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 Sep 13 2005, 06:21 PM
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mood: content  Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325  |
 NOT FINISHED YET, AS YOU CAN SEEE. I mixed up the colors of the actual picture. But can you guess who it is? I need to add a body, add hair and lip detail, and add an eye. Open to critique but no "Omg, so ugly!!!" And no "more layers" because I have enough layers but I'm using subtle shading. ...And can you help me think of a better title? Okay, I'm done. I managed to fit in some time for this between all my homework. It didn't come out exactly how I wanted, but you know, I'm done with it, never going back, finito.  Tips anyone? No criticism since I'm not going back, just tips for my next vector. Well... I guess that's sort of criticism. Bah, go wild. This post has been edited by mocassinsx29: Sep 17 2005, 01:53 AM |
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Sep 13 2005, 06:49 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 280 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 104,125 |
Oh, I really like this so far! I can't wait to see it when it's finished!
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Sep 13 2005, 07:33 PM
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 Laugh til' it hurts Group: Member Posts: 107 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 199,709 |
I like it too. nice shading technique.
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Sep 13 2005, 07:35 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 6,953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 52,702 |
I see.....Avril Lagvine?
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| *StanleyThePanda* |
Sep 13 2005, 08:17 PM
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Is it Avril?
anyways, I think it looks awesome  cause wait to see it finished |
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Sep 13 2005, 08:33 PM
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 ;) Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,573 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,124 |
You did a great job on the skin and hair! Can't wait to see the finished product...
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Sep 13 2005, 08:39 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 479 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 223,199 |
Wow! Amazing! ^_^
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Sep 13 2005, 08:41 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 479 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 223,199 |
Wow! Amazing! ^_^
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Sep 13 2005, 08:41 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 479 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 223,199 |
i have no idea why that appeated twice...
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Sep 13 2005, 09:05 PM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
^ You can edit posts with the [edit] button on top of each of them. :)
And you guessed it, it's Avril. >_< Thanks for the comments! 
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Sep 13 2005, 10:56 PM
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 Peggy. Group: Member Posts: 2,508 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 214,025 |
It's really nice. Keep on with the good work.
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Sep 14 2005, 12:38 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 545 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 70,103 |
wow it looks GREAT so far! it looks like avril to me!
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Sep 14 2005, 08:48 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
mm..yeah, it does look like avril. good job with the shading. i like it.
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Sep 14 2005, 09:36 AM
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 RAWR. Group: Member Posts: 2,585 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,641 |
yeah, I don't see avril, but maybe thats because I don't like looking at avril, but I do like the vector. It looks pretty good! The iris and the pupil however seem like they need work. More depth and some light detail, but maybe you just arent done yet. so yeah. Looks great :D
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Sep 14 2005, 04:39 PM
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 I love you more than sex appeal. Group: Member Posts: 3,045 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 52,932 |
Whoa, nice vector. I like the hair. I can't really think of a title....I cant see what would go with it. Nice work tho
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Sep 16 2005, 08:02 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
It's great so far!
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Sep 17 2005, 01:56 AM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
Okay, updated! I guess it doesn't look like Avril exactly because I got rid of her thick layer of black eye crap and made it smaller. Hrm...
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Sep 17 2005, 08:10 AM
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 -Officially Insane- Group: Member Posts: 870 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 117,293 |
The left eye (her right) looks a little small, & there could be some more contrast in the skin, but it looks great! Avril, isn't it?
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Sep 17 2005, 06:34 PM
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 xXxXxbErRyZxXxXx Group: Member Posts: 190 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 235,812 |
awww... im so jealous!!!! pretty vector!!!
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Sep 18 2005, 10:02 AM
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 unify and defeat... divide and crumble Group: Member Posts: 2,759 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,379 |
Nice, her right eye is kind of wonky, and it would be good to add more depth in the hair and the shirt
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Sep 18 2005, 10:19 AM
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 The Noob Group: Member Posts: 575 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 169,647 |
it loox really nice
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Sep 18 2005, 10:58 AM
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yerp! Group: Member Posts: 3,489 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,454 |
Ooh, that's awesome. She looks really "cartoony" in comparison to other vectors.
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Sep 18 2005, 12:08 PM
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mood: content Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
QUOTE(mai_z @ Sep 18 2005, 10:02 AM) Nice, her right eye is kind of wonky, and it would be good to add more depth in the hair and the shirt  The shirt was completely black, so I couldn't see much detail. :( I added that little wrinkle from my imagination, rofl. I agree about the right eye though, it was covered with so much eye shadow and I didn't know how to make up the blank space, so it came out looking weirdish... 
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Sep 18 2005, 12:13 PM
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I like it! Her right eye is a little small, though. You can't really see the nose...it looks like it's just skin. Other than those 2 things, I love it. I like the outline.
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Sep 18 2005, 10:13 PM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
it's ok.
The lips are weird. There should be a line seperates the top from the bottom. Plus the top one should be darker. The nose seems like it missing something. The left eye, too. I know it's from a turned-perspective. |
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