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My Myspace Layout
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post Jun 17 2010, 01:34 PM
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Keep it, trash it, fix it?
i changemy lyt often, so not worried about it.
whatcha think?
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post Jun 17 2010, 02:51 PM
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post Jun 17 2010, 03:40 PM
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QUOTE(ButtsexV2 @ Jun 17 2010, 03:51 PM) *
wat

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post Jun 17 2010, 11:42 PM
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QUOTE(ButtsexV2 @ Jun 17 2010, 03:51 PM) *
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post Jun 18 2010, 02:38 AM
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To be honest, nothing in this layout really matches, especially the teddy bear. What kind of look were you going for?
 
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post Jun 18 2010, 08:24 AM
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that about me section with the blood oozing out is VERY hard to read with what you wrote, plus the font describing about you makes it even harder for this type of background. i personally don't like the layout, but with a couple fix ups and tweaks the layout would look decent.


i recommend reworking the whole about me section, making the navigation section more appealing, and overall just making the whole layout look more appealing.
 
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post Jun 18 2010, 12:37 PM
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howz tht fer teh about me section.
&& i cnt really thnk of anyfinqq to do fer the networking section right now, any suggestions?
also, i wasn't really going for anything.
i just saw the E3 trailer for the game and liked it, so i made this.
 
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post Jun 19 2010, 06:06 PM
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post Jun 19 2010, 06:36 PM
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QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Jun 19 2010, 07:06 PM) *
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thxx fer teh adviice.
 
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post Jun 19 2010, 07:30 PM
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QUOTE(xxrawralexxrawrxx @ Jun 19 2010, 07:36 PM) *
thxx fer teh adviice.

Anytime.
 
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post Jun 19 2010, 07:51 PM
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QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Jun 19 2010, 08:30 PM) *
Anytime.

btw, is thurr anyfinqq specifik yew thnk i shood fixx?
 
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post Jun 20 2010, 12:08 AM
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QUOTE(xxrawralexxrawrxx @ Jun 19 2010, 08:51 PM) *
btw, is thurr anyfinqq specifik yew thnk i shood fixx?

The way you type, the font used, where your positioning the text, the image, the content area, the navigation, how the navigation is set up, the consistency of the layout and relevance to all the other parts of it (i.e. - not random, like a teddy bear... oh, wait), and image quality (specifically the background). Okay, it's not bad, but it can be definitely better. Way better.
 
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post Jun 22 2010, 10:52 AM
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the bear wasn't supposed to stand out,
and thatz not a credit.
 
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post Jun 22 2010, 12:11 PM
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QUOTE(xxrawralexxrawrxx @ Jun 19 2010, 08:51 PM) *
btw, is thurr anyfinqq specifik yew thnk i shood fixx?

YOUR SPELLING AND GRAMMAR!

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post Jun 23 2010, 08:31 AM
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QUOTE(Christy @ Jun 22 2010, 05:48 PM) *
the bear does stand out, it being one of the two only coloured things in the whole thing.
& if it's not credit than, what is it? just some random text ?


i meant it was supposed to stand out,
and its a link to a myspace train.
 
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post Jun 23 2010, 01:30 PM
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But the way you made the bear stand out is hideous. And are you sure there's nowhere else to put that Myspace train link?
 
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post Jun 23 2010, 01:44 PM
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QUOTE(Mikeplyts @ Jun 23 2010, 02:30 PM) *
But the way you made the bear stand out is hideous. And are you sure there's nowhere else to put that Myspace train link?

nah it doeznt haz ta b roote thuurr.
 

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