ya beggin for cash
go grab a good charlotte cd
to get ur punk ass leakin
man get some real stuff
imma hunt you down with my murda sight
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i didn't like that rhyming, no offense. constructive criticism fact 1: using the same letters unk too much. i dont like it. jordan's lines own this whole verse.

QUOTE(delightfullyinsane @ Jan 18 2005, 2:31 PM)
i like how everyones just changing the words and making these raps up while if any rapper actually used it with the right beat, theyd be millionaires.

as for me, im cuban and i dont play like that, ya hurd?! XD
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LOL! hahahahaha, changing the words.... nahhh... so far, i dont see any that many good lines here so i doubt this kind of rhyming can make them millionares.
 
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post Jan 18 2005, 10:16 PM
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QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Jan 19 2005, 9:29 AM)
Man Jordan shut up you little chink
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you're a disgrace to our race...
 
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post Jan 19 2005, 10:03 PM
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okay. i cant believe yall are taking these seriously. geebus.
 
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post Jan 19 2005, 10:22 PM
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mmmmhmmm.. hip-hop has changed everybody, so look what happened.
 
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post Jan 19 2005, 10:44 PM
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yo jason man you a disgrace to our race//
take that gun in your avatar and point it to your face//
end ya life now, no, juss end your rap game//
put yo fingers round yo d**k and stick with that "wrap" game//
those lines were hella whack, i know why you made this thread//
so you can takes some notes on me and dread//
that you cant be good as me, what's your interest in hip hop ?//
take s'more notes and on tha stage flip-flop//


well, gotta get back to homework .. juss browsin this place and juss couldn't resist ... heh .. i'll be back ..
 
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post Jan 19 2005, 10:46 PM
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jasons asian? *shocked*
 
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post Jan 19 2005, 11:06 PM
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QUOTE(jnukes @ Jan 19 2005, 7:44 PM)
yo jason man you a disgrace to our race//
take that gun in your avatar and point it to your face//
end ya life now, no, juss end your rap game//
put yo fingers round yo d**k and stick with that "wrap" game//
those lines were hella whack, i know why you made this thread//
so you can takes some notes on me and dread//
that you cant be good as me, what's your interest in hip hop ?//
take s'more notes and on tha stage flip-flop//
well, gotta get back to homework .. juss browsin this place and juss couldn't resist ... heh .. i'll be back ..
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woa.... i gotta admit, even though that rhyming wasn't good, it owned jason's rhyming, LOL!!!

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yeahhh
 
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post Jan 21 2005, 06:32 PM
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QUOTE(blowpops69 @ Jan 20 2005, 2:46 PM)
jasons asian? *shocked*
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post Jan 21 2005, 07:47 PM
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jason your rap sucks in every single part
you aint even far enough cuz you a retard
and stop using ur cigar cuz you bustin ur heart
and you smell like fart perhaps you have SARS
your rhymes are lies and this is ur life
every time when i slide i make you cry
and you call that hip hop?
it sounds like a buncha slob from a fob
cant you see you cant ever beat me
i was a real seed raised from the streets
and now that seed's a tree and thats me
you were raised after feeding on pee
and you turned out to be a he-she
dont be mad cuz i called you a she-male
i know you thinkin bout hittin me with a frail
but you are really the one thats going to hell
nobodys buyin ur crack sales and you aint livin well
the next thing you know is that you end up in jail
you tried getting out after bail but then you fail
when you fainally came out from your trail, you turned pale
too much cigarettes got you crawling on the trail
basically this is wut im sayin
is that you are nothing but lame
you dont have a single cell in ur brain
cuz those druggs are giving you pain
 

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