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 May 16 2010, 05:59 PM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth  Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459  |
http://fragmentx.livejournal.com/13696.html#cutid1
something in a while. While you're at it, check out my new layout. ( http://fragmentx.livejournal.com ) c+c & comments. |
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May 16 2010, 07:26 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
My favorite was #6, because the textures were very pretty and the subject is used in the right place, coloring, etc..
i def. love how you know how to use text properly. i find it hard to add text to my icons because i want to make the text noticeable, but i also don't want the text to overpower the actual image itself. my only complaint would have to be the colorings you applied. some turned out pretty and breath taking(for example icon #4), while others turn a bit..bleach-ish for my taste(icons #12&16). layout looks okay, but i don't like the text itself. mess around with the spacing, styles, line-height, etc. make use of those purple table bars. |
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May 17 2010, 01:54 PM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
QUOTE(Cum @ May 16 2010, 08:26 PM)  layout looks okay, but i don't like the text itself. mess around with the spacing, styles, line-height, etc. make use of those purple table bars. the purple bar at the top? I think improved with text placement on icons, bc text and I never worked out. =] |
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May 17 2010, 05:45 PM
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Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
no the purple bar for the title of every of your post.
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May 17 2010, 10:07 PM
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Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
well that just to set the title apart from the rest.
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May 19 2010, 09:33 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
I pretty much agree with Beenly's critique. Just work on your coloring techniques. Your work tends to have a lot going on in it but it's not too much which is good.
As for the layout, it's pretty but the coloring you used on Kristin isn't so flattering imo and it's misaligned for me (using Safari). |
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