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Edie Sedgwick Banner
vogueXdirge
post Apr 7 2008, 11:09 PM
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Just made a Edie Sedgwick banner. It took me quite sometime, due to the fact that I was trying new things. Overall I'm quite proud of it, I think it turned out very pretty.



Positive and constructive feedback would be adored.
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Melie
post Apr 7 2008, 11:52 PM
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it's pretty dark the images of her...you can barely make out who it is if her name wasn't there. you might want to lighten the images up.
 
Relentless
post Apr 8 2008, 12:04 AM
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The coloring looks great but the middle near the left, I find it way too dark. Other then that, it looks nice.
 
vintage-toile
post Apr 8 2008, 05:34 AM
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i agree with everyone that it is a bit too dark, i had to strain my eyes a little at first..
i like the font you've used though and the glow is very nice.. just a bit too bright on such a dark canvas.
 
absinthe
post Apr 8 2008, 11:26 AM
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The two main images are way too dark, and the light line in between them both kinda cuts the image and kills the movement.
 
mizzkewl06
post Apr 8 2008, 11:28 AM
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i agree with everyone else about the two main images being too dark... but the idea you had going there is cute and the blending is nicely done. very simple and classy. happy.gif
 

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